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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Surbhi12



Yeah thank you so much Aishwarya! I wanted to ask you a question.
Actually I wanted to update my story but as I am new in the
forum i don't seem to know how to do so. I even emailed the india forum
but they won't reply. I was wondering If u could help me out with it?
Thank you


Its simple dear...just type and copy paste the update in the "Post Reply" option...and then provide the link in the front page...but as you are a Newbie you won't be able to provide links...so, you can give the page number in the front page...Copy paste that link and send it through PM...hope this is clear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--


Its simple dear...just type and copy paste the update in the "Post Reply" option...and then provide the link in the front page...but as you are a Newbie you won't be able to provide links...so, you can give the page number in the front page...Copy paste that link and send it through PM...hope this is clear...




Oh Thank you so much! You just made my day!



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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Hello guys, I am back with the next part, which happens to be the last part. Thank you for such beautiful feedbacks on previous part. And yeah goodness me, I didn't even know how to update the story. Thanks to muskaan17rocks and --Aishwarya-- for helping me out with it . And please do give me feedbacks!

Part 2:

Zoya: Allah miyan, please help me.

THE BACKYARD

The backyard was filled with fairy lights, candles and flowers. Asad truly wanted Zoya to feel special. Zoya finally went towards the backyard and saw the decorations. She was shocked. She started looking for Asad but couldn't find him.

Zoya: Allah miyan, what's wrong with Mr. Khan? Has he gone crazy? Who on earth would plan such a romantic date for a breakup?! Mr. Khan must be really excited to call off this wedding; after all he thinks that I am such a misfit for his family. But where is he?

She looked for a while and was about to go back. Suddenly she felt a familiar hand from behind. She knew who it was. It was Asad. She turned back. He was dressed in a black and white 3 piece suits with a red tie and a pocket square, matching her sari. They were lost in each other's eyes. (Mitwa moment)

Asad: Ms. Fa.. Zoya

Zoya was surprised because he was calling her by her name! Her name sounded perfect from his mouth. Zoya had absolutely no clue what was going on. Asad pulled her closer to him in to his arms. At this point Zoya had shivers running down her spine. It always happened whenever he touched her.

Asad: You know that we are very different from each other right?

Zoya thought that he was going to call off the wedding and was about to run away, but he stopped her and pulled her even closer with his hand on her waist.

Asad: No Zoya. Today you will silently listen to me. I don't know what your reaction will be after listening to what I have to say. But neither I will go, nor I will let you go before finishing my words.

Asad: Zoya I wanna tell you the truth.

Zoya: W.. What truth Mr. Kh (asad stopped her but touching her lip with his finger)

Asad: please call me Asad. I want to hear my name from your mouth.

Zoya was shocked as hell! First he planned such a romantic date for a breakup and now he is asking her to call by his name.

Zoya: What truth, A.. Asad?

Asad: My truth, your truth ... our truth.

Zoya to herself: Allah miyan, this doesn't look like a break up at all. What the hell is Mr Khan up to? And what truth is he talking about?

Asad: Zoya, I always had this special sort of attraction towards you since the day I first saw you in the Mosque (Dargah). These unknown, unrevealed feelings. I always wanted to hide my feelings because I never understood them. But now I have understood those feelings.

Zoya: Wh..What feelings Asad?

Asad: ... Love ( Mitwa happy version )

Zoya was shocked as well as happy to hear that. Her eyes went widened.

Asad: I know Zoya, you are really different from me and everyone else I know and that's what makes you even more special to me. I always felt this strong connection between you and me but I was afraid to share it with anyone and decided to stay as away from you as possible. But I realised that the strong connection is nothing else than love. And I also realised that it's not important to be like each other, it's important to be there for each other whatever the situation is. Zoya... I love you.

Tears fell off zoya's eyes and a wide smile formed upon her face, when she finally heard those 3 magical words. She still couldn't believe what just happened. She always wanted to hear those 3 words from his mouth and that just happened! Asad saw her crying. He kissed away her tears. He kissed her eyes. Zoya was blushing really hard and turned crimson really fast.

