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Posted: 9 years ago
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What's up people?😃 Well I am a very big fan of AsYa (KaBhi) so I decided to write this story. I badly wanted Asad to tell Zoya how much he adored her straight after realizing his feelings for her, but sadly that didn't happen :( so, I decided to share my imagination with u guys. And as I am new to this forum, this is my first ever post on this forum. I hope u guys like it. (By the way, I didn't even know how to post here 😳 so i had to a bit of research 😆 but yeah. :) And please do give me some feedbacks! 😊

Part 2: page 3

Ishq Per Zor Nahin

Part 1:


Khan's villa

Imagine this scene after Asad lies to Zoya's aapi that they are getting married soon for ammi's sake, even though he knows that ammi is perfectly fine. And dilshad makes asad realise that he loves her. (There is no Tanver 😉)

Asad's room

Dilshad: Yes asad, you love her, don't you?

Asad: Ammi... actually.. Ms farroqui.. and .. me .. we are very.. different..

Dilshad: Not again Asad. I didn't ask you how different you guys are. I just asked you if you love her.

Asad: Woh .. actually ..

Dishad sighs

Asad: Yes ammi.. I do love her... But she isn't right for our family. She is really different from us.

Dilshad: Asad now that you've finally agreed that you love her I just wanna say something. Asad, It's not important to "be like" each other, its important to "be there" for each other. Mark my words, she is best for you. Just go and tell her how much she means to you. She must be really upset. After all, she thinks that you lied to her aapi.

Asad: Okay ammi... But..

Dilshad: Now what Asad?

Asad: Actually I want Ms. Far... Zoya to know how much she means to me and .. for that I need to prepare a lot of things.

Dishad: I get it. Don't worry. I will do something. You start preparing ;)

Asad: ... Thank you ammi.

Dilshad pecks his forehead and leaves

Asad smirks: Be ready Ms. Far... Zoya!! Just few more hours.

Zoys's room

Zoya to herself: What does Mr. Khan think of himself? He can do whatever he likes. That's not fare. What am I going to say to aapi when she knows the truth? I never saw her so happy before. Now I am feeling so guilty. I wasn't this guilty even when I ran away from my wedding.

Dilshad knocks Zoya's door.

Dilshad: Zoya can I come in?

Zoya: Yeah phuphi.

Dilshad: Actually Zoya, my friend invited us for dinner but Asad has got some important works to do so he went to his office and there wont be anyone in house. I just wanted to ask you if you could stay..

Zoya: Yeah sure phuphi. When are you leaving?

Dilshad: We were just about to leave. We might stay there today if it's fine with you.

In hall

Zoya: Yeah that's fine phupi. Bye Phupi. Bye Tamatar. Enjoy your dinner.

Dilshad and Najma leave

Zoya to herself: I am alone in this house today. Why am I feeling so scared? I should just go back to my room and sleep.

Zoya's room

Zoya: Allah Miyan! What's wrong with me? It's just 7:00 pm now and I was about to sleep!

Zoya turned around and saw a beautifully wrapped gift on the table. She went near and opened it up. Her eyes brightened up. She saw a black net saree with pink and green embroidery at the edge with contrast black backless net blouse. She found a note: I once saw you wearing sari and you were looking absolutely stunning. Backyard 8pm, wearing this.

(This picture is not clear but yeah...)

Zoya was amazed as well as curious to know what was going on. But she was afraid as well because she thought that he was going to call off the wedding. And she knew that she wouldn't be able to hear it from his mouth BECAUSE SHE LOVED HIM. Yeah she did.

She finally got ready. She looked amazing indeed in sari.

Precap: I love you Zoya <3


Hello guys and girls, I just posted part 2 of this story! Please do read it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Welcome in the forum
first work is always dearest to everyone makes nervous
don't worry about this
Beautiful update
loved it
asad is going to confess
continue it
asifiqbalsh thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear
Loved it
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Hey! Welcome!
Well this was awesome!!;
First of all the concept... After everything one defo wishes to see this...alas!!
Nyways... This is awesome
I loved the dialogues and presentation!!
And thank god no billi..he he
Brilliant start
Plzz continue soon
Will be waiting!

P.s don't worry... Its amazing... First stories are always close...n anything and ever thing is welcomed here... Trust me u may get addicted to the forum hehe
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Welcome to the forum dear
Glad to see you as well as the amazing start to the story
Loved the concept especially due to the absence of tanveer😉
So asad is all set to confess his love for zoya
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
hai,well your thought is awesome
bz i'm also new here and i'm just crazy ,mad ...for our hot ,cute, extraord couple ASYA (KABHI)
I Mean after these long years i cant get over them
and i'm satisfying myself with their onscreen offscreen scenes and esp with our amazing asya writers stories
simply, ASYA is like drug to me...
i was always love to write about them and still i wish to...and trust me ur storyline is just amazing...
i mean we know asad's intense love towards zoya bt i also disappointed when they didnt show it on the serial that how much he adores...
asad adores zoya...its so justifying which i always wanted to see
so i always imagined that myself,and now i'm exciting to read about them.
cont ...
cont soon as possible...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
update soon...

LUV ASYA(KABHI) FOREVER
MISSING THEM BADLY :(



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Posted: 9 years ago
#8

Thank you so much everyone! I will surely continue it soon. 😃
Edited by Surbhi12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: allwaysasya

Welcome in the forum
first work is always dearest to everyone makes nervous
don't worry about this
Beautiful update
loved it
asad is going to confess
continue it



Thank you so much 😃! I will surely continue it soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start dear
Loved it
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks



I am really glad that you loved it 😃. Thank you. I will continue it soon!

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