AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 52

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

109.6k

Users

33

Likes

2.1k

Frequent Posters

DailyDaisy thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anuv6

WHAT ??
U R such a tease, i cant believe this,
waiting for a long awesome update nd only got a teaser which makes me more mad than before... :(
u cant do this...update na



😆 I gave the teaser bcuz @always_asya requested me to as the wait for the next part was long and there was still time for me to update! Guys I'm trying my best to give the update but I haven't finished yet! It's SOOO long..45 pages and counting! Min 2 hafte to banta hai na. Like I said before please be patient I will try my best to give it by the weekend or early next week. I use every free minute to write for you guys but if I rush it I won't be happy with the outcome and neither will you..sabr ka phal meetha hota hai ya'll 😆
Edited by DailyDaisy - 8 years ago
DailyDaisy thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cancerian111

Hi.again appreciating ur work.again lil effort to reply to ur post by ds not so purely silent reader (thnx to ur writing skills for ds).nice updates all of them.eagerly waiting for ur updates but after this teaser my silent reader devil activated.nice teaser many thnx to u and always_asya for encourage u a lot for ds.great effort always asya...keep continue ds kind of efforts which result in awesum teasers like ds.daisy madam I guess first teaser hav to do wd sameer or something big happened in uni.and 2nd teaser linked wd asad bike or guitar lets c what u actually composed.plz update soon I knw it's very difficult for u to gv excellent long updates but ye selfish addiction for ur updates increasing day by day.



