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Originally posted by: sasir

Loved it.

thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: aleenaansari

Lovely update...
Waiting 4 der wedding...
Update soon

I am afraid, I may upset you by tripping down the wedding in jst few lines... I dnt know how to write ceremonies -_-

I will write dramatic reception though haha


Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: anuv6

LUVD it so so much...
ASYA... smoking hot.,
fantabulous nd freaking awesome update... ; no words to say
asad's intense confession , his possessiveness, protectiveness , just WOWW...i cant get them out of my mind;
nd u end the update with a tease ...writers!!!!
the way of written ...so damn gud; it made me to read the story as again nd again, really cant get enough.
update sooon na;
cant wait to knw wat'll happen nxt

Yes Aaah the writers and their cliffs -_- there r no cliffs here though lol!!! This is jst preview you may precisely get more tehehe


glad u read it again & again!

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

First of all,Happy Diwali..Dear..😊

It was Amazing Part.😊

The Banner on ASYA(KABHI) was Awesome,Thanks toFleurdelice-/Sanskruti and you too.😊

Zoya feelings on Asad(KSG) behaviour was so Interestingly explained.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Conversation about their Wedding was so Interesting.😊

Zoya comments Esha about her Stories was so nice.😊

This Esha😡was Just disgusting.

Asad(KSG) sudden Confession to Zoya about his Feelings was so Lovely.😳

ASYA(KABHI) Kiss and Naughty Talks was so Romantic.😳

Precap was so Interesting,ASYA(KABHI) Wedding and First Night..Waiting for it..😳

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

wish you had a great Diwali Priya :-)

your comment so makes me smile cos you connect some tiny dots and summarize each and every twist, thanks a lot!

Will we get an update soon?

Started writing, hopefully will update soon!

Originally posted by: Sneha8337

Amazing

Plz update soon

thanks
Will update as time permits

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

Interesting story line
Asad gets dumped
His ex tries to taunt him at every given opportunity
He's see zoya stand up to the witch
N he immediately likes what he sees
He proposes her father in his own arrogant style
Both the ex n her friend tries to convince her he's only using her for payback
Want to believe him when he says hes not using her he's just very possessive n wants her to be his but still think might be wee bit of payback attached
The kiss was explosive
Waiting to see what happens next
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Thanks a lot for such detailed comment Heatsha:-) you have so beautifully summarized whatever u read it ws like a quick recap and I truly appreciate it!

Thanks again :-)

Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

So asad agressive behavior wasnt towards zoya

It was for zoya

He wants her all to himself and dont give a damn abt f@mily or others

Esha gotnput in her place ny asad un such a nice way

A dance

Aw the word WANT is expressed by both

Zoya feels desire and would asad be feeling tht soon

Love thw ' kisses

Hope he keeps teaxhing her to perfect it

Hope thw precap is a good one especially the SR

Cont soon

yeah both r young beautiful and warm blooded humans nd r equally attracted, let's see what happens :-)

Originally posted by: MOnkEy_rAngEr

Firstly a verrryyy HPpy DiwAli

Coming to update

It was super duper awsm

Zoya tried to make Asad jealous

Their first kiss

Esha poor grl

Waiting for the wedding

PLZ continue soon :-))

Hope u had a fine Diwali!
glad u noticed whatever I wrote... Thanks sweetie :-)