Should i re-write my FF in a better and a more complete way ?

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Should i re-write My Mental Love ?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys ! 😃

i have been thinking quite a bit and i wanted to ask about what u think about me re-writing My Mental Love and before u skip to closing the tab or voting first, i want u to read this post entirely and carefully please😳

For those who are wondering what i am talking about, let me explain, i had written an FF on AsYa entitled My Mental Love (plot below for the curious ones😉) which was loved by a lot of people but now that i am reading it again, i can see where i did lots of mistakes and now i understand when people say that i have grown a lot as a writer because i can see it by myself while reading my previous works that they are not as much as worked as my present works and on top of that i had rushed to finish it because of my studies so i had not given it the proper ending.

Hence i would like to write it again and of course it would NOT take a lot of time in me updating because the parts are already written and only need to be edited a little and then writing the few last parts😳 so i can perfectly continue writing my on-going FF : Kya Hua Tera Vaada... while updating My Mental Love too😉

For those wondering about the plot, here u go 😉 (same for those who have already followed the story)

Plot:
so this is the story of psychiatrist Asad Ahmed Khan who works in a hospital and there comes Zoya getting admitted because she has the state of mind of an 8 years old girl but later when Asad bonds with Zoya, he realizes that she's pregnant and somehow to take care of her, he ends up marrying her to protect her and stop people from raising fingers at Zoya and her future child and brings her to his home where lives Dilshad and Najma. here their story begins and goes on journey with laughs, innocence, sadness, anger, cries, u will see that this story has many facets.

For the people concerned about this being a depressing story, it is not, indeed u will see sad times, it goes off from a very sensitive topic but this is more the story of Zoya's growth as a person and their love story.
u will love Asad's protectiveness and will just want to hug Zoya for her cuteness.

Yes : u want me to re-write the story by editing it a little as i said

No : u don't want me to re-write it

Depends : u r unsure about it and have doubts but if u cllick this button please explain me it depends on what😆

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anopama thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I always wanted to reread this story
But I always held myself back
For reason beyond my knowledge
But if u will edit and add a few more chapters for a better ending
I will be happy to read again
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anopama

I always wanted to reread this story

But I always held myself back
For reason beyond my knowledge
But if u will edit and add a few more chapters for a better ending
I will be happy to read again


Haha i know what u mean, even i felt that i wrote the story a little plainly without giving it my full but this time i intend to change that, i'll take each and every chapter and re-write them in a 'better' way to captivate u more ! 😉
Thanks for the vote Anopama ! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I. Would love to read this
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Would love to read it again... I really love this ff already, so I m very much excited to read an improved n better version of it...!!!
Start it Soonish...!!!
Edited by Amina... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Would love to Read it Again...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Bano i read this FF more than four time
and during this ff i came to know about you
but sad thing that i was not a member then
but honestly i did not find any fault that time except the last two parts
if you want to edit it then go for it
honestly i want you to re post the few last parts of Hidden Love bcs you rushed to end this ss so soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I just loved this story..n would luv to reread it ...with the best possible ending ( like u said ,)
So y pls write n post ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I ws sad bcz it hd a rush ending.tbh i wntd more 4m lst chaps aftr asya's convo.so yes m all ready 2re read it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Would definitly love to reread the FF

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