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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01

Interesting story...

Loved everything about it
Asad and zoya family is sooo loving and caring
Zoyas past is something she needs to overcome.
And i think asad will helo her in that..
The last update was so funny and very romantic
Thank god asad saved zoya in that storeroom.
And that entire scene was written very beautifully
Waiting to see how asad return zoyas phone and earing...
Plzzz pm me when u update ...
And update soon.
~JAZ~

P.S. Please send me link to ur other srories... would love to read them tooo


Thank you so much for the overwhelming comment 😃
It really means alot
Yeah she will get back her phone but I doubt about the earring 😉
I'm glad u liked it
Will try to update ASAP
And will pm u 😊
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FIRSTLY A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL THE AMAZING READERS

Chapter 10

Khan mansion:

Asad and Ayaan had just reached home, Ayaan was busy with his play station when again Zoya's phone ranged he paused his game and took the phone again it was gudiya calling

Ayaan: such a restless girl, it's better I pick up and talk else she won't let me finish my game

Ayaan answered the call but he didn't even get the chance to even say hello as person on the other side was continuously bombarding with questions

Phone conversion:

Humeira: omg! Baji, why are you not picking up my call! I was so worried

Ayaan was above to answer but before that he was again interrupted

Humeira: u didn't even give your weird office landline number but you know I'm smart enough, I googled it but no one was answering I was so tensed! I tell you such a big organization and such irresponsible staff are you sure you want to work there?

Ayaan thinking,"how dare she talk about DC like that" he was above to shout at her but only if she let him speak

Humeira: ok! I called you to inform that I'm in library now I have already informed Abbu, it will take 2 more hrs for me to return home don't worry my friends are with me and Imraan will drop me once the assignment is done

Ayaan signed in defeat thinking,"no point trying, let her finish"

Finally, she realized that she is not getting any response from Zoya she checked the screen but the call was still on

Humeira: baji, why are you not saying anything?

Ayaan: only if you let someone speak

Humeira: ok, but what happened to your voice baji its sounding weird

That was end of Ayaan's patience she is calling him weird

Ayaan: because you are a fool, you really think its baji's I mean Zoya's voice, I suggest you record your voice and hear yourself seems like I'm talking to a nursery kid and saying I am sounding weird

That's when Humeira realized it's someone else on the call

Humeira: how dare you! Wait a minute, how come my sister's phone is with you? Where is my baji? Who are you?

Ayaan was above to say something but was again interrupt by Humeira

Humeira: why are you quiet! Answer me

Ayaan: just shut up and let me speak one more word from your side I'm disconnecting the call then you can assume whatever you want to! Is that clear?

But there was no response

Ayaan: are you there?

Humeira(annoyed): you only said not to speak

Ayaan(huffed in annoyance): Zoya had forgotten her cell in office so it's with me, I will return it to her tomorrow

Humeira: ok, but nobody was answering the landline why so?

Ayaan: whom do you expect to attend your call on Sundays! ghosts?

Humeira(confused): but baji had said its working today

Ayaan suddenly remembered his brothers doing and immediately covered up

Ayaan: off course, it was working but only for architects not for receptionists to entertain useless calls and besides...

He was above to continue but stopped hearing the beep, he checked the screen

Ayaan(annoyed): she disconnected?

Ayaan called her back, she reluctantly attended it

Ayaan: excuse me? I was talking to you and you disconnected in between! What kind of behavior is that?

Humeira: yeah I did that! What you taught that you will say anything to me and like a poor old school girl I will satisfy your ego! Well I was quiet when you told me to shut up because I wanted to know about my baji since she is safe I care less talking to you

Ayaan was amused by her, he smirked and said

Ayaan: are you for real? You know what that name is perfect for you!

Humeira: what name?

Ayaan: alien

With that, he disconnected the call

Humeira: hel...hello alien? Have I heard this before? Oh! he is that car vala fellow!

Najma: koi mil gaya?

Humeira: haan?

Najma: you might have heard it in that movie u know jaddu!(mesmerizingly) My Hrithik's movie

Humeira: ohk vo koi mil gaya, aacha Najma, Ayesha everyone listen na tell me is my complexion seems bluish?

Najma/Ayesha/Imraan/nikhat: what!

Najma(worried): did you accidently eat something poisonous?

Humeira: no! anything ha Najma

Ayesha thinking,"I'm not that lucky"

Imraan(teasingly): it's a big thing she eats normal stuff forget poisonous

With that he and nikhat hi-fived each other

Najma: PJ

Humeira: guys! I'm serious

Ayesha: ok! What you exactly want to know?

