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Originally posted by: Ajuzangel

Wow love it

Please continue it
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Chapter 1

" Utho zoya,utho" ringing loud words in her ears .she kept pillow on her ears turned around and slept again. She is the lovable person in the house. Her aapi calling her but she just ignored. Next week Zoyas College will start .They will shift from Bhopal to Delhi. Zeenat and zoya is Daughter of Gaffur siddiqui. Both struggle for their needs.

Zeenat came upto her rang clock alarm in her ear.she wake up ."kya aapi" today is Sunday ,so don't disturb me please"."Ha today is Sunday but we are shifting to Delhi so train on sharp11.oo am.not in your time madam" zeenat scolded her sweetly.

"oh.., i forgot totally. abhi aayi "she hugged her aapi and left towards bathroom.

"zoya, I am going to give resignation letter to Mr. Kazi(principal of zeenat's school).so get ready with your stuff and take breakfast also" zeenat informed her and leave from there.

At school

In Principal office

"Asalamwalaikum Uncle.."zeenat stood at the door and called him .one old man sat on chair. keep busy with the write something. mr.kazi is childhood friend of Gaffur and family friend also. After Gaffur death he had care about zeenat and zoya.

He looked up. Slide is spects up and saw from glass. "ohhh,zeenat beta.come "

He welcomed her warmly. Spread smile on both of them .Zeenat came in cabin and sat on chair.she kept her regignation letter in front of him.

"Aakhir tumne faisla kar hi liya,hume chodne ka" he asked her with sad tone.

"ji.zoya ki college start hone wali hai to jana padega" she told him softly .she knew that he suggest her to kept zoya in hostel but zeenat didn't compromise with her security and her needs. She gave her 10 years of life to zoya. She didn't married yet for zoya only. She wants to zoya will be successful business women in her life or at least settled in her life.

"aura age kya karne ka irada hai?"Mr.kazi asked her.

"We booked 1bhk house on rent and I applied in school. One school gave me appointment letter also. so ..." zeenat said

"Then you almost settled down...best of luck. Take care of you and zoya also...don't forgot me come here when you get time"

"Thank you... uncle. I will"she turned to go Kazi uncle uttered some word.zeenat stood at door and she looked other side.

"he also living in Delhi zeenat and may be..."

"Sorry uncle ,we have to look forward . Past gives you more pain forgot all things so please..."one tears drops down from her eyes and she leaved from there.

At Delhi

He is the most demanding, handsome, dream of every girl, carefree person ASAD AHMAD KHAN. Son of Rashid Ahmad khan and shirin Ahmad khan . He never thinks about tomorrow. Every day comes only for enjoyment. His father is trusty of Symbiosis College. He is king of college. Every girl wants her attention. He flirts with any girls but never felt in love .

Almost his morning came in noon. Break the rules his most favorite work it's from college or house also. Rashid wants to Asad will gave respect to his step mother shirin and his step brother and sisters. He grew up his business in whole world but fell down to build his own son as a good person at least.

At dining table

Everyone was taking breakfast except Asad. This house is like pyramid. No one laugh at loud and have time to talk with each other. Rashid busy with the meetings, shirin busy with her so called kitty parties. Both didn't have time to look at their child.

"Where is Asad "Rashid asked servant.

"In his room "he told him

"Go and call him"servent left to call him.

"He came at mid night. His friends left him here.he didn't have condition to stood up" shirin told him. Rashid never asked him about his friend circle and his routine .he only gave him money when he needs"

Asad got less marks in last year. Rashid is trusty of Symbiosis College so they gave him admission under pressure.

"Send him in study room." He left from there. Everyone look at each other. To think about what will come up to next.

In Asad room

Servant called him but he didn't reply. He opened door but didn't find Asad in his room. Asad already left house and gone for outing with friends. Servant ran up to shirin and told her she left already.

"Mam, he already left his room" evil smile spread on her face.

"ok , go at your work ,I will handle him "she went to study room.

At study room

Rashid scanning his was reading some file. She knocked at the door

"Yes" he looked up at the door. Shirin entered with coffee.

