Mine; Always & Forever. An AsYa ff. Chapter 13 updated on pg 86.

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Loving this already

So zoya return ho,e from Boston

So Asya seems to have a past together

She is running from him and he don't seems to know y

So now he learned she is back and he intends to get all his answers

Aww he bought all her favs

Will be an interesting read

Lots of questions to be answer

Pm me plz

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Omg I am angry with you! Where was my PM for this? Been dying to read something on Asya from you and you posted this yaaayyy! Will come back with a comment soonishhh!

Still angry. I only just saw it now.

Pouts.

P.S. You have to post the other Asya one that I read before summer holidays soonish. Dying to read the next chapter for it!

Okay, first of all, a huge welcome as an Asya writer my love.

This forum was missing out big time. A huge thank you to Saima di for convincing you.

This story is going to be amazing. I loved the first chapter. I admire Rahul and Zoya's friendship. He really cares for her. And I hope they stop at best friends otherwise I already feel jealous for Asad on his behalf. Not happening there.

Bi is adorable. And so is her sister. Their reunion was cute. I was very intrigued by Asad coming to search for Bi. And his little moment with Zoya touched my heart. So what chased her away 7 years ago? I really want to know and I know you will reveal it soon but it is making me really curious.

I cannot bear to see Zoya upset hearing Asad's name. Please get them together already lol. Don't torture my Asad baby too much, cannot handle their tears. Princess ZaZa is such a cute name. I'm guessing they are childhood friends and more. Cannot wait to see how this unravels. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

You have penned this down beautifully di, you are an awesome writer. Idk why you are nervous. Please update the next chapter soonish. Cannot wait to live this story with you.

Much love,

XOXO

Edited by MrMrsAsyaKhan - 10 years ago

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Nim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
meee
unres

first thing first

welcome here as an AsYa writer nim

a big hug baby