#3 - AsYa FF : Kya Hua Tera Vaada... - Page 34

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Beautiful update dear

Loved reading it

Asya moments were a treat to read

Asad thinking about children and then taking care of zoya while she is ill being the main highlights

And ofcourse the not to forget factor being the sibling talk. Felt really happy for nikhat and asad

Can we please have a love confession soon

Can't wait for it now

Hopefully, in the next part or pretty soon

Looking forward to know what happens next in the story

Please try to continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

thank u so much Muskaan !! i'm glad u liked it🤗

irony !! he didn't want children and now he can't wait to have one😆

yup, major bonding between Asad and Nikhat happened today😳

haha ok, next chapter will make them confess😉😆

Sometime I am a #FAN of my comments you see...😆

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy

u r most welcome !😆

baal😆 mujhe yaad hai voh timr jab apne screen ke samne, i was begging for him to cut his hair🤣

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy

better Mayur ?😆

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy

voh khatam ho gaya early september mein😳

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Salaam Bano...😊

Its such a pleasant suprise to see your PM in my inbox after soo many weeks...How Are You ???😳

Maine padha tumhari job bhi hoogayi hai...and you have started your studies again...that is great...

All The Best for that..😊👍🏼

Coming to the Update...

I now get what Ankie was hinting on in the last update about how mature and more understanding you have become as a Writer...and i don't know why but this time , in this update i can see you touching some bigger subjects and how pretty good you are handling this thing...and i am happy about that...don't worry about the time span...just whenever you get time to write ...write it down and update...but yes studies must be your priority..😳

I liked the way how Nikhat was also given the space and like how she was used in this update from start and also at the end...well balanced...and written..and yes it will take time for things to become normal between them...but this is good than nothing...

Coming to Asad and his monologue about his realization of love , his thoughts about starting a family...everything...it was written excellently Bano...and this is what i was telling you in the first para..

And yes my choice of woman should also be like this...

" A Girl who always held her ground and fought for her rights but that didn't make her a full-on feminist. Inwardly, she must have a side which wanted to be wooed like any ordinary girl."

And Zoya is right somewhere that she has this right to be wooed by her Hubby...but see she can also Confess first...after all everything and everyone are equal...😆

Rest of the update was good...the jealousy between Asad and Peanut and how Zoya is siding with Peanut just to irritate Asad...hahaha was cute...

And then the illness...i think i can guess in the dark...what can be the twist which you are talking about...if she is not what we think when someone vomits...🤪

Lets see what is in store for them...

The last scene between Asad and Nikhat was very Heart warming and well written part Bano...it easily conveyed the feelings, happiness and nervousness they had while talking to eachother after so long...this was the best part of this update...

Rest Will see what will happen next...

Continue soonish...😊

# And yes you might get bored writing goody goody updates...but i don't while reading them...😎

## TAKE CARE..😃

Walekum Assalaam Mayur !! Kaise ho ? 😃

haha main thik hoon, i guess i came back after a little long time this time😆

Thank u so much Mayur !! It means a lot 😳


And i am still at the same time, NOT getting what u guys mean😆 i know my writing evolved since the beginning lekin itna bhi nahi na ?😕😆
well yeh sach hai ke this update was really important in a way, u'll see about that a little later, maine bohot hints diye hain while replying to Jas😆

haan, maine socha, it's a good way to have Asad ask HER instead of somebody else for advice😉 yeah but the start has to come sometime toh maine socha ke abhi hi kar lete hain😉

Acha u were talking about that ?😆 well, irony, he didn't want children and now he wants them very much😳 i'm glad u liked it😃

oh wow ! toh tumhe bhi ek Zoya chahiye ?? Main yahan ek dhundu ?😆 i have one in mind already but she's from Morocco and Algeria... English mein kaam chala lena 😉😆

Haan lekin bechari ki frustration samjho !! she wants him to take the first step, she's the one usually taking it, so now she wants him to do this for her😳

Peanut is a preview of Baby Ahmed Khan😉😆
haha no, i'm not hinting at anything right now, Zoya has just had FP and nothing else, she's not pregnant but she's fertile, my twist won't be about that😆

well honestly i was myself tearing up while writing the part Asad Nikhat😳

hahaa i'll keep that in mind while writing my updates😆

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy

main yahan, hoon yahaan, hoon yahaan

updating after replying to comments😳😆

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Sometime I am a #FAN of my comments you see...😆

They are just M.A..

Thu thu...

truly M.A for the comment Mayur !! thank u so much !!😳

Originally posted by: MayurChan

I guess everybody was...and the worst look was that ninja ponytail...

Ninja ponytail had made me laugh out loud 🤣