The dilemma (AsYa SS) [update p30]

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

OK I love all ur stories😊

But this one captivate me from the prologue

This zoya was ready to fight for her right her child rights

But now after reading the first chapter

I am pissed bcuz Asad is an ass

He had sex with zoya 2 mths ago didn't check back with her discuss nothing with her

He declared he love her then

But then seems he is a puppet in his friends hand

He believes she is pregnant

But didn't he think of zoya being pregnant after their nite

And why the hell is zoya backing down

She needs to fight for her man and her child

She is suppose to know tanveer truth

So she is suppose to know Asad and tanveer didn't sleep together

Tht it is all tanveer plan

Ok let's see what u do with the next chapter

Waiting

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sasir
I hate this asad..
Stupid..
How can he do this with out discussing it with zoya..
Hope she don't forgive him..
Bit I don't want tanveer win too so
I want asya marriage... But he should bear the burnt...
He trusts tanveer blindly..
I really feel sorry for zoya...
plz update soon

Everyone isn't intelligent unfortunately 😭 Oh he will suffer! Zoya will take revenge, that's for sure! 😆

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Jayasree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Read the prologue and chapter1 at one go.

Liked it and waiting to see as to what Zoya is going to do?

Please update.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Asad is dumb for not asking Zoya n just throwing his decision on her
He insulted her n ignored her for months even after sleeping wid her
He even threw her out of d house after dat poison incident after sleeping wid her
I think he sud think dat whether he himself has some tehzeeb or not
Wished Zoya said d father dialogue in d show too but dat Zoya was a doormat

His action will be thrown back at him in the worst way possible. My Zoya is more the lioness and the mature and the modern girl they should have shown in the TV show😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: raspi
Asad is soo dumb he should have ask zoe abt it bt it was gud nd thnxxx fr pm n update soon

At least you loved the chapter 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: nilusoni
superb part
omg that billi still with her trick
asad is really dumb
i hope something good happen
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

Thank you 😃 Don't call her billi! Cats are cute! She's just a witch 😛 ! Don't know when but something good will definitely happen 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: MOnkEy_rAngEr
Gooossshhh you did Asad do that every time preferring Tanveer over her n hurting her in the process
Amzing update
Loved it
Continue soon

Thank you! I know that's such a bad move to make him always chose Tanveer but it's sort of the base of the story 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: 9849565007
cant imagine why asad is so dumb

Don't know why 😲

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Really very sad to see asad like this
Trust is good but blind trust is no good
Hopefully, tanveer would be exposed soon and asad would realize his mistakes
Looking forward to know what happens next
Would be waiting for the update after your holidays are over
Enjoy your holidays and do well in your final exams! 👍🏼
Thanks for the pm😊

Well, let's think for a minute, a story can't be a story without a good plot can it? 😆 Of course Tanveer will be exposed, not soon but still.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice start dear
Asad, what u did. U should talk to Zoya first but no, you told ur decision to her. Zoya dilshad convo was good. She has some support in the form of mother. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

Your comment makes me laugh because it seems like my mum when she watches TV and she's like 'Hey what did you do..' Like the man in the TV will hear her voice and say 'sorry mam' 😆😆😆

Yes of course DIlshad will help her little Zoya