AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls # 2 ~ Ch 28(Final) Updated on Pg. 71 - Page 28

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Interesting Chapt..
Nothing their much for me to say.. 😆
Continue soonish.



Ha ha I know this chapter was kind of useless. 😆
The next one is hoo though :)
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Avie

Another awesome update..

Glad they are together now..

Write soon..



Thanks dear 😊
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


I don't know...
Just saying...its better to be ready for somethin than completely being blown away by it.



True
Well whatever happens AsYa will stay together now 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks for pm
Continue soon plz



Thank you
I am glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kobeb

Awesome update! :)



Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Nice chapter that they r back together



Thanks Tehs 😊
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

I so loved zoya in this update..! She is now giving asad a tough time..!
Their love making was superb..
excited to read the next part. .:)
Update soon. .:) ;)



Glad to know you enjoyed this chapter 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

😊

Unres

Awww loved it
Wonder who will cave first who will beg to be bedded
Love it the way he hold her not initiating sex
He just wanted to hold her to show he has emotions and he was loving it
Aww he would have combust soon
So finally zoya asked and he couldn't say no or stop
Hell he didn't want to
He would take zoya however wherever she was tht is how much he desired her
So they rocked the entire inn to die kingdom come
But then really a knock on door
Oh Asad would have killed tht person if they enter
But the acted got completed
So he was ready to take her home but she refused
She wants to be independent and she wants him to take one day at a time
Oh no u don't he don't want one day at a time he want it all now
If she is working at the inn and with him tht means less time for him
Poor baby
So they had vowed to be platonic I am yours and u are mine
No other man and no other woman
So now she wants to be wine and dine before he gets anymore sugar
So both r claiming they can go without the other
Let's see who win the bet
Waiting



Wow your comment is better than the chapter itself 😆
I am glad to know you liked it
And yes let's see who will give in first 😉
It's good Zoya wants to be independent
And I am glad Asad didn't force her
They really want to make this relationship work now
Thanks again for this lovely comment Anopama 😃
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ayat20

Finally asya r together

Nice update



Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Asad-Zoya from the beginning till end. Everything was perfect. Except the fact that I'm 18- and shouldn't have read the red inked part. But...! Lol beautiful update yet again Pia.

Waiting for the next one!




Awww thanks for this lovely comment
Glad u liked this chapter 😃

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