*New* AsYa TS : The Ties Of Heartbeatsl completed l Last part pg13 - Page 6

Originally posted by: life4me

Very nice. Continue soon pls.

Originally posted by: nilusoni

wonderful

excited for next

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

riddhi 🤗

le tere liye


🤣
🤣
Aiyooo!! Besharam...kapde pehen 🤣
i seriously love you yaar

I love you too teddy 🤗

armaan ka song aur wo bhi itne beautiful se

Ha

concept pe bethaya tune
i loved reading this seriously
written beautifully

Inni tarrif...makhan polish!! Uff!! Kyu??
start was gripping enough and thats where my interest lies everytime there's a question at the start of the stry

Itna padne ke baad bhi question n answer me interest hai...🤣

so i guess kuch mangalpuri si stry h
and kuch mishap hui

Are thank u thank u sooo muchhh

Ha kuch kuch
i love love mangalpuri track
abhi qh me bhi wohi dekhing na 😆
to full on mood me hu haha
Meee tooo😳

so tune bohat acha likha

Thank you sooo sooo sooo soo much🤗and how the flashback starts
asya ke bich ki convos bohat enjoy ki read karte waqt
somehow improper hi sahi
that was cute and natural

Natural hi rakhna tha...isliye..har baar not zaroori ki kuch heroic hi ho...and next chapter me unke love k depth clear hojeagi...hopefully



and m so curious ki kya hua asad ko

Kuch to hua hai kuch hogaya hai

...loveria hua to locha-e-ulfat bhi hoga

abhi mai last part ke baad lamba comment dungi
kabhi net ni chalta aur kabhi ye bhai pichepadta hai

Hehe okay okay no worries

Thank u sooo much jhaloofy!!

but really wanna thanku u
ki net tera bhi nahi chala but u called and u did so much
made me happy 😃😃

Are Its OK!! I loved it

Bara baje phone karke wish karne ka maza hi kuch aur hai

Love u yaar!!

love you ❤️
update soonish ok

Love you tooo diii!!!!

Yo!! WA pe ping kardungi jab karne wali hongi...bas aapke padosi WiFi on rakhe 😆

Thank u sooo zyada much for such a beautiful and adorable comment di

Originally posted by: binuuu

Amazing start ridzz...👏👏

Totally loved this first part😃

Asya's encounters...Masha Allah...those were superb👏

Loved Asad's nature...

Loved the way their friendship formed...

And that changed to love...

Aww. ..zoya's didn't go there...bechara Asad

His surprise ruined

Hope that will take a proper decision and gaffur will accept their wish..

Ek minute...ek minute...Is gaffur the reason for asya's this condition😡

And humeirah's trick went very well...he believed her😆

About Rashid and Dilshad...I think asad experienced the love and care within some minutes which he never got from his parents...

Waiting to know what happened next...

Plzz update soon...😊😊

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Great work..
Awesome..!
Loved it..
Curious to read how they ended up in jail..?
Is there any other connection between Dilshad and Asad..?

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Very Good part Riddhi..

It was intriguing as well...would love to read more..

Continue soonish..😊

Originally posted by: anuv6

beautiful update... very nice👏
i luvd it.

Looking forward to know what happens next

continue soon... waiting impatiently😊

LUV ASYA ( KABHI ) FOREVER❤️

Originally posted by: ayat20

Beautiful update

Originally posted by: sasir

Loved it..
Very interesting..
Waiting eagerly

Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini

First I want to cry .. Me kise dekh ri Hun meri pumpy 😭😭😭

Ages baad .. God I can't believe it's u .. Pumpy I missed u like anything .. N Teri story I m really up for it 😃😃

Next post about the ts ..

I really wanted to post this reply .. Still miss every fun we had .. U aishu, reema Di everyone ..

Love u pumpy