Asya 3s: Dawn Of Love | Completed - Page 15

Originally posted by: Parekh83

its not k it is asya story so we r not interested its just I don't get time in whole day...and of course we know u pretty well so tum band to bajaogi hi for being late but really sorry for that..

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Great update

Originally posted by: Parekh83

sorry..sorry...sorry...so so so sorry...for being late but ssly caught up in other things...now come to the update yeah its really nice...the drunk zoya is always fun to read...their first kiss and the shyness awkwardness after that..hahaha...and ssly asad's realization of love is very filmy...and the song is my fav one..and u choose a perfect song for situation... the confession is nicely written... and yeah of course happy ending...u should write more in future..will wait for it

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Hello my sweetest Cookie pie sista jolly queen Malika-e-Chamkadareen butterfly buttercup munchkin little adorable sistuuu...

Hii flying motu hippo

Sab se pehle na dil se sorry to keep you hanging with my reserve.

As usual please give me any punishment.. Hmm I know 10 sit-ups lol... Hmm I can't make sit-ups isiliye push-up theek hai? 50 kardunga if you are not satisfied.

Nah...No push ups...Ye bhi koi punishment hui..huh..It will be fun for u..he he..

No need for any punishment..U were busy i know...And me bhi to late hi unres karti hu..

Tera mere fiittuuss😆

Now coming to the story..

Hm..khitpit start..😆

It was the most sweetest story.. Hmm funny bhi isiliye my trademark funny-tastico-licious it was. Just loved it to the core.

He he...Ty

I confess I don't really get time to read others work. Sometimes get away with like button many a times with reserve very rarely read an update or two from some story. But your story I read it from the beginning with full loyalty because I can't lie to you.

Yeah agar huth bologe to kua nahi me katungi...😉

Glad u read my whole story😊

Honestly speaking at the beginning as it was your first update it was a bit funny style but it's the uniqueness of your work and slowly I loved it.

Yeah, starting chap was really funny..he he..I too admit it

Something I learnt from you is the addition of pictures. And expression it's a extra which I never found in any other stories I read so far.

Yeah u should add pictures, it attracts the readers. And expression se readers can feel it...

Wow hippo ne mujhse kuch sikha...Glad

That Asya pub scene was really hot but asad acted sensibly then he dropped her to home and zoya got weak with her love and attempted the kiss. It was logical for the heart broken girl.

Yeah true.

Then next day the awkward feeling in boths hearts was understandingly perfect.

😊

Then the confession of Zoya was cute.

Yup...It was cute..😊

Asad's realization was funny-tastico-licious again as he became mad and that song was superbly perfect.

Yeah bollywood tadka to dalna hi padta hai thats why...

And yup song scene is my fav..😊

That his nervousness and confession and Zoya's expression was awesome and beautiful and then comes slowly then end and a micro prologue of the happily ever after was topping to make it was fully satisfied story.

Yup...End me dikhana to padta hi very happy ending..😉

Overall a big applause for successfully completing the story.. So happy for you..

Thank you..🤗

Baki ka comment next post neeche dekho..

OK

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Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Res for Jolly Queen

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Unres ... Contd

Hmm... You have a beautiful heart and a beautiful smile.

Keep smiling and spreading happiness my Jolly Queen Cookie pie sista,

You are in my world's best sister list.

You too..But in brother's list😆😆

Thanks for everything and especially being in my tough times, I know we have a close bond like a bro and sis. Though we don't k kw childhood memories as you said earlier but all this moments will be in my heart forever.

Yeah, same here

Urs, all time super emotional bro, kurkure type tede mere, tamatar type red nose, with imaginary wings to fly, aspired to be a Motuu, dumb like a hippo bro,

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No need to reply, Bas ek hugs bhejdo, 🤗

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-Flying Motuu Hippo

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part Jalpa👏😊

Zoya was drunk n Asad tuk her home

Zoya kissed him but still Asad did not tuk advantage of her

Zoya apologized to Asad for her behaviour

So Ayaan is not bad but only his stupid mom thinks she is playing wid his son

Asad fell in love wid Zoya

Asad's confession was awesome

Zoya too loved him n confessed him

I am glad dat Asad was not emotionally challenged who was dumb in confessing to someone

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman

wow amazing last parts...
love their first kiss which is becoz of naughty zoya...
but Asad confession was beautiful...
loved whole ts...
keep writing more..
belated happy bday to ur mom..