😳 LOl!! Thanks for commenting! You shouldn't be a silent reader At All!! Comment regularly please! Glad you liked the teaser! Update will be even better! Hmm you may be right about the first but second wala..Lets just wait and see 😆 Will update soonish! I completely understand you guys and how hard it is to wait for something trust me I get it which is why I give me 300% to try and get these updates to you so soon. Good Good let the addiction increase 😆 Hope you enjoy 15 when its up!
Edited by DailyDaisy - 8 years ago
anopama thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
Unres
Mohab 15
Finally I can read
Demons demons demons of the past
Asad can never have a peaceful sleep always something waiting in thw shadows
Zoya is she his soothing effect his calm
Her anxiousness on feeling him but not seeing him drives her mad
Loved how asad cry for help reached zoya ear in her sleep causing her to wake.
Omg did asad give up on zoya she broke metal and no lash out from him
Good talk zain give to azlan of naina and throw asad in the mix but still azlan heart is clueless
When would a mother worry ever stop for her children especially dilshad seeong her son tortured features
Glad for the smile on asad face seeing zoya in glasses but her sadness he cant handle he can fight the world for her happiness
Black and bitter sweet and creamy their drinks describe both of them they both need tht swap
He is enarmoured by her cant control what tht heart wants tht pull to her
But asad the heart know y it is pulling u to her
Omg the khan khandaan has branch out to seek help and understanding from asad
Rashid is a darpok for real
Glad asad showed them out without a word
Omg thank god anaya didnt witness to ahil and aisha
Asad behavior was justified for a god damn lengha for 25 yrs they didnt seek them out but now he has seen them all in less than 25 days looking for their help
Dilshad said right to suleman when u can give me back my son then u will be forgiven
Zoya Farooqui can do anything and she intend to make jahapanah smile or even laugh her promise to her phuphi
Azlan bribery works every time especially if the person loves u
He is so jealous and clueless
Asad song so amp for him and his voice was able to stop zoya from cutting
Y am i getting a fear tht this haunted screams of girl tht has asad like this may be zoya as her incident happen 7 yrs ago
Yyy it just ripped my heart I am crying with asya as he sang and she listened too and cry
Aww asad the urge to run after her to face the challenge but how can u give in so easily but then the tally on his prestine home had me... lmao
Glad asad tried zoya excercise by himself and felt the relief
It is so interested to see how the haveli is so interested in asad life and they r thr reason it was ruin in thr first place
cant wait for tht to unfold
Azlan reaction definitely a girl came in between the brothers
So zoya ammi went ro same college bur hiw she knows tht thought she dont know her ammi and she is looking for her abu but where she got the pics info etc
Hindi is killing me plz at least put asya convo in english plz.plz
Sameer nasty disgusting creature cant wait for asad to get his hands on u
Humera awww can I strangle her judgemental much
Azlan reaction to his mother outburst shireen always a mean sonofabitch Y the hell hr angry on asad they snatched away from asad not the other way around
Anaya need to grow some balls and walk away from tht proposal bcuz the man us smitten by someone else and it is none other than her sister and tht would be another insult on the family to blame asad and dilshad
Thought asad knew zoya work at cafe ...if only dilshad know kuch kuch already happen to asad for the cafe wali
A crying zoya a worried asad
Are you ok he didnt walk away he left a note awww
Cant wait for asya together so asad could stop Zoya from hurting herself
Awww a perfect tally she was happy he tried her notion she coould help him heal
Really azlan took ur anger on pari
Asad might have just killed him if he stayed and hash it out
But these bros need to sit and talk and clear all MU and the biggest one seems to be pari mother
Love arselan surprise visit Oh god judgmental humera seeing zoya with more guys at rogue
So she is there to impress ayaan but ayaan is ayaan asked for naina
But her seducing dancr worked for her he bite the bait but her night was left hanging
Asad intense eyes on Zoya he was plz she was smiling her worry for him and his pain even though she hate his arrogance she want to see him like tht always not forlorn
Even I am wondering abt tht smile will it be slight or would it be the bhang wala grin
Aww but the asya contact in rogue was so much better than a dance for now
So much peace passion desire and much much more love how zoya didnt flinch at his touch his contact she needed it to feel alive and him he just forgets everything with her even she the same in her he sees life he is not a living corpse with her
From the time I reached to the rogue section in chap I was just anticipating asya promised dance I was like so on edge but it never happened
But she did dare him but he refused bcuz it might have ended more than dancing
But love him dj for her and her dancing her worries away and his torturous thoughts of this happiness he wants but dont deserve drinking himself to oblivion then driving and then crashing
Feroz got told by malik ...oh hope when asad sober he remembers those slap and give it back double time
Azlan rage he was abt to tell the relation but asad beat him to it and said hatred
Love malik giving azlan the job of caring for his brother after all he is his big brother and he broke asad he didnt keep his promise ...asad words hurt him
Lengha showed up at the palace sacing anaya engagement but hope arselan is able to help his brother out of his predicament
Aahil has to speak up soon wonder if arselan is thw man written in anaya kismat
Malik lecturing asad to live look for love life and let go of the pain the hurt but asad dont think of anything but his death tht is his only peace for him
Worried zoya for her jahapanah love ayan teasing her
love asad complain abt coffe his musibat and sugar he do need a little sugar in his life
Sugar and spice and all thing nice again asya and their fights dont matter how hard u try asad she will come closer
Aww anaya modelling her lengha
Haha kajol sleeps with AAK every night maya reaction funny
But AAK and GAFFUR daughter it will happen only it will be Zoya
Azlan has a lot to regret and be ashamed of he can never repay asad for all he has done and doing for him
Zoya should have beat the shit more out if sameer but slowly but surely
Love how assd observed zoya he is so into her what sympton did he recognized and questioned
Zoya qnd her mysterious S tht is so so Asad she didnt know if it was HIM or HIM it is all the same but they both made her feel the same safe secure trust
So it can only be one Asad
Love how he questioned her do u have something to tell me but she hesitated I would have spilled my guts
Love zoya snd pari time their talk abt chachu and prayer for chachu
How do asad know chutki or of chutki
Azlan has a death to repay know aisha fav colour
Aww asad fell harder seeing a selfless zoya an almost dimple smile tht girl will make him mad
Phirse jinn playing ps4 another smile as he ran to turn up the heat to warm this kindhearted girl who didnt rat him out to his mother and he was thankful, appreciative and made him admire her kindness.
Took me 11/2 days to read it was hard finding my quiet space but enjoyed love the slow changing of asya equations hopefully soon it will be asya together
Waiting impatiently for more.
Edited by anopama - 8 years ago
anopama thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
torture much
thanks for teasers though
I occupy my time reading old story so I dont stalk like alwaysasya
but thanks to her too we got a teaser at least seeing the update is delayed
so asad being the gentleman he is had to be the one to put something under zoya door
maybe it is tissues for her tears guessing sameer is thee cost of it
and asad who cant stand seeing it dont know what to do
I know coffee cant fit under the door so I guess tissues bcuz I dont know if their dynamics changed so much tht he would write a note or letter
as for the second teaser
high
race
asya together
clueless
ok gonna go read another old story so I dont hound u
waiting not very patiently
DailyDaisy thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