Humeira: do I look like jaddu from that movie? I know I'm bit short but I'm not too short like him and unlike him, I have 5 whole fingers

Nikhat: today I officially declare her mad

Ayesha: exactly! Leaving cinderella, snow white you are comparing yourself with jaddu??

Najma: whats wrong with it? Anyone would desire to live his life

Imraan: excuse me?

Najma: more than half of the movie Hrithik was carrying him on his back! What more can someone ask for, while watching movie I was actually jealous of that creature

Imraan: no wonder you both get along with each other so well, both need a psychiatrist

Najma punched him lightly on his arms

Imraan: ouch!

Seeing their friend's antics alien matter slipped from her mind and they continued with their assignment after some teasing section

Khan mansion:

Rashid was reading some book in his room and Dilshad was busy arranging some clothes in the wardrobe when Asad marched in with his laptop

Asad: Abbu I need your help

Rashid: ok, but why are you so restless?

Asad: nothing, I want you to review this design please (handling him the laptop)

Dilshad(under her breath): work, work, and only work. I wish someday he will march in the room saying Ammi Abbu I like someone

Rashid(focusing on design): it's designed by you, right Asad?

Asad: yes, I mean not fully, Abbu we can say 50% of these is mine and remaining was designed by one of our new architects

Rashid: I'm very impressed by his work, by seeing how perfectly its done I thought it's completely your model I can say one thing you both make a great team

Asad: it's not he, it's she, yeah she is talented but...Abbu just go through this requirement and analyze the design then you will see what disaster she have done

Dilshad got alerted when she heard Asad for a change talking about a girl though it's regarding official matter she cares less about it, she wanted to know more about that girl who is making her son so restless, Dilshad continued her work pretending to be completely unaware of the conversation.

Rashid was confused after going through the requirements, seeing his father's expression Asad said

Asad: I knew it! She completely ruined it right, she shouldn't have done this for such a silly reason

Rashid: what silly reason? Tell me everything from the scratch

Asad narrated everything from her interview till all this misunderstanding happened excluding the part where he had modified the compensation amount from 2lakhs to 20 lakhs

Rashid: Asad I didn't expect such a behavior from you! Is the way you treat ladies?

Asad: Abbu but...

Rashid: no I don't want to hear any explanation! First tell me why were you so hell bend in recruiting that girl using that bond when you yourself was not in that systems favor when I introduced it

Asad didn't know what to say as he himself is searching for the reason for forcing her in the name of bond

Asad: vo actually Abbu as you said she is talented and her designing skills are good, though I was not in the favor of that bond but it was your decision how can I insult it for a normal employee

Rashid: am I talking to the business tycoon AAK? because hearing your reason you are sounding like a dumb teenager

Asad didn't dare to say a word hearing his Abbu's tone

Rashid: about this design, I don't think she has done anything to take so-called revenge from you. If she would really want to spoil the design she would have totally ruined it making it a disaster but she completed your design making it a masterpiece, and coming to the loopholes you are crying about the client suggested to remove their glass wall because they had problem of privacy and also he wanted to keep an eye on all his employees, the main problem was not the glass wall it was privacy, you had planned CCTV layout and she replaced the glass wall with stained glass in both the case privacy is taken care of and in every case she has taken care of requirements but in an indirect way than yours

Asad took the laptop from Rashid and went through the design again as due to anger he didn't mind checking it properly. He realized his Abbu is right! Maybe she was really framed or maybe by mistake she ended up with wrong design.

Rashid said observing Asad's expression

Asad: I hope you will not blame that innocent girl anymore

Asad nodded his head with a guilt and was above to leave when he heard a voice "also you will apologize" he turned around hearing Dilshad's voice

Dilshad: it was wrong from your side that how you forced her to work in our company and after having a misunderstanding that she cheated on you, don't know about AAK but I know what extend my Asad can go in his anger. I'm sure you must have done something terrible, I hope you will not let me down

Asad: I will apologize for that Ammi

Dilshad smiled at him. He hugged her and went back to his room

Asad's room:

Asad remembering Zoya and Rashid's word

FLASHBACKS:

Zoya: how is it possible, I was given some other info... I have no idea how...trust me I have never seen this requirement report before...I was given some other report. (readers if you don't remember this scene is from chapter 7)

Rashid: every case she has taken care of requirements but in indirect way than yours (it's from their above conversation)

Zoya: even I can't stoop so low, I didn't do anything intentionally (it's from chapter 9)

Rashid: about this design, I don't think she has done anything to take so-called revenge from you. If she would really want to spoil the design she would have totally ruined it making it a disaster but she completed your design making it a masterpiece (it's from their above conversation)

Asad: Damm! Abbu is right! If she really intended to spoil my work she could have done it that way also..God! she is innocent in all this..what did I do!!

