SaHil/JanAah OS: Been There, Done That.

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Lovesahil

@Lovesahil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

I don't know what it is but your stories alway make me emotional. I love them a lot...it just reminds me of the time when aahil saw sanam/janat in McLeod ganj and how he started crying... And I always cry at that scene😭😭...

Sorry about my rambling😳

But anyways, this was a great os... Aahil is fabulous as always.. I loved it 👏

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: darkice7_12
Beautiful OS. 👏

I love how you defined LOVE in this story . . .

. . . how it changes a person from the inside out (loved Aahil's acknowledgment of the fact that her love had lifted him from the man he was to what he became . . . so mature ). . . .

. . . how it allows you to read the person you love so deeply (fun to see how easily he read his Sanam, even underneath the thick facade of this fake Jannat) . . .

. . . . how it allows you to be tough and be what that other needs (Aahil's regression into Jallad Jinn was a treat to watch ❤️) . . .

. . . . and how it even forces a woman so intent on blinding herself to reality into actually facing the truth (enjoyed the internal assessment that Jannat was taking of herself and that she finally succumbed. )

And all it took was a little bit of teasing. a repeat of the beloved Jalan line and a kiss to awaken our sleeping beauty.

What more could I need? 🤗 Great job. Loved it! 👍🏼

Thank you so much for such in depth comments! It really means a lot! Like A LOT! Really! Always a pleasure to know what readers thought and even great honor that what has been written has managed to make them think! 😳

Loved all you wrote up there, about Love and how it changes a person. Yes, Aahil was a man who was completely changed when he fell in love irrevocably. And that is why, even when dealing with this Jannat, he was so calm and patient, so mature - just like you said. He wasn't impulsive, just like when he was in all that Rehan scenario. And that was the reason I made him change his tactics a little bit 😉

And that was all it needed - a little push. And there she was!

Thank you so much again! Feels great I could deliver a nice dose of SaHil! ❤️

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: chicksoup
Aww, Prags! 🤗
This was beautiful...For the Ahil who went back to where they had started out...He just had to get there, for her to relive her whole journey with him...which happens to be the whole of her existence...

...She just had to be jerked out of that mythical space...Jannat- how aptly they named her!
What a place to be in, when one had no clue about one's origin...and settled into the supposed blissful state called Jannat..

But how real was the Sanam who beckoned her back to her Ahil...He had an ugly past, the had issues to deal with...he was as imperfect to the world as perfect as the handsome Army Major looked...

...But love brought her back to life from that ugly illusion that had trapped her...

..She truly was flesh and blood in Ahil's arms...He breathed life into her.

The best portrayal of Jannat was that first episode in Pakistan where she was lost...when she fumbled for a name...

...Your story made me remember that Jannat who had my sympathies...and gave back the Sanam who had all our love.❤️

Chicks! Miss you man! 🤗

Thank you so much for such amazing response to this little piece! I know we are not regular here in the forum nowadays, but feels so nice you took time out to put up those words of appreciation! 😳

Loved, loved, LOVED what you wrote there about their love. Yes, that was the thing which differentiated Sanam from Jannat. And everyone could point out that. I guess that was the whole point to show - How real was Sanam and how fake was Jannat.

And this is how it should have been carried out too...till the end. The last line you wrote - exactly that. That was the Jannat I had always imagined what should have been portrayed, how should have been portrayed. In my imagination that was Jannat - confused, misplaced, lost, vulnerable, Trying to find some answers.

And then there's Aahil. The answer to all her questions, confusion, frustration. She just needed a little push. She has lost her memory, not her characteristics. And that is why, it all became clear for HIM - how to remind her of him, her and their love 😛

Eh, I wrote a lot there. Please do read okay! 😆

❤️

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Lovesahil
I don't know what it is but your stories alway make me emotional. I love them a lot...it just reminds me of the time when aahil saw sanam/janat in McLeod ganj and how he started crying... And I always cry at that scene😭😭...

Sorry about my rambling😳

But anyways, this was a great os... Aahil is fabulous as always.. I loved it 👏

Awww, I am so touched by that! 😳 Thank you so much man! It means so much to me, that my writing makes you emotional always. Its like, what a writer strives to do, to make people feel what the writer has written, to make that connect with them, to make them feel the same emotions which writer has put in there. Thank you so much again! :)

Haha that's perfectly fine, I ramble a lot too, when I am high on emotions. But I loved your rambling 😛

Just so happy you loved this - especially Aahil! ❤️

Edited by Junoon-e-SaHil - 9 years ago

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innocentangel4u

@innocentangel4u

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

LOL... You actually gave me a free trip to Season 3 😆... No matter how much it pissed us all off, there was something to Aahil-Jannat too... just that it was never exploited properly... You understand what I mean? 😆

You've managed to portray their inner feelings very well 👏 How ARI goes back to Jallad Jinn mode to bring his Miss Dhabevaali back 😉 How he actually manages to press all her right buttons 🤣 Nice strategy ARI 👍🏼

Enjoyed reading it... Do continue writing more stories 😉

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: innocentangel4u
LOL... You actually gave me a free trip to Season 3 😆... No matter how much it pissed us all off, there was something to Aahil-Jannat too... just that it was never exploited properly... You understand what I mean? 😆
You've managed to portray their inner feelings very well 👏 How ARI goes back to Jallad Jinn mode to bring his Miss Dhabevaali back 😉 How he actually manages to press all her right buttons 🤣 Nice strategy ARI 👍🏼

Enjoyed reading it... Do continue writing more stories 😉

Haha my pleasure! Hope you enjoyed the trip! 😛😆

Yes exactly! They had such amazing dynamics if portrayed properly it could have been so amazing! But anyways..I am not the one to ruin my stories just like "some" ruin their own shows...😆

Thank you so much for the comments! Glad you loved this and were able to see what I tried to convey! 😳

I'll surely come up with another one soon...😉

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

You sure know how to keep your audience entertained. You have an amazing talent when it comes to writing. Amazing

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Azraa01
You sure know how to keep your audience entertained. You have an amazing talent when it comes to writing. Amazing

Thank you so very much for such appreciation! It really means a lot to me! 😳 So happy that you enjoyed this piece! Thank you once again for all the appreciation! :)

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Nice OS!

Thank you so much! :)

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simran_singh_24

@simran_singh_24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Prags, hope u forgive me for doing this.

All SaHil fans please join me in the campaign against Zee's shameless promotion of bigamy in it's shows.

Thanks.

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