COLDPLAY ASYA FOUR SHOT SS- COMPLETE - Page 2

amazing story...
loved the way of asya's friendship...
they both are the support of each other...
never thought asad will accept comer's offer...which turned his life up to down...
but at last everything became fine...great...
and they adopted two beautiful children... good...
beautifully penned...great job :)

Amazingly beautiful

A great work
lOved it very much
YOU are Awesome

now now
you made me live asya
speechless 👏

Awesome dear
Every emotion whether it is romantic, action, or abt cruel reality was beautifully written. They made their life together but a mistake of one, destroyed it. Liked the way Zoya held him & bring him back to normal. Asya with their 2 daughters visited Canada as per Zoya wish.

Wonderful wonderful wonderful!!!!!!! Loved everything. Please PM me if u write further. Just lovely

Originally posted by: Buddhu_Sa_Mann

GREAT GREAT 👏
I LOVE COLDPLAY ❤️
AND POTRAYING ASYA SO BRILLIANTLY YOU GO GIRL.
INNOVATING IDEA 😃
waiting for the two remaining

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Just read the last part too

You actually made me speechless with this amazing work dear

Happy to know that they realised each others importance and managed to leave their past behind

Loved the ending

Glad it was a happy one

Please do write more

Would love to read more from you😊

Originally posted by: cutie15

Wow
That was absolutely beautiful
I loved it sooo much
Their story was full of varied emotions
They shared their pain, fought it together
They loved each other and didn't let anything come in between them at the end
It was such a noble idea to adopt kids
They were so cute
This story was very gripping and interesting
Very well written..:)

Originally posted by: Ihopelove

Marvelous, awesome, brilliant story. So intense and passionate one. At one time I thought someone going to come between asya when they start college or thought their success will create riff between them. But it turn out to be asad choosing wrong path thinking he will able to give world to zoya. When third part end I thought it will be end like zoyas father. But u again made me wrong by making them fight for their life. U know its harsh reality of life to become successful, to become powerful people choose wrong path and destroy their lives by their one hands. Only few able fight back to the darkness their drowning to and some give up.

Asad and Zoya decided to fight for their paradise and they won.

It was truly beautiful story one of the greatest story I have read up until now. And one of longest comment I give up until now. I am not good at words though but still once again I'll say Awesome, amazing beautifully written.''

I'll stop my blabbering here.

Keep writing lovely stories.'