"He already left the room. He didn't have respects either you and me also. Send him his nani's house for some days. At least we can stay in piece" shirin hate him with the core. Rashid didn't like her behavior but Asad didn't leave any space to talk in his favor. He behave which she wants kicked out Asad out of house and all property will transfer on Imraan name.

Imraan is younger step brother of Asad. Imraan also hate him because he assumes that Rashid gave more attention towards him.

At penthouse

Asad was enjoying holiday with his friends .Rehaan is his best friend .He is his childhood friend. He knew him very well. he share with him all his secrets . All busy with party except Asad .he sat on the chair looked upat the sky. One hand touched his shoulder .he looked back and smiled at him

"What happens?"

"Nothing, just..."

"Missing Ammi."

Asad nodded at him. He take him in ahug.He knew that shirin never behave with him like a mother. she always shouted at him and complaint to Rashid about his mistakes.

"You know what, Allah always send a person who loves you, care about you like friend. My bro in your case Allah will send you an angel for you just wait and watch." Asad was happy to hear those words because after Dilshad death he was hungry for love. Both hugged each other again.

Edited by azsumay - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
awesome
wow asya clg lv story...yippie...after so many time..
waiting..
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Ohh yes plz continue :) Awesome & very interesting concept :) plz update soon.. eagerly waiting :) :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kadia717

awesome

wow asya clg lv story...yippie...after so many time..
waiting..
update soon

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: tv05

Interesting...

Continue it...

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolKaBhi

Ohh yes plz continue :) Awesome & very interesting concept :) plz update soon.. eagerly waiting :) :)

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

Zeenat and Zoya is Daughter of Gaffur Siddiqui. Both struggle for their needs.

" Utho zoya,utho" ringing loud voice in her ears .she kept a pillow on her ears turned around and slept again. She is the lovable person in the home.

Her aapi calling her, but she just brushed aside.Next week Zoyas College will initiate .They will shift from Bhopal to Delhi.

Zeenat came upto her rang clock alarm in her ear.she wake up ."Kya aapi" today is Sunday ,so don't disturb me please"."Ha today is Sunday but we are shifting to Delhi so train on sharp11.oo am.not in your time madam" Zeenat scolded her sweetly.

"oh.., i forgot totally. abhi aayi "she hugged her aapi and left towards bathroom.


"Zoya, I am running to give resignation letter to Mr. Kazi(principal of Zeenat's school).so get ready with your stuff and take breakfast also" Zeenat informed her and leave from there.



At school

In Principal office

"Asalamwalaikum Uncle.."Zeenat stood at the doorway and called him .One old man sat on a chair. keep busy with the write something.
mr.kazi is childhood friend of Gaffur and family friend also. After Gaffur death he had care about zeenat and zoya.

He looked up and smiled. Slide is spects up and saw from glass. "ohhh,zeenat beta.come "

He welcomed her heartily. Spread smile on both of them .Zeenat came in cabin and sat on chair.she kept her regignation letter in front of him.

"Aakhir tumne faisla kar hi liya,hume chodne ka" he asked her with sad tone.

"Jew.Zoya ki college, start hones Wali hai to Jana padega" she told him softly .She knew that he suggests her to keep Zoya in a hostel, but Zeenat didn't compromise with her security and her demands. She gave her 10 years of life to zoya. She didn't married yet for zoya only. She wants to Zoya will be successful business women in her life or at least settled in her lifespan.

"aura age kya karne ka irada hai?"Mr.kazi asked her.

"We booked 1bhk house on rent and I applied in school. One school gave me appointment letter also. so ..." zeenat said

"Then you almost settled down...best of luck. Take care of you and zoya also...don't forgot me come here when you get time"

"Thank you... uncle. I will, "she reversed to go Kazi uncle uttered some word.Zeenat stood at the door and she looked other side.

"he also living in Delhi zeenat and may be..."

"Sorry uncle ,we have to look ahead . PaPast gives you more pain forgot all things then please..."one tears drop down from her eyes and she left from there.

