AsYa FF: Ishq Hua Hi Hua

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola everyone! I am back with an FF. This is my first attempt at writing a long story on AsYa. I have written two short stories on AsYa before. Here is the character sketch of my FF. I hope you will all like it. If you do then please press the like button and give me some feedbacks. And tell me if you liked the idea and if I should continue it or not. That would be really appreciated. Thank you.

Character sketch:

Asad Ahmed Khan: A very hot and handsome, 20 years old hunk. He is Interested in studies and sports, mainly Basketball and tennis. Every girl wants to be with him but doesn't interact much with strangers. He has a group of friends who supports him very much.

Najma Ahmed Khan: Asad's sister. She is also fun-loving and chirpy. She loves to make new friends.

Zoya Farooqui: A chirpy, fun-loving, Very attractive, 18 years old girl, about to join the college with her sister. She is an Innocent and pure soul and is ready to help anyone in need. She loves to paint and play tennis with humeira (her twin sister) at free time. (They moved to Canada with their Zeenat aapi, after their parents died in an accident. But now are in India to do their further studies. )

Humeira Farooqui: Humeira is 18 years old, Zoya's twin sister. She is also innocent and fun loving, like her sister.

Aayan Qureshi: Asad's friend, more like a brother. He is a 19 years old, fun-loving guy. He lives with his friends at Asad's place after his parents died in an accident. And considers Asad's parents as his own.

Tanveer baig, Nikhat baig and Nuzhat baig: They are sisters. Tanveer is a kind, shy girl. Nikhat and Nuzhat are more of fun loving nature. They all are childhood friends of Asad, Najma and Aayan. Instead of living in a hostel, they live with them in Asad's place. Their parents live in New York.

Imran Malik: He secretly loves Tanveer but is afraid to tell her.

Farhaan Malik: Nikhat's love interest and Asad's friend. He goes to the same college as Asad and his friends.

Rashid and Dilshad: They are Asad's parents who live in Australia. They are very supportive, loving and caring parents to Najma, Asad and their friends.

Zeenat and Anwar: Zoya and Humeira's Aapi and Jiju. They love Zoya and Humeira more than anything in this world.

I might introduce some other characters as the story progresses. But I will inform you all before I do so. Gracias!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola everyone! I am back with an FF. This is my first attempt at writing a long story on AsYa. I have written two short stories on AsYa before. Here is the first part of my FF. I hope you will all like it. If you do then please press the like button and give me some feedbacks. And tell me if I should continue it or not. That would be really appreciated. Thank you.

As I am a new writer, I need some inspirations. I will update next part as soon as I get 20 likes! I hope we can do it together. Pleeeaaase like it because I am desperate to share the next part with you all! (Cute puppy face)


Part 1: Page 1
Part 2: Page 4
Part 3: Page 6
Part 4: Page 7


Part one:

Farooqui Mansion (Toronto, Canada)


"Zoya, Humeira" Zeenat shouted as she opened the door of their room.

"Ya Allah, you twins are still asleep?" She said while pulling their huge blanket away.

"Aapi it's Sunday today, please 2 minutes. " They both said at the same time while their eyes were still close. Zeenat smiled at their cute antics.

"It's nearly 10! Wake up quickly. You guys have a flight to catch at 11." She said a bit angrily.

"What!!!" They both shouted jumping out of their bed. They were wearing a tank top and boxer shorts. And turned around to see the clock hanging on the wall.
"Kya Aapi, It's just 8:30 am!" Zoya said pouting while humeira joined too.

"Sorry. Tum dono ko irritate karne mein bohot maza aata hai, aur ab toh tum dono ja rahi ho India so I thought to irritate you one last time before you go." Zeenat said with a sad smile while her eyes filled with tears.

"Awww aapi please don't start crying now," Humeira said softly. "Haan aapi aur hum aapko aur jiju ko everyday video call karange na" Zoya added. Zeenat nodded and wide spread her arms and Zoya and Humeira both ran to her arms and they all had a long hug until someone interrupted them.

" Ahem Ahem" Anwar cleared his throat. "Mujhe toh kohi bhi miss nahin karta" He said sounding a bit sad.

"Aww Jiju... Please join our hug." Zoya and Humeira smiled while Anwar also joined them. And they all had a long family hug.

"Zoya and humeira, please go and get ready now. It's already 9 now. I will go and get your breakfast ready." Zeenat said while the twins nodded and walked to their respective bathrooms.

"Anwar look na how quick they both have grown up" Zeenat said looking at her husband. "But do you think it would be good for them to live in the hostel?"

"Zeenat you just answered your own question. You just said they both have grown up. Don't worry much I am sure they'd do fine. You know that it's one of the best colleges in India and I investigated about the hostel as well. It seemed good" Anwar said to her while Zeenat nodded and they both headed towards the kitchen for the breakfast.
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Khan Villa (Bhopal, India)

"Aayan! Just go and get some popcorn and soft drinks from the kitchen." Nikhat said while she was busy with Najma, Nuzhat and Tanveer, deciding which movie to watch.

"Show some respect Nikhat. I am a year older than you" Aayan who was laying on the big couch said lazily.

