SaHil/JanAah OS: Been There, Done That. - Page 2

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome loved it,thanks for pm

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Wow!aftr a lng time..Amaizing.
Haha!only jallad jin cn handle miss dhabewali..
Thr passon hs smthng else.
Yes yes yes-the kiss!tht kiss turn some jannat to mrs.sanam ahil raza ibrahim.
Love it.

Originally posted by: -MirchiExpress-

Very nice OS :)

Originally posted by: simran_singh_24

Thanks for the PM Prags.

Loved it!
This is how I hoped it would end for SaHil sigh you wrote beautifully, what i wished for.

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing dear

Loved reading it

Really very intense and also gets a little funny in the middle due to their bickering

God how much i wished they would have got a happy ending

Ok check to not go there

Well u refreshed their passionate love

Was breathtakingly beautiful😊

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Prags. I've said it before and I say it again. What a beautiful story.

You are really THE person to write such stories. From adapting Aahil's thoughts to writing the inner confusion of Sanam. You've done such an amazing job.

He said those last words with such venom, it almost sounded hollow even to him. He was never like this.

Is it wrong to say how much I loved the start? Damn, I closed my eyes and instantly imagined his deep roaring voice. ☺️

Maybe this was time to go back to the older days. Maybe it was time to make her fall in love with him. Maybe it was time to watch her fall in love with him. He never had the chance to see her falling in love with him. Their life was too complicated to witness all these. Maybe it was time to hear those words from her, and make her say those words to him.

This paragraph was truly heart touching and you managed to get the right kind of feel to it. It was so powerful. It really brought back some memories of their initial days of falling in love. acknowledging each other's presence in their lives. Haayee.. How different their love saga was.. ❤️

Aaand bring back the badass - Jallad Jinn - into action. 😉

You need to be back, Miss Dhabevaali. And for that your Jallad Jinn also needs to make a comeback. He thought; as a light smirk began to appear on his lips and he made no attempts to hide that. This was going to be fun.

Prags, you have no idea how much I enjoyed that smirk upon his light stubbled jawline (dude, he's gotta have that beard.) And the way he caught the slight change in her eyes by calling her Jannat. And how badass is he by asking if she has returned into the real world.. 😆

Seriously, I know this comment wouldn't make sense as I'm mixing things up.. But you need to know how awesome this is. This was like watching a epic movie of Aahil and Sanam.

She looked into his eyes, desperately trying to remain unaffected by the storm of emotions he evokes in her. And she hates it. She hates it because somewhere in her mind, in that little corner of her heart, the part which craves and yearns for something more, the part which she thought was untouched - has been touched.

How beautiful is this sentence. The way you wrote it by indicating how deep his love is for her. ❤️

His eyes always seem to be so deep, so vulnerable, so mysterious, and so painful. - So true! It always happens whenever I take a look into KV's eyes.

Oh, and I almost forgot to say this.. You sure made the temperature rise by the heated conversation between them. Damn, how do you do it? I need to know how you, Prags, do it. 👏

"Oh! I was never a gentleman in your eyes though...Jannat. And I think I too prefer being NOT. " He chuckled.

"Looks like you are stuck...with this Badtameez Gentleman" He smirked at his own joke.

"Well...coming to think of it. Is that why you are attracted to me Jannat? You like bad boys too eh?" He smirked at her.

This is the Aahil who openly challenged The Dhabewaali. Oh the attraction is slowly burning..
Still not?" He whispered, staring straight into her eyes, almost challenging her.

His other hand went around across her back, embracing her with his both hands. He nuzzled at the spot just beneath her neck, laying a soft kiss.

And the loving words Aahil spoke staring into her eyes. Reminding her of the kind of love they had. She remembered and came back home where the rightfully belonged.

Beautiful set of words, Prags. I wish I could give you a standing ovation - and I will. *gives a standing ovation.* 👏🤗 - You deserve all the praise of this story and how well it was constructed together. Each word had a bigger meaning which underlines in the story. I could truly go on and on about each paragraph

For me, the ending was the best part. I don't know why but I felt like Sanam had already returned to herself but "played," Aahil to think and do these things. Maybe I am just overthinking.. You know what I have come to realize.. It seems we have the same diagnose.. How awesome is that? 😆

This is for you and telling, how you should keep writing. Because you truly are - One of a Kind.. 🤗 ❤️

The whole Sahil intensity in your OS! Brillant! tum kaise yeh sab manage kar rahi ho? 😊 Loved their scenes intense yet adorable 😳 The end left me in total blush mode! ☺️

Originally posted by: lazychick.maria

The whole Sahil intensity in your OS! Brillant! tum kaise yeh sab manage kar rahi ho? 😊 Loved their scenes intense yet adorable 😳 The end left me in total blush mode! ☺️

Beautiful OS. 👏

I love how you defined LOVE in this story . . .

. . . how it changes a person from the inside out (loved Aahil's acknowledgment of the fact that her love had lifted him from the man he was to what he became . . . so mature ). . . .

. . . how it allows you to read the person you love so deeply (fun to see how easily he read his Sanam, even underneath the thick facade of this fake Jannat) . . .

. . . . how it allows you to be tough and be what that other needs (Aahil's regression into Jallad Jinn was a treat to watch ❤️) . . .

. . . . and how it even forces a woman so intent on blinding herself to reality into actually facing the truth (enjoyed the internal assessment that Jannat was taking of herself and that she finally succumbed. )

And all it took was a little bit of teasing. a repeat of the beloved Jalan line and a kiss to awaken our sleeping beauty.

What more could I need? 🤗 Great job. Loved it! 👍🏼

Aww, Prags! 🤗