Asya/KaBhi OS: Designed by his love - Page 3

Originally posted by: kobeb

awesomee!!

Originally posted by: nnn

OOOHHH MY GOD !!!

u got my butterflies racing love !🤪

incredible.. absolutely loved it ❤️

when i saw ur pm i just knew it would be something out of this world and it was👏🤗

Originally posted by: anopama

Omg this was absolutely beautiful

U had me at he know her

Loved it

No he wasn't a pedophile 😆

He just found love with his BFF little sister

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

This was seriously so beautiful

Loved it to the core

Wonderful concept and very gripping

😊

Originally posted by: cutie15

Oh my god girl you rock..!!
I sooo loved this..
It was soo cute adorable and what not
Oh my that was like sooo good
Ahhh such a sweet love story yaar..!
Awesome just awesome..:)
Hugs to you babe.. You are mind blowing 🤗

Originally posted by: maha70

Amazing Story

Thanks for pm...u r such a wonderful writer...👏

Luvd it...Keep writing on AsYa😊

Originally posted by: jas91

U made me feel out of d world Mojo my Jani🤗

if I would have been a boy I would have married u🤣 cuz I love u so much but hey don't get scared Jani I m straight😆😆 but still I love u 😉

HAHAHAHHAHA! I would definitely marry you if you were a boy sweetheart! In a heartbeat! I love you tooo! I am straight too, but no harm in a bit of love from the same sex aheeeyyy!

U know what Jani whenever I read ur stuff I feel transported in Asya world

I am glad, that is the intention!

U paint every Asya story wid a different shade of Love. Every concept freshly baked by that amazing talented brain of urs & I fell in love wid every new shot😛 that's why I m loving 1 shots more than FF's these days cuz they r filled wid love ❤️

That is the biggest compliment ever ever! My FF are boring, that is why I give up on them after a bit!

Thinking of doing OS'es only.

like in this 1 Asad was Zoya's crush since teenage. I suppose he kept himself away cuz she was too young that time 2 b getting involved so strongly wid Him mayb cuz I can't accept any other silly excuse. 5 years age difference or him being scared of Haroon his bro was useless 😆

I think it was more than that, he was fresh a graduate wanting to make his mark, fresh with ideas. He has always loved and protected Zoya. But she was still in high school, only sixteen and her whole life ahead of her! But ofcourse, even now if Haroon was alive, he would definitely punch Asad's face but he would happily give her away! I don't exactly know what kept them away!

Every single line had me hooked Zoya's entry was blasting, Asad's entry had oozing sexiness, their tashan wala interview, their blazing chemistry in coffee cubicle, Asad sending her snacks melted me, those text gosh butterflies dancing, visit 2 their home & that confession had me aweing seeing so much love ❤️

U again rocked it my girl now I guess I can happily say u rock my world sweetheart🤗

I rocked your world eh eh eh ;)

Love u Super se bhi uppar Muwah

Lots of love for your cute comment! Loved it! MWAHHH XXX

He wore a navy blue tailored suit and a red slim tie. That was all she needed to drool for the rest of the day. Why u wrote that line Jani I m drooling in my mind now na 😳😆 I SWOONED TOO LIKE I ALWAYS DO IN LA LA LAND.

Originally posted by: Persiko

Lovely

Originally posted by: ajanshul

It was sooo beautiful

A home really designed by love