Asad lied down on his bed thinking," I just want this night to get over soon so that I can make things right tomorrow" (with that he closed his eyes)

Zoya's house 2 am in the morning:

Zoya smirked looking at her pen drive

Zoya thinking," Mr. Akdu Ahmed Khan it would be fun seeing your expression, you spoiled my weekend I will spoil your first weekday. Zoya may be weak at times but you shouldn't have underestimated the architect in me"

Next day morning

Dilshad construction:

Asad reached the office before the usual time, he was going to his cabin glancing at his office to find her, he found her near the printer doing some work small smiled formed on his lips seeing her, but then controlling himself he rushed to the cabin before anyone spots his funny actions.

Asad was checking some emails but his mind was completely on Zoya about how to apologize to her. As he is not used to it

Asad thinking,"common Asad you can do it, it's just S.O.R.R.Y sorry, but for that, I have to call her here but by what reason. I will ask Rohan to send her here for some discussion. that's a great idea"

Asad took the receiver dialing Rohan's extension when someone knocked his cabin door, he kept the receiver back hearing the knock

Asad: come in!

The person entered his cabin but he was little shocked seeing the person as she was none other than Zoya with the piles of files so much that it was actually covering half of her face, she kept it on his table and took a long breath

Zoya(under her breath): so heavy

Asad(confused): what is this Zoya?

Zoya: reports sir, you only said to submit it before 10! It's done

Asad's eyes went wide hearing her

Asad(shockingly getting up from his place): what! Yesterday I myself dropped you home! Don't tell me you completed it today within 2hrs?

Zoya(enjoying his reaction): no sir...how is that possible! I completed it from my home logging into the official site by using employee id and password and morning just took the printout from my pen drive

Asad was speechless and was staring at the files he had just said that in anger but he never expected her to complete this almost impossible task. Zoya was leaving the cabin when Asad called her

Asad(hesitantly): Zoya

Zoya: sir, I will be back with reports

Asad: reports? Then what are these (pointing at the huge piles of file)

Zoya: sir you told me to prepare last 10 years project report and these are just last 3 years reports I will bring rest 7years reports

Asad(more surprised): these are just 3 years reports!

Asad had just said the random number which came in his mind, he never expected this mini heart attack in form of the result

Zoya: I will be back

Asad: take peon's help

Zoya: its ok sir, I will manage

Before Asad could say anything she had stormed out, he didn't fully recover with this shock when Zoya came with another huge pile it seems more than previous one, she kept it next to the previous pile and again went towards the door

Asad(horrified): now where are you going how much is remaining?

Zoya took the last file and checked the year

Zoya: 2013, two more years files is remaining

Asad signed in relief and Zoya went to bring the files, Zoya came back with another huge pile of files it was covering till her nose

Asad(looking at the files): you said just two years files are remaining

Zoya: yeah but in last two years DC has cracked so many deals and tenders so...

While taking with Asad, Zoya had lost her focus and as a result all the file was above to fall from her but Asad was fast to react he immediately came and held her hand balancing the file from another side, they had an intense eye lock(mitwa ishq pe zor nahi...) their trance was broken by the Asad cell which had started ringing. Soon Asad loosened the grip from her hand to attend the call but again the heap started slipping so immediately he came back to his position holding her hand tightly. Both awkwardly looked at each other not knowing what to do, they were stuck in such a position that even a single person move all files will be scattered

Asad(sternly): I told you to take peon's help!

Zoya: i...I didn't want to bother him, poor man already has so many works...cleaning each and every cabin, arranging every interior properly, helping other employees with their food etc etc

Asad rolled his eyes at her statement

Asad: that's his work, he is getting paid for that...

Zoya just looked down not wanting to argue more

Zoya: sir, now only one thing can be done, let's leave it

Asad: what! No way, all these files will be scattered here

Zoya: its ok, I will pick it up

Asad: I'm not ok with it, why to create a mess when we can avoid it! I can't see my cabin like that, all these files and papers scattered everywhere

Zoya: si..sir, it's just a paper

Asad: so? The mess is a mess!

