#2| Drabble Series: Forbidden Love [COMPLETED-20/01] PMs Later - Page 20

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update loved it thank you for pm sorry for late reply.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res for part 25. 😳
Awesome update. 👏
Waiting for Zoya-Kabir-Asad faceoff and Kabir's reaction. 😉 Hope that Kabir supports AsYa. 😳 And also hope that Najma stops taunting Zoya and try to understand her and Asad. Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago

[26]
The Forbidden Vent


"Najma..." Zoya opened her mouth trying to speak but hadn't managed a sentence that could pacify the enraged lady in front of her





"I did ask you Zoya... Didn't I? What did you answer that time, huh? That Asad is just my elder brother to you!" Najma's eyes spitted fire




"I was myself confused Najma and moreover I wasn't sure if it was my place to break the news to you!" Zoya answered thoughtfully, she herself doubted the veracity of that statement because she knew she shouldn't have kept it a secret as Najma, being her best friend and Asad's sister deserved to know the truth more than anyone else but yet it seemed the correct thing to say as Zoya noticed Najma's eyes dimming the light of rage.




"You know the implications of your stupid infatuation?"




"We know and we are facing it!" Zoya lowered her eye lashes




"Oh seriously we? NO!! It's only my bhaijaan facing it!!!! He is facing your gross father and his cheap son to save you, he is dealing with media to protect you, he is taking care of you while you sit crying regretting your deeds!..."




"I don't regret!" Zoya snapped between Najma's sentence




"Well it looks so to the world though! It looks like... You the sweet crybaby mooing over your fate while my brother is doing every cruel and inhumane thing to keep his clutches on you for the so called revenge from your family!" Najma was completely on a roll on; Zoya was bothered and offended by whatever venom Najma was spewing and the words she quoting her family under but tried her best to maintain her calm




"Neither I nor your brother cares about what the world think!"




"OH BUT I DO!!!" Najma yelled, "I do!" she repeated, "I thought this all will get settled somehow, I am not blind Zoya I knew you had hots for him, well its normal as we all teenagers are hormonal... But you don't turn a bloody fling into a relationship Zoya a-and when you yourself confided in me that you view him just as my brother, I thought it would end! And then your engagement... I never thought you will continue with your relation with bhajaan after it!" Najma sighed before yelling out loud again, "BUT NO! YOU DIDN'T!!" she went ahead and poked finger accusingly in Zoya's chest, "You both my terrific brother and terrifying best friend continued sleeping together! I again thought it would get over but NO!! I reached saturation when I saw some trashed pregnancy kits in the dustbin wrapped in foiled paper to create impression that it's just stray food... He would have succeeded to hide it from me too hadn't it looked to me as eighth wonder as it's my bhajaan dumping the garbage and not the maid!" Zoya stood stunned by the revelation she didn't wish to interrupt Najma and wanted to hear everything that Najma has got buried in the deepest confinements of her heart.




"Bhaijaan began ignoring everything for you... His business, me, hell even his OCD!!!! All of the sudden you became the sun he revolved around, you.. Zoya, you became the pupil of his circle! I should have been happiest that my brother is in love but you even robbed me off that happiness!" by now both Najma and Zoya were crying, "But I had to do something right? So I did it... I called my cousin's boyfriend who happens to be a reporter generally working against my bhaijaan and spilled the truth!" Najma said truthfully and a gasp escaped Zoya's mouth!




"Najma you?" Zoya wanted to confirm, she was sure she misheard something




"Yes Zoya me!! But guess what instead of breaking the relationship and coming out stating it was just a rumour you guys confessed in front of the media!!" Najma lamented the backfire of her own plan, "I wanted to knock some sense into you two but you guys so blind in love refused to see it!! You seriously think all this can improve? Do you really think that over a night Khans and Siddiquis will become friends, overnight your abbu would accept Bhaijaan and your relationship, overnight you guys won't be an example of something outrageously considered to be a taboo?" Najma collapsed on the couch




"This is not a fairy-tale Zoya, why don't you understand?!?!" Najma said desperately, while Zoya could just hold her close and pat her back and forth so that she calms down.




"Najma sometimes we have to act impulsively, it doesn't really matters if the decisions are correct or no, it just matters if we stand for it or no!!" Najma looked at Zoya quizzically tears still streaming down their eyes, "This is what something Mr. Khan thought me, kuch cheeze baithkar baat karne se nahi sulajhte, unhe jhatke se todna parta hai! And decision making doesn't mean making everyone happy! I repeat- it's just matter that we stand by it always!"




"But Zoya I broke the news to media to make you realize you shouldn't stand by it... It's not how these silly attractions are handled, they stay forbidden forever! I thought when I finally break the news to media-" Najma cut her sentence gulping down as she watched past Zoya's shoulders towards the door, Zoya turned back to be equally stunned when she found Asad and Ayaan at the door along with Kabir!!




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Edited by Zephyr. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wowww
What a story
I dont really have words to tell u how much i liked all the parts..
From part 1 to part 25 ..the story is moving at a great way.
I finished reading all the parts in less than an hour.
I really need to find some words to tell how beautiful the story is.
Ur writing style and the relationship that asad and zoya share here ia mind blowing
Plzzz plzzz pm me when u update its next part
Will be waiting for it
~JAZ~
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's already 54 likes.Where is the update?
And please give a little longer part the next time.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome work!!
So Najma knew everything and she is the one who disclosed this into media...
Excited to read more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting Part.😊
Najma Conversation with Zoya was so Interesting.😊
Najma Outburst on Zoya was so Interestingly explained.😊
Najma noticed all the things happened between ASYA(KABHI).😊
Kabir came along with Asad(KSG) and Ayaan,it was so Interesting.😊
Waiting for Kabir's Reaction.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love it
Amazing update
Excited to read more
Thanks for pm
Update soon

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