torture much
thanks for teasers though
I occupy my time reading old story so I dont stalk like alwaysasya
but thanks to her too we got a teaser at least seeing the update is delayed
so asad being the gentleman he is had to be the one to put something under zoya door
maybe it is tissues for her tears guessing sameer is thee cost of it
and asad who cant stand seeing it dont know what to do
I know coffee cant fit under the door so I guess tissues bcuz I dont know if their dynamics changed so much tht he would write a note or letter
as for the second teaser
high
race
asya together
clueless
ok gonna go read another old story so I dont hound u
waiting not very patiently



😆 The second teaser is meant to leave you clueless! What are they Up to..well more like what is Zoya Up to? Patience Patience..all in good time you will get your update..SOON. It will be extra long don't worry!
Edited by DailyDaisy - 8 years ago
Always_asya thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

torture much
thanks for teasers though
I occupy my time reading old story so I dont stalk like alwaysasya
but thanks to her too we got a teaser at least seeing the update is delayed
so asad being the gentleman he is had to be the one to put something under zoya door
maybe it is tissues for her tears guessing sameer is thee cost of it
and asad who cant stand seeing it dont know what to do
I know coffee cant fit under the door so I guess tissues bcuz I dont know if their dynamics changed so much tht he would write a note or letter
as for the second teaser
high
race
asya together
clueless
ok gonna go read another old story so I dont hound u
waiting not very patiently

what can i do other than stalking 😉 you are occupying yourself reading old stories i cannot even do that bcs from last two years i was in home with no study and end up reading all stories two or three times
so i have nothing to read now and i am torturing Daisy for that 😆
Edited by Always_asya - 8 years ago
hatelove2012 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 8 years ago
Can't wait for an update. Please post fat and thx for teasers. Can't wait to see what happen toZoya
Always_asya thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cancerian111

Hi.again appreciating ur work.again lil effort to reply to ur post by ds not so purely silent reader (thnx to ur writing skills for ds).nice updates all of them.eagerly waiting for ur updates but after this teaser my silent reader devil activated.nice teaser many thnx to u and always_asya for encourage u a lot for ds.great effort always asya...keep continue ds kind of efforts which result in awesum teasers like ds.daisy madam I guess first teaser hav to do wd sameer or something big happened in uni.and 2nd teaser linked wd asad bike or guitar lets c what u actually composed.plz update soon I knw it's very difficult for u to gv excellent long updates but ye selfish addiction for ur updates increasing day by day.

Thank u so much dear and i need company for torturing Daisy 👏
Always_asya thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy



Yes it was 5 am! I had slept in the evening so couldn't sleep at night..benefit for you guys I got a lot of writing done 😉

Oh it calls selfless writer
excellent job 👍🏼
Always_asya thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy



Or she isn't scolded by him for a chance 😉 For this only! Not saying not scolded at all..par agar woh usse din mein 4-5 baar tang karegi bechara will have to use his energy wisely 😆

😊 😊

Related Topics

Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove · 2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".