*New* AsYa OS 'Hum Tere Nikah Mein Hain' - Page 10

Originally posted by: binuuu

real life incident mathlab ...yeh happened somewhere ashii ?? 😲

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Don't worry, it will be good

Originally posted by: ajanshul

Loverly os

Originally posted by: Linsie

awesome
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: _Annie_

Ooops! I'm late :(

Abhi unres karti hun padh ke :

Unres.

WOW. I mean, really. This was something extremely Amazing I've read in quite a time. You nailed it, Asshii. I mean, these are the kind of writings that leave a smile on my face once I finsih reading it and keep thinking about it😳

This so reminded me of Rishtey kuch adhoorey se, and Zoya's jealousy at Asad- Zara relation even though she was married to him, resembled like Yumna Zaidi's. Could so understand Asad's dilemma, poor thing thought he's cheating on his wife :(

So loved how Zara supported her sister. And the last scene was

Great Great GREAAAT job Ash😉 Keep posting write ups like these! Hope your exams went well😳

Love ya! 🤗

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Salaam AShiii..😊

First of all...

WELCOME BACK...

Coming to this Os..

Well aatey hee ek masaledaar OS likh dala aapne...jismein as always PAIN FULL LOVE was explained and written in the most best possible way...

I mean...first of all Zara ke liye aur kisi ko lelena tha...Sue ki Fav Bips ko hahhahaha tab aur bhi mazaa aata but haan issey ek ajeeb ironic touch mil gaya iss story ko as JW was KSG's past..

Khair keeping all of that aside..

I enjoyed reading this part..

Jaldi jaldi ab stories bhi start karoo..

Continue soon..😊

Tab tak ke liye..Take care.

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Thank u so much for the dedication.

It was a beautiful OS ashi, felt so real. My heart went out to Zoya...Asad was so oblivious. But they finally made it in the end

Love u lots

Originally posted by: jas91

last line 🤣

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

pyaar ki dukaan 🤗
mai agai poore teen din late jb se meko pta chala tune update di
kya karu m finding it hard to control meri excitement ki mai har jagah ek time pe hona maangri hu 🤣
WO HO ni ra mujhse
tu meri chod mai paglaye jari hu
ab update pe kuch bolna h uske pehle take a bow and claps 👏
the concept was really a topic to give it a go
so gud that u posted
tere macho bf ko daad deti hu 😆
bohat acha likha
well planned aur logic tha na
the song used were nice and what is my fav moment wo ye ki when zoya signs nikahnama with zara's name
ye lyrics ma lage


Kaghazon ke panno par
Dil ke naqsh likh baithe
Jo bhi kuch hamara tha
Tere naam likh baithey

and kese asad then realizes ki he wants to spend time with zoya on seperation track gud job us tym pe both zara nd zoya came closer so that was again dorming the base of the whole scenario
uff but mu kitni hui 😆
usey laga wo ussey pyar krti asya ko laga ek dusre se pyar ni karte ...and terrace wala scene likha acha
but then they married after everything and what a developing os
kamaal ho tussi pkd
tofa qubool karo 🤣
I really love this...affu ka banner gazab h and jen ko le ayi hahaha chal koi na
tu esehi different likhte jana
mwuaah

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

walaikum salaam mayur 😛

agar fawad welcome karne aane wala tha toh pehly hi bolna tha mai kab se aa jati 😆

rahi baat jenny ki... woh mujhy kch khaas pasand nahi hai par socha KaJen fans se thoda panga liya jaye 🤣

Allah Miyan !!!! Sue ki fav is BIPS 🤢 kya yaar or koi nahi milli kya

wese mayur idea acha hai how about i write something in reverse jaha zara is negative waha BIPS will suit 😃 😆

hayeee afridi bhi aaya tha

thank you sooo much for the beautiful comment mayur

i'm glad u liked it

will update my stories soon

In Sha Allah