AsYa story *~AAsMaNo pAr lIkhA~* part 2 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dhasuuu start loveddd it plz cont soon thanks for pm😃
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Interesting
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Happy to see you with ASYA(KABHI) story.😊
The Character Sketch was so Different and Interesting.😊
The Title was so Nice.😊
Please Continue soon and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊
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nice cs
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Part 1


A boy come to dinning table 4rm his room.

Boy:"asalam o alaikum dadi, gud morng abou ammi"
Dadi:"walaikum salam beta, kaise ho?"
Us k ami abou jxt sar hilate hain.
Boy:"dadi bilkul thek hun, ye najma kahan hai?"
Dadi:"najma abi ayi nai ame wali hogi, tum ne namaz e fajr ada ki? Or QURAN E PAK KI tilawat ki?"
Boy:"ji dadi mai ne namaz bhi parhi or tilawat e QURAN E PAK bhi"

Aik larki ati hai
Girl:"asalam o alaikum dadi, gud m0rng ami abou and subh bakhair asad bhai jaan"
All:"walaikum salam, gud m0rng najma beti, aao beitho break fast kr lo"
Naj:"bhai jaan raat kaisi guzri?"
Asa:"bhai ki jaan rat hamesha ki tarha achi guzri"

Dadi:"najma clg jana hai na tum ne ya nahi?"
Naj:"ji dadi jana hai mgr ayaan bhai k sath jaon gi"
Rash:"asad mujhy tum se bat krni thi"
Asad:"ji abou"
Rash:"ab tumhari age shadi ki ho gyi hai tu hum s0ch rahe thy k tumhari shadi kar di jaye"
Asad:"ok ap bata den mujhy shadi karni kahan hogi?"
Rash:"mai tumhari shadi ki bat kr raha hun kisi meeting ya deal k about bat kr raha hun"

Asad:"ap ne mujhy hamesha deal k lye hi istemal kia hai"
Sheen:"tameez se bat karo asad tum ye mat bholo k rashid tumhare abou hain, hum ne aj tak hamesha tumhara acha hi s0cha hai"
Asad:"abou or ap ne mere lye sirf acha ye kia hai k mujhy NAJMA jaisi sister di hai or ap ki shadi ki waja se mujhy mera bhai AYAAN mila hai"

Dadi:"ASAD"
Asad:"sorry dadi, bt yei fact hai"
"mujhy kis ne yad kia"
Asad:"aao ayaan tumhari bat ho rai thi"
Ayaan:"gud m0rng phopho phopha"
"gud m0rng beta"
Ayaan:"asalam o alaikum dadi jaan"
Dadi:"walaikum salam beta"

After breakfast.

Asad:"abou ap bat kis ki kr rahe thy"
Rash:"tanveer ki, tum s0ch lo raat tak bata dyna"
Asad:"ji thek hai, mai chaln"

Najma p.o.v
Bhai ka m0od nai thek kia karun kia karun
Yes bhai hamare sath rahen gye tu bhai ka m0od thek rahe ga.
P.o.v end.

Najma:"bhai jan ki ap hamare aj clg chalen gye?"
Ayaan in najma ear:"kia baat hai jo bhai ko sath ly kar jaa rai?"
najma:"bhai ka mood thek nai"
Ayaan:"haan bhai aj ap hamyen chohrne ayen na"
asad:"ok thek baba chalo 😊 "

In car

Najma:"bhai ap bilkul tensn na len,zarori nai k ap tanveer baji se hi shadi karen"
ayaan:"whattt???""
asad:"kia howa?"
Ayaan:"mai janta hun tanveer baji ko or mai ye shadi hargiz nai hone dun ga"
Asad:"meri tanveer frnd hai or agr shadi karni hai tu tanveer se behtar koi nai"

After 15 mins of argmnt
asad:"its fnl k mai shadi tanveer se kar raha hun, clg aa gya"

Car se nikalte howe
Najaan:"bhai plz soch len aik dafa phir"

A girl came to them
girl:"gud morng najma and ayaan"
Najma:"gud morng humaira"
with hug
ayaan:"gud mrng humaira u can hug me also" he winked at her
humaira are blushing
ye sb asad ki nighahun se chuhpta nai hai

Najma:"ayaan bhai ap bhi na kuch bhi bolte ho, humaira in se milo mere bhai jaan asad ahmed khan or bhai jaan ye humaira siddiqui meri frnd cum sister hain"
hum:"gud morng asad bhai jaan opss sorry may i"
asad:"yess y not u can call me bhai jaan, najma ki frnd ho tu tum meri choti si behn howi"
Hum:"thanx bhai jaan"
Asad:"ok ab mai chaln late ho raha hai, nd ayaan careful rehna bcz humaira meri ab behan hai"
nd left 4rm thr

T.b.c

I beg prdn 4 my mistake
Edited by Ariyabestessfan - 9 years ago
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Yay me 1st😊
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Omg I am in big trouble
Everything in Hindi
And I don't know Hindi
I have to use transalation to figure out what is happening
Ok so Asad is spoken to abt marriage to tanveer
And he is considering it and seems ok with it
Ayaan and Najma don't want him to marry tanveer
Dadi seems to be their great love
So Asad met humera and took her as a sister her being Najma friend
Haha he warn ayaan about his sis
So guess he will be meeting humera sister soon
Continue
Edited by anopama - 9 years ago
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Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳

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