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MOnkEy_rAngEr

@MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

It was so so beautifully written

Very well written 🥳

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Absolutely loved it

Our asya version of Ajaa Nachale

Love the happy ending

But u could have feel the love and the respect asya had for each other

They didn't need words to express themselves even if only knowing each other for a few days

Love it

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Wow Riddhi
Its such an awesome OS 😛
Enjoyed it 2 d core
this song was my fvrt
start main lga same story hai shayad but when I read further toh found u added ur own touch 😊
& that's d beauty yahan jyada mast lga mujhe 😉
U nailed it totally
sorry 4 short reply actually abhi jana hai 😳

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awesome OS dear
Loved it
Song was perfect
She took the risk & her life was changed.
Indeed we have to take risk sometimes for good. It's worth that we tried rather than repent later on & on this case Asya took the risk & now living their life happily with family.
Thanks for res & special mention & pm

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Firstly, thanks for the special res at the end and the special mention at the start of the update

It was truly unexpected but was an extremely special gesture

Thanks for it!

Coming to the OS,

It was flawless and extremely beautiful

"O re piya" has always in the list of my favorite songs and it was a treat to have this song on asya

Loved the whole concept of the story with a special mention to dance playing the cupid for asya

It actually brought a huge smile on my face at the ending

Was just amazing

And loved the banner. Was truly suiting the story

Eagerly waiting for the many more OSes to come from you😉😊

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Riddhii...😃

I don't know maine aisa kya kiya hai joh tumne mera naam Special Mention mein daal diya hai...I mean mere se better yahan bahut log hai joh mujhse aacha samjhte hai and comment karte hai...main toh bas try karta hu...aur thodi unki nakal bhi...😆 , but still I am elated and touched by your gesture...so a Biggg Thank Youuu For that...😃

Now as the above part is over I am starting the song now and comment...because who feel aati hai U see...

Even though yeh gaana meko bahut aacha lagta tha hai and abhi bhi hai...but shayad iss OS ke baad yeh aur bhi aacha lagne laga hai...😊

Coming to the Update...well Amazing , Beautiful , Intruguing and I would say better than anything I have read from Ur side...even though their are something which I don't agree on in this Update...still it is like Supeeerrr se Bhi Uppaarrr wala OS...😆👏👏👏

You know at a very young age and I don't know after Ur gap you have suddenly become this mature and well thoughtful Writer all over...like itna change kaise aagaya bhaiii...

Asad and Zoya very tailor made to perfectly fit in this backdrop...and I loved how U used the song as a insipiration...par meko darr tha starting se ki kahin koi lafda na hoojaye ending as in the real one end aacha nhi hota hai,...but this is where I LOVE Fanfictions...U guys have the power to see a Good and imagine something for a bad thing and that is what U did with this...so 👏👏

And now the only thing I didn't liked about the Update was Running away from the family thing...even though yeh story mein justify hoga but asal mein its a STRICT NO..😒

Keeping that aside...well Thank You again for this OS...

I hope their are pretty more to come...

Continue soon with more of this...and take Care..😃

# A Special Shout out for Reema I mean IMMORTALOVE for her Excellent Banners...which are always a good start for any story...😃👏

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Mayur Dada!!

Firse naching ab main

Anyways reply baad me

Yaha aapko Jo accha nahi laga vo mujhe bhi nahi laga

Coming to real life endings...yes there are chances k worst ending ho and if it was long TS or story may be I would have never shown this...happy endings are one in a million chance! But yaha pe hai...kai baar nikal aati hai...while writing this I had this thing ki agar vo jhut bol raha ho...ya if he is faking etc...but I have mentioned this k fir vo ek jagah se dusri jagah jaati...n her most trust worthy ppl approved right so ek baar vo chance le sakti thi...even naina gave her no. Bcoz of the same doubts...and finally the song demanded that..at times we have to trust on point one percent chances... There are few things Jo hum day to day life me risk lete hai n successful bhi hote hai,..

N bhagne wali baat is the worst thing

But bcoz of the last two lines I had too

When I discussed this one with surbhi Di mere pas el alternate part tha but still usi line p atakta tha

I have seen a very close family friend of mine suffering it...they used to break down so bitterly that I used to cry

Both parents n daughter were right with their POV only communication was the prblem .

But last yr she came back with her husband...and probably the best decision she made bcoz her husband is seriously a very nice person... Probably better than what her parents could have found and even they agree to it

But their cries and every breakdown is clear in my mind...n I hate this running away business

If you remember vo second part of my TS...mene vaha par bhi end me bhagaya...

After everything ...

So even I hate this running away thing but the demand of the story was such!

Anyways thank u Dada itne pyaare reply me liye...proper reply very soon but ye ek cheez clear karna tha... Mayur da you rock!!!