KaBhi story- Part 1 Updated on 21st Dec on Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am trying a new story. Its a Hindu story wid characters having their real 1st names in dis story. I have seen such stories wid real names in some other forum. So, its not AsYa but KaBhi story. So, guess who all d people r in dis story since u know their real names. Hope u like dis story too😊.




Teaser 1:
Mumbai:
TV actress n model Surbhi Mathur got into argument wid her husband of 3 months businessman Puneet Mishra.
Puneet: I will not let u leave me. U may be an actress for d world but here u r just my wife n daughter-in-law of dis house. I will not let u & our unborn child leave. We got to know abt our child only a month ago. 4m d last 2 months u r troubling me for divorce.
Surbhi: Cuz I got to know ur true face only 2 months ago. If u don't agree to divorce me then I will ruin u & ur family members who always troubled me. Don't underestimate me as u know wat I am capable of doing as I am not weak.
Puneet gets worried.
Later dat afternoon.
Sangeeta: How can u divorce such a nice man? Can't u see how much he loves u? I got u married to my friend's son so dat our business relations will turn more better & u get a nice guy dat is my friend's son. But u r planning to divorce him. He is d father of ur child. Think abt it.
Surbhi: Mom, he is not a nice guy.
Sangeeta: I don't want to hear anything. U r not divorcing him. Dats it. Think abt our reputation. Wat will people say abt our family?
Surbhi: Enough mom. Why r u not understanding dat I am not happy wid him? U got me married to d boy of ur choice. I told several times 4m d last 2 months dat I am not happy wid him n his family but u never listened to me. U always told me to save my relation which I did but I can't do it anymore. U can never see how wrong Puneet n his family are. U only care abt ur status n reputation for which u ruined my life. I will not let u ruin my life anymore. I hate u, Sangeeta Mathur. I break my relation wid u.
Sangeeta, her dad Harsh n her younger siblings Mohit n Ketki r shocked.
Sangeeta: Harsh, did u heard wat all she said? Tell her not to divorce Puneet.
Harsh: if my daughter is not happy wid him she sud not live wid him.
Mohit n Ketki also supported Surbhi. Sangeeta was shockedat everyone being against her.

Teaser 2:
Somewhere else in Mumbai
Karan Dubey was sitting wid his younger step-brother Vikrant Sharma at a beach. Karan's mother Shalini was a head of TV channel of which her children Karan n Neha r heirs. But Karan is interested in acting along wid lukn after d channel while Neha is interested in becumn a doctor so she is doing medical. He acted wid Surbhi in an episode of d show Pyaar Tune Kya Kiya n also in a youth show as leads. Their fans called them KaBhi. His father Randhir Sharma(had to change his name cuz his real name is Waqar n dis is a Hindi story) who is a businessman cheated on his mother wid his secretery Shabnam who was a Muslim woman n had 2 children Vikrant n Archana wid her. He later dumped Shalini along wid Karan n Neha. He later married Shabnam n had a daughter Farhina wid her. Shalini was heartbroken but she remained for herself n her children n worked more harder for her ad agency. Karan n Neha hates their father but loves their step-siblings. After their father divorced their mother, they use their mother's maiden surname along wid their mother.
Vikrant: Bro, I can't understand how can even famous people gets divorced so early. Luk at Surbi Mathur only. She got divorced wid her husband Puneet after 3. months only n she is also pregnant wid his child.
Karan: I worked wid Surbhi twice. She is a nice girl. I think sumthn wad wrong which is d reason for her divorce. Even famous people r human beings so there r reasons for their divorce.
Vikrant: U r right, bro.
Just then, Karan's cell rings. D call was of his girlfriend Amrapali. He answers d call.
Karan: Hello Amra.
Amra: Jaanu, wat r u doing? I want to go for shopping. U have not given me gift 4m so long.
Karan: But I gifted a new cwll phone to u only 3 days ago.
Amra: Yaa but 3 days is so long na. Come in 15 minutes to R City Mall. I will reach there sokn. Okay bye. C u there.
She hung up.
Vikrant: Wat happened, bhai?
Karan: It was Amra. She wants me to come for ahopping n buy her gifts.
Vikrant: She is so demanding. She does not behaves properly wid many people.
Karan: I know. I am tired of her.
Amrapali Shukla was a spoilt brat daughter of businessman Tej Shukla n Alka Shukla. They r dating 4m 4 months. They met at a party 5 months ago n started dating after a month.

Teaser 3:
Surbhi decided to leave her house for some time to get over her bad marriage n stay away her mom who she hates so much now. Harsh requested his friend Shalini to let his daughter live in their house for some time. Shalini as well as Karan n Neha agreed.
Next day, Surbhi came to Dubey house. All were happy to see her. Shalini, Karan n Neha noticed dat Surbhi was quiet n hardly talking. Shalini told Neha to take her to d guest room.
Wen Surbhi came out after changing, Karan brought tea n snacks for her.
Karan: Lets talk for some time.
He then realised sumthn.
Karan: Oops, I am sorry. I forgot dat Amra has called me to take her to a spa. Well, mom n Neha will give u company.
Surbhi: Its okay , Karan. Ur girlfriend is more important.
Karan leaves d house unhapoy wid not chatting wid Surbhi n gtaking his bossy girlfriend to a spa.
At night, Karan hears sobbing noise 4m Surbhi's room. He knocks her door n she opens it.
Surbhi: U here.
Karan: I heard u crying.
Surbhi: I was rehearsing for my show where I had to do an emotional scene wid my hero Shehzad Sheikh.
Karan: Ohhh.
Karan lukd at her face n felt as if she was actually crying n giving excuse of rehearsal.
Karan: I am leaving. Good night.
Surbhi: Good night.
Karan leaves 4m there. Surbhi shuts d dior n starts crying again thinking abt her marriage to Puneet.



So, how was d teasers? Karan n Surbhi r just friends now so there is nothing between right now. D concept is abt 2 people experiencing love again. If u want me to continue dis then plz suggest me a suitable title.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very intrstng & nice concept.
Cnt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You know that this is just amazing...!!!
I loved it soo much. .!
You mixed kabhi and qubool hai story. .wow..!! :)
I'm so excited to read this..:)
Update soon ..:)
And sry can't think of a title. . Very bad at this..!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really very interesting teasers
Looking forward to the story
And regarding the titles how about "love again" or "the right choice"
Just could not think of anything else. Maybe someone gives a better one than me😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Awesome Concept ...
Loved it ...
Plz Continue It ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Lovely concept
Cannot think of any title
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#7
Interesting concept juhi
go ahead with it
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Wow
Like this
It is a nice concept
Looking forward for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow really superb concepts ...
I would suggest title embracing true love or something on the same line
Edited by jogicad - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept dear
Sorry, I m not good in suggesting names so plz forgive me for that
Waiting for story to start soon
Thanks for pm

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