"Aayan Bhaijaan please go and get some popcorn and soft drinks from the kitchen." She said rolling her eyes. "Fine now?"

"Very much" he replied and walked towards the kitchen.

"By the way, Asad kahan hai?" Tanveer asked.

"Yeah it's Sunday today and we told him that we are going to watch the movie but he isn't here yet!" Nikhat said sounding a bit irritated.

"Isn't it obvious? Basketball training!" Najma said while all of them laughed.

"Uska bas chalen toh woh ball se hi nikah karle" Nkhat joked and all of them started laughing.

"But seriously guys, what kind of girl do you think will come in Bhaijaan's life?" Aayan said coming out of the kitchen with popcorn and soft drinks.

" Pata nahin. I mean there are a lot of girls behind him but he doesn't give a damn about them." Tanveer said while all of them nodded.

All of them wondered. "I wonder woh ladki kaisi hogi aur Asad ke life mein kab aayegi?"

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"Mein aarahi hun" Zoya shouted from her room as Zeenat was calling her for her breakfast.

"Ya Allah! Yeh ladki kabhi punctual nahin ho sakti" Zeenat said while having her breakfast along with Humeira and Anwar. "Look Humeira, I know you are 6 minutes younger than her but please make sure you look after her. And make sure she does everything on time and don't let her eat streets food or any junk food. I am telling you all this because you are a bit more mature than her and haan aapna bhi khayal rakhna tum."

"Ji aapi, I will take care of zoya and myself. You don't worry" Humeira said with a smile.

"Ouch" Zoya screamed. "Zoya what happened?" all of them stood up their chair and ran up the stair to find Zoya on the floor outside her room.

"Kya hua Zoya?" Zeenat asked. "Nothing Aapi, I was just coming downstairs when my leg slipped and I fell over," she said sheepishly.

"This is why I get worried," Zeenat said looking at Humeira and Anwar while they both started giggling.

"Zoya, jaldi se niche jake breakfast karlo aur phir airport bhi toh jana hai," Humeira said as Zoya nodded and walked downstairs carelessly again.

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"How about old movies?," Nuzhat suggested.

"Yeah, it's been so long since we watched an old movie," Tanveer said and all of them nodded.

Suddenly the main door opened and there came a sweaty Asad wearing a basketball top and shorts and a ball in his hand. Although he was wearing a top, they could still see how fit he was.

"Hola dosto" Asad said while walking to them. "What are you guys up to?" he asked.

"Hi, bhaijaan. We were just deciding which movie to watch." Najma said. "Bhaijaan please go and get fresh quickly and we will be waiting for you."

"Okay tamatar I'll be back in 10 mins," He said winking and ran upstairs to his room.

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"Raat ko akele bahar mat jana, and please don't eat any processed food. And the main thing, don't talk to strangers." Zeenat said to the twins.

"Okay aapi and jiju please don't worry. We will be fine." They both said at the same time and hugged each other one last time before entering the waiting section. [or whatever it's called ;) ]

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Humaira and Zoya sat on their respective seats, which were right next to each other and the plane took off after a few minutes. They both were getting bored.

"Zoya lets watch a movie," Humeira said to Zoya.

"Okay, but let's watch an old movie please," Zoya asked while humeira nodded.

They both started watching an old movie that revolved around love. It was the same one that Asad and his friends were about to watch. (Sorry guys I don't know much Hindi movies. Just think of any old movie you like that revolves around love.)

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Precap - Asad and Zoya's first meeting.

So that was the first part. I don't know if that was good enough or not. Please do give me some feedbacks and tell me if I should continue it or not. Thank you all!


As I am a new writer, I need some inspirations. I will update next part as soon as I get 20 likes! I hope we can do it together. Pleeeaaase like it because I am very desperate to share the next part with you all! (Cute puppy face)

Part 1: Page 1
Part 2: Page 4
Part 3: Page 6
Part 4: Page 7
Edited by Surbhi12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: ashlesha2

Very beautiful

Wonderful



Thank you! I am glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome...
Loved it..
It seems like simple n beautiful love story..
Hope not much of villans or none at all...
I like stories of asya in college..
N mostly I loved their bonding...
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
the thing which surprised me that in your story tanveer is shy and kind girl
so asad have bunch of friends
let see what happen next and exciting for asya meeting
lovely
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Glad to see a fanfiction from you
A very interesting concept
And loved reading the first chapter
Going by the character sketch, I am hoping that tanveer is a positive character in this story
Really looking forward to reading more from it
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yay a long story from u
Looking forward to it
Is sound so fun already
It reminds me of another story when all the friends use to live with Asad
And zoya came from abroad to study too
Looking forward for more
Pm plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Interesting
Continue soon,and pleasee pm me 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: sasir

Awesome...
Loved it..
It seems like simple n beautiful love story..
Hope not much of villans or none at all...
I like stories of asya in college..
N mostly I loved their bonding...
Plz continue soon



Thank you so much! I will surely continue it soon! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: allwaysasya

Awesome update
the thing which surprised me that in your story tanveer is shy and kind girl
so asad have bunch of friends
let see what happen next and exciting for asya meeting
lovely
update soon



Thank you ! Haha yeah, Tanveer is a kind, shy girl😉. And yeah i will update it soon.

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