At Delhi


He is the most demanding, handsome, dream of every girl, carefree person ASAD AHMAD KHAN. Son of Rashid Ahmad khan and shirin Ahmad khan . He never thinks about tomorrow. Every day comes only for enjoyment. His father is trusty of Symbiosis College. He is king of college. Every young woman wants her attention. He flirts with any girls, but never fell in love .

Almost his morning came at midday. Violate the rules his most favorite work, it's from college or house also. Rashid wants to Asad will gave respect to his step mother Shirin and his step brother and sisters. He grew up his business in the whole world but fell down to build his own son as a good soul at least.


At dining table

Everyone was taking breakfast except Asad. This mansion is like a pyramid. No one laugh at loud and have time to talk with each other. Rashid busy with the meetings, children busy with her so called kitty parties. Both didn't have time to look at their kids.

"Where is Asad "Rashid asked the servant.

"In his room, "he told him

"Go and call him"servant left to call him.

"He arrived at midnight. His friends left him here.he didn't have condition to stand up" Shirin told him. Rashid never asked him about his friend circle and his routine .He only gave him money when he needs"

Asad got less marks in the last yr. Rashid is trusty of Symbiosis College so they granted him admission under pressure.

"Send him in study room." He departed from there. Everyone looks at each other nervously. To think about what will come up with next.


In Asad room

The servant called him, but he didn't answer.He opened the door, but didn't find Asad in his way.. AAsad already left the home and gone for outing with friends.A servant ran up to Shirin and told her she left already.

"Mom, he already left his room" evil smile spreads on her face.

"Ok , go at your work ,I will handle him, "she proceeded to study the room.


At study room

Rashid is scanning his was reading some file. She knocked on the door

"Yes, " he looked up at the doorway. Shirin entered with coffee.

"He already left the room. He didn't have respects either you and me as well. Send him his Nani's house for some days. At least we can stay in piece" Shirin hate him to the heart. Rashid didn't like her behavior, but Asad didn't leave any space to talk in his favor. He behaves, which she wants to kick out Asad out of house hold and all property will transfer on Imraan name.


Imraan is younger step brother of Asad. Imraan also hates him because he assumes that Rashid gave more attention towards him.

At penthouse

Asad was enjoying a holiday with his friends .Rehaan is his best ally .He is his childhood friend. He knew him pretty well. he share with him all his secrets . All busy with party except Asad .he sat on the chair looked upat the sky. One hand touched his shoulder .he looked back and smiled at him

"What happens?"

"Nothing, just..."

"Missing Ammi."

Asad nodded at him. He take him in ahug.He knew that shirin never behave with him like a mother. she always shouted at him and complaint to Rashid about his mistakes.

"You know what, look at them."
Rehaan looked at his friends. "They are with you because of money. You have to leave them as soon as possible.
Because true friend is like to live with you in any situation"
Asad smiled at him. "is it possible in this 21st century"
"Why not " Asad pulled him in hug.
Asad was happy to hear those words because after Dilshad death he was hungry for love.


Next day
It's a college first day of Zoya. Then she didn't want to be late. She's ready to go, but unawareness about the local bus schedule.she chooses to go by taxi.

At the road

One car slightly dashed auto. The driver came out and try to stop them, but that car driver sling money towards him. "Bigadi Hui bap ki aulad" he threw that money, but Zoya stopped him.

"Nahi Bhaiya,why you throw out .If he doesn't have value of money, but somewhere someone needs ."She takes this money and gave to a blind old man who begging for help. He gave blessing to her. Zoya payoff to taxi and left to take another taxi .

At college

She enters in college. She saw that same car parked in the parking area. She came up to the car and punctured tires with the help of hair pin and smiled with naughtiness and left from there.

Hope you like it 😊
Ignore my mistakes

Edited by azsumay - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res for saima aapi, sweet aapi,binnu, nayab,aju shailu,Julie, Gita, rada,simi,ashu,vaishu
abi,asif,mayur ,anupama ,Nona, srushti
khush, Nikki Arpita, sanjhiri, nilu, asif,abi,mayur,jas,ashi,aroo,annie
Gouri, dipti ,shama, aseela, ayat ,fatima and
all readers who following this story 🤗
Edited by azsumay - 9 years ago

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