Asad: I told you about my feelings, now it's your turn Zoya. I wanna know if you feel the same.

Zoya: You know Mr.Kh.. Asad, I also used to feel this connection between you and me. We both used to fight a lot about really little things but at the same time we used to care a lot about each other. Before meeting you and your family, the only people that mattered to me were Aapi and Jiju. But as I spent time with Phupi and Najma, they started mattering to me. I never thought that you would matter so much in my life but I started to feel bad when you said that I was a bad influence to Najma. I always used to wonder "Why do I feel bad whenever you shout at me?" because before that I never cared what people think about me. Then the day came when you saved me from getting married to Akram and also saved me from getting buried alive. Then I started feeling this strange but strong connection. But I have also realised that it was indeed love. Yes Asad, I love you too. I have always loved you. I always had these feelings for you.

Asad suddenly remembered that he always did wrong with Zoya. He never gave her a chance to explain herself. He always judged Zoya, either because of her clothes she wore or because of her thoughts and beliefs. And moreover he called Zoya a bad influence! He felt terrible.

Asad: I am sorry Zoya. (teary eyes) I am really sorry.

Zoya: (In shock) Why Asad?

Asad: For every thing I did. For always judging you, shouting at you even when you didn't do anything wrong, never giving you a chance to explain yourself, calling you a bad influence and all those big and little things I did which brought tears in your eyes. I am really sorry.

Zoya: Please don't be sorry Asad. I know you didn't do all those things deliberately.

Zoya: (holding Asad's hands) Asad I always used to think you are an egoistic person but in these past few months, I got to know the real you. You are sincere son, loving brother and a really good human being and you might make an amazing life partner!

She hugged him really tight. "I love you, Asad" she said. He chuckled and hugged her back. They both were in a different world now. "I love you too Zoya" He whispered in her ear, hugging her even tighter.

So guys that was it! I hope you guys liked it. If u did, then please feel free to press the like button. And do give me feedbacks!

Edited by Surbhi12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Amazing update
Loved reading it
Especially the sweet confession of their feelings
It would have been so much special only if tanveer hadn't ruined it in the show
But glad to atleast read it on asya
Was actually a treat to read
Please do write more
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awesome update dear
Loved it
Confession was simple & sweet.
She was shocked first & then confess as well. It was beautifully written
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update dear
Loved it
Confession was simple & sweet.
She was shocked first & then confess as well. It was beautifully written
Thanks for PM



Thank you so much love ! I am glad you loved it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing update

Loved reading it
Especially the sweet confession of their feelings
It would have been so much special only if tanveer hadn't ruined it in the show
But glad to atleast read it on asya
Was actually a treat to read
Please do write more
Thanks for the pm😊



I am glad you loved it! And yeah it would have been amazing if Tanveer wasn't there to ruin all the mitwa moments.
And by the way, have you written any stories on AsYa? If you have then could you please suggest me some, because I would love to read them!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Very nice
So so good to have an asya uninterrupted confession
No tanveer to ruin the beautiful moment
As Asad told zoya of their truth
Love It
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: anopama

Very nice

So so good to have an asya uninterrupted confession
No tanveer to ruin the beautiful moment
As Asad told zoya of their truth
Love It



Thank you very much! I am glad u loved it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Surbhi12



I am glad you loved it! And yeah it would have been amazing if Tanveer wasn't there to ruin all the mitwa moments.
And by the way, have you written any stories on AsYa? If you have then could you please suggest me some, because I would love to read them!!

No, I haven't written any stories
But, there are definitely some which I am sue you will love
You can read any story by saima di
Here, is the link to her index: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3689478
Then there is this awesome story name - "the gift of life" and also "crossing time" by the same author. Search it on google and you would get the links. There are many more but I seem to be forgetting them as of now. But I am sure you would love the above suggestions😊

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