#1 AsYa FF ~ The 1st of April (Chapters 1-13)

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Looking forward to read

Plz not too much Hindi plz

Love azam he is too much

So he brought happiness into Asad life

waiitng for more

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Whhuuuhhhooo...You posted...!!!

AND NAAM KAHAN HAI? The title of the story is missing? Still a mystery? 😲

I can't wait for this story to start, I have been craving for AsYa ffs for so long, not finding any new one since such a long time...But now I have this one and I can't wait for more, to read and to discover more of Asad AHMED Khan...

An amazing, amazing start and the best part of this one is that the writer is brilliant as the concept is...So, huge expectation from you, kiddo...Feel so proud, the growth I see in you as a writer and as a person makes me feel so proud of you...I wish you all the best for the beautiful journey you are going to have while you write this story...More power to you...🤗

About proofreading, thank you for the mention, and you know that you are always welcome...Saying that, that whole process is nothing more than reading the chapters in advance...Woh bhi bulkil muft, muft, muft...😉

So, while I do feel so honored that I am going to be the first reader who is going to read the chapter before anyone of you...Feel free to think the writer as the one who is at blame for all the amazingness you are going to find in it...

Edited by A.Hajnal - 9 years ago

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

See, again, the page number 7...I am always at the page number 7 on your post/topics...😲

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Nice prologue dear
Asad azam scene was beautiful.
Their talks was good.
Waiting for story to start
Thanks for PM

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

I wonder what Azar's role is in the story?

Like his purpose

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Aju

@ajuswa19

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
thanks yaar aju. 😳 bus Almighty ki kripa hai baki sab chal raha hai. 😳 thank you for the kind words. I will update only once a week until mid of may 😆

welcome shelcome!🤗😳 LOVE U❤️

😲😆 UPDATE MAY MAIN ?🤣

yehi umeed h k may main toh ahija😉😆

Khair Almighty k kripa bani rhe aur aapki

jabardast entry hoti rhe!😆aur haan apke

dimag k daat deni hogi😳 metro m crowd

m bhi assa dhamaka! hayye!😉 asli KSG k

fan h yaar!😎

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Aleena

@aleena008

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Wow...Loved it...Cant wait to read more...CONTINUE SOON

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Thank you Arpita!
Even I loved the convo between the two.
Azam is V's (TheNamesV) creation. I'll try my very best to do justice 😳
How i wish it is so. But work may turn up. No surity. I feel like a donkey at field literally every single hour. 🤢
Thanks once again 🤗

Please do continue to pm me..
Will wait for an amazing story..

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

U r back with another story...waiting for further updates...will surely read when some free time is available in ma busy hospital duties...

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

I couldn't make out what is the relationship between asad and azam
But it for surely seems interesting
Looking forward to read this..:)
And yes we missed you..:)