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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Mera res kaha hai?
Wow so unwanted
Feeling hurt.
But OK.


Ridhu aaj exam h mra nd trust me this OS is way too beautiful.
Reading this I was on a verge of crying but I controlled because than I ll memorise my grandmother and cry more.
So controlled.

Bug ur OS, trust me this was emotional but amazing

And the poem was beautiful.
It was just magic. Sachi.
I loved the OS personally.

And ya I m not that strong ki kisi policeman, army officer se shadi kar sku. I hope aisa na ho mre sth.
But ya i t is difficult for wives nd families. Bcoz they die every moment.
Gud 1
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Mera res kaha hai?

Wow so unwanted
Feeling hurt.
But OK.


Ridhu aaj exam h mra nd trust me this OS is way too beautiful.
Reading this I was on a verge of crying but I controlled because than I ll memorise my grandmother and cry more.
So controlled.

Bug ur OS, trust me this was emotional but amazing

And the poem was beautiful.
It was just magic. Sachi.
I loved the OS personally.

And ya I m not that strong ki kisi policeman, army officer se shadi kar sku. I hope aisa na ho mre sth.
But ya i t is difficult for wives nd families. Bcoz they die every moment.
Gud 1

Sooryyy Yaarr...aisi unwanted waaalli baat nhi hai...meko idea nhi tha...
Edit kar diya hai...
😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Hello Riddhi...😊
Hope you are doing good dear...😳
Coming to the update...well you are on a roll these days...and I am seriously looking forward to read more stuff from U...but please free hone ke baad apni puri stories resume karna mat bhoolna...especially who wali jismein Asad ko bachpan mein alag kardete hai Zoya se because of a fight between Anwar and RASHID and how Zoya becomes a pillar for all their siblings...and ek time uska phone aata hai who ussey baat bhi nhi karti...I am sorry main side tracked hoogaya but yeh baat meko 1 mnth se bolni thi...par aaj time mila toh keh dia...
Finally coming to the story...
This was very emotional and well scripted part...👏
And it is true...what all the people in Army and their families goes through is beyond our imagination...and U tried capturing that with ASYA being the centre was impressive...
Liked reading this part...
Continue soon with more OS'es ...
Take Care...😃
# And ALL the Best with Your Results...👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Dada sojao!!
India me hi rehte ho na??
Its 3:30!
Mera phone Bajne laga kai baar mail se so I checked coz it was really disturbing jab neend bohat mushkil se aayi ho
N again itne pyaare comment k liye thank you
U Always make me smile
N seriously aapko vo yaad hai?
That was its you forever
Mujhe laga kisiko yaad bhi nahi hogi
Are baap re
I was par fir laga koi interested nahi hai so stopped writing
Itni detailed yaad hai
Vo puri story clear hai
U know the Vesper's whisper...honestly speaking vo ussi story ka ek part tha...kaafi baadme but yes
It was diff but yahi concept tha
Although it was a fun story
I m seriously touched... Itna yaad hai aapko n itne comments
U know u remind me of my sweetest cousin...unka naam bhi aapke jesa hai
Mayank
U speak the same way
Thank u dada
Cloud nine p
N ab so jao
Sirf ek query hai meri
Aapne mayur chan kyu rakha?
Mayur to samajh aya but chan?
Jakiee chan k fan ho??
Chalo main vapis sone k koshish me
N ha thank u solo much apke wishes k liye!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Hello Riddhi
I am really loss of words dear...speechless!!!
firstly the concept and the way you scripted it all hats off to you !!!👏👏
Both AsYa's emotions...so well portrayed...
and Poem...wow !!!! that was so beautiful!!!
Loved reading this flawless work dear !!!
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
It was beautifully written OS
Loved it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
it's very cute and beautiful ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Dada sojao!!

India me hi rehte ho na??
Its 3:30!
Mera phone Bajne laga kai baar mail se so I checked coz it was really disturbing jab neend bohat mushkil se aayi ho
N again itne pyaare comment k liye thank you
U Always make me smile
N seriously aapko vo yaad hai?
That was its you forever
Mujhe laga kisiko yaad bhi nahi hogi
Are baap re
I was par fir laga koi interested nahi hai so stopped writing
Itni detailed yaad hai
Vo puri story clear hai
U know the Vesper's whisper...honestly speaking vo ussi story ka ek part tha...kaafi baadme but yes
It was diff but yahi concept tha
Although it was a fun story
I m seriously touched... Itna yaad hai aapko n itne comments
U know u remind me of my sweetest cousin...unka naam bhi aapke jesa hai
Mayank
U speak the same way
Thank u dada
Cloud nine p
N ab so jao
Sirf ek query hai meri
Aapne mayur chan kyu rakha?
Mayur to samajh aya but chan?
Jakiee chan k fan ho??
Chalo main vapis sone k koshish me
N ha thank u solo much apke wishes k liye!!

I don't remember much but shayad uss time tumhari kuch 2 stories thi...usmein se yeh ek meko aache se yaad hai...U know ek scene mein shayad Asad behosh hota hai ya Zoya...haa shayad Zoya behosh hoti hai...Rashid uske paas sabse pehle jaata hai...but still he denies to patch up with them and isi baat pe Asad Rashid ladte hai and it is decided that he will go to some boarding school...and phir who kahin sea point ke yahan ASYA meeting...shayad aisa heee kuch tha khiar...itna aacha toh likh rahi hoo...free ho jab who story resume karo...
And " CHAN " ke peeche ek raaz hai joh main harr kisi ke saath share nhi karta...😆...but haan it is related to my pet name..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Oh nickname
Daya pata lagao
Yes zoya behosh hoti hai
N then dono alag hojate
Lekin aage jab vo milte hai to its fun kyunki vo usse pehchanta hai par zoya nahi janti
N fir sab ek doosre ko ullu banate hai
But then entry hoti hai tanveer and sana k
Sana is good but not tanveer
N tanveer turns out to b the daughter of gaffur...jiski vajah se rashid anwar alag hue the
N sana uski sis
Tanveer is to take revenge from asad but sana ko pata chaljata hai on the day of her engagement with asad to vo bhaag jaati hai
Yes jab zoya k baat hoti hai asad k liye to tanveer delib sana k name se emotionally manipulate karti hai
Isliye sana n asad k engagement hoti hai but she runs away uske baad asya k story shuru hoti hai n jab sab accha hota hai to sana vapis aati hai still positive but...
Ye plot tha however it was quite funny
Kya pata dada
Topic closed
Ha meri three stories thi!
Two ROM com one mystery
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
This was damn emotional... !!!
Master piece Riddhi...
Asad and his fear...
zoya and her confidence.
sensitive topic
and you rocked it...
waitingfor more of yourwrting

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