AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1011

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Aa gaya update

Only one part came others are still remain

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sally111

@sally111

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#1012

Finally upadate.. waiting for other parts want to se happy and carefree asad

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DailyDaisy

@DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1013

I'm sure this is the shortest horror story you will all read..but my internet is being a major PAIN in the ASS at the moment hence the delay in the update guys, and I have just a lil bit of time before I need to go on Holiday to update and this...is NOT helping.

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DailyDaisy

@DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1014

Bare with me guys, slowly but surely it's getting updated. Just the last part may not be up today but I'll try somehow to get it up tomorrow SOMEHOW.

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1015

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Strange I always see u on almost all the threads but never interacted with u..

What's your name?
I think u had a different UN earlier

My earlier UN was --Arpita--

Aur haan mein zyaada active nahi thi...

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Tabs

@hatelove2012

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#1016

Awesome update. Can't wait to see if Asad is going to reach there in time. Please update soon.

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1017

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

My earlier UN was --Arpita--
Aur haan mein zyaada active nahi thi...

Oh yes now I know u..

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1018

Enjoyed reading the parts which were updated...

Best scenes there were 2 for me..

First between Asad and Zeenat where she knows who is Zoya's actual jinn

Loved the way he opened up with her..maybe not even like this with Anwar he must have talked..

And second between Zeenat and Zoya at the bridge where she gets her gift..quite emotional it was..

I'm loving the way Asad is learning to smile little by little..

Also I like the way Zoya is being feeling accepted by dilshad time and again.

I'm sure Asad will definitely make it to the cafe.

But mr feroz is one big hurdle to tackle.

I had asked you many questions in my very first post after reading the chapters..

I hope u get back to them.

Tc and update other parts soon.

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1019

Nice update dear

Liked Asad & zeenat scene. He told her the reason & she was surprised that he shared something with her.

Zoya & her antics were funny. She didn't like that zeenat bought candy for Asad. Their talk was good. She was thinking abt the lines zeenat told her.

Azlan in danger & Asad will be there soon to rescue his brother. Waiting for continuation parts

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anuv6

@anuv6

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#1020

its awesome...
asusual u rocked in ASYA parts...LUVD IT.
nd asad and zeenat bond...interestng
zoya nd anwar bond with all others in the family...cute and sweet
i luvd ur way of writing esp in this update , the one where asad sees zoya taking pics...funny
nd here asad smiled more than the last time...
well,asad shows his pain bt zoya's pain...hope asad "ll be also aware of that nd i really want to see asad's reaction when really zee "ll take zoya with her too, if it happens.
then, we can see his suppressing strength of his emotions.,
i luvd the whole update esp ASYA ( u knw its obv ) nd zoya's cute nd funny bondng with others.
bt its incomplete...its so not u
nd here i'm waiting waiting very much eager...
update sooonish dear.