Zoya annoyed thinking," He really gonna make me stand like this whole day to avoid is so called mess! also, his warm hands are not doing any help, I hope he is not able to hear my heartbeat as if somebody had connected speakers to my heart "

Asad: where is this Rohan! Always he his glued to my cabin but now when he is needed nowhere to be seen! I think you are right we should leave this

Zoya signed in relief finally he was talking sense, but then fortunately for Asad Rohan and Tanveer entered the cabin

Rohan: sir, there is a probl...(he stopped seeing them both standing holding hand with piles of files in between)

If there would have been any flammable substance it would have been on fire by Tanveer jealously. She just wanted to throw her out of Asad's life forever!


HELLO EVERYONE, FINALLY THE EXAMS ARE OVER...NOW I CAN UPDATE MY STORIES FREELY...SORRY TO KEEP YOU ALL WAITING FOR SO LONG, WELL HOPE YOU ALL LIKE THIS CHAPTER PLSSS DO LET ME KNOW YOUR REVIEWS😊😊 IT MATTERS A LOT TO ME AND ALSO THANKS TO SILENT READERS FOR LIKING MY STORY

WELL ONE MORE THING THIS CHAPTER IS SPECIALLY RES FOR shveta_yadav and mirage thanks a lot for reminding me about this update and making this story special, its really a overwhelming feeling that somebody loves this story as much as i love it

Chapter11

Edited by -loving_life- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
This was so nice...
Thanks for the update...

So now RaDil are also aware about Zoya and I'm sure Dillu Mm won't leave any chance about inquiring deeply...
Asad is in trouble now😆

Zoya actually did a wonderful job..quite talented😉

AyRa scene was so cute and then Najma saying abut jadoo and hrithik😆
Library scene was fun.

What is Zoya's plan? I'm wondering.

Please continue soon,

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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally u r back i m sooo wala happy to see u ..I hope your exam went well

Thank u fr the res dear ..n a very happy new year to u 2 🤗

U knw already hw much I luv this story ..nw i m loving it more n more 😃

Ayaan n humerica scene was so cute n thn the jaduu talk ..🤣

so asad relized his mistake ,,, n mumma dillu toh girl ka name sunte he itnae happy ho gaye as if she gt her badu .. 😆

Wow zoya finished all the assign work 👏

Asad did mistake blaming her and now Zoya shows her capability (well done girl 👍🏼).. Asad face after seeing the reports is treat to watch😆)... never underestimate Zoya Mr Khan..

Billi entry always give me me yuck wale feeling ,,,🤢

Wondering zoya krne kya wale hai...😲

Nw since ur exams r done ..v hope for the quick updates.. pls pls pls

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Sorry to ask u this now ,,but what's ur real name dear ( i dnt remeber if u told me or not )

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear..
Thanks for the res..
Finally Asad realised his mistake..
Asad-RaDil scene was too good..
I loved how Dilshad said how she wish Asad to announce his love one da barging into their room..
Ayra convo was cute..typical AyRa..
Zoya gave Asad a mini heartattack
Poor guy underestimated the power of Zoya..😆
She could do anything in the universe..😉

And finally something is burning..Tanveer framed Zoya to remove her from Asad's life
But now they ended up more closer..

Excited for the next part..

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Posted: 8 years ago
I may not be much active for the next 3-4 months...
But please do update soon..
Will try to catch up soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome Part Dear👏😊
RaDil reprimanded Ahead for his mistakes n wants him to apologize. I wish they n Zoya come to know bar Asad's lie of 20 lakhs too. Zoya deserves to be in peace instead of lied n cheated to be in office against her will.
I feel Zoya has actually did not done any work but dis some trick to shock Ahead as no one can complete such a huge work in 3 days.
Asad can't even say sorry. Hope he genuinely apologizes n himself tells Zoya any his big lie before she herself finds out n hates him more.
I won't mind Zoya taking any revenge on him as he really hurt her n still lying to her abt bond money
Will we ever get a happy n tension free Zoya ever?

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Thanks dear 😊
I'm glad you liked it
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Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

This was so nice...

Thanks for the update...

So now RaDil are also aware about Zoya and I'm sure Dillu Mm won't leave any chance about inquiring deeply...
Asad is in trouble now😆

Zoya actually did a wonderful job..quite talented😉

AyRa scene was so cute and then Najma saying abut jadoo and hrithik😆
Library scene was fun.

What is Zoya's plan? I'm wondering.

Please continue soon,


Thank you so much dear 😊
I'm glad u liked it 😃
It's dilshad she will definitely enquire everything about her😆
Yeah asad is in trouble now but i think this time he won't mind getting in trouble 😉
It was high time I wanted to do some progress in their character so started my update with AyRa😛
Yeah zoya has some plan to trouble him...let's c how much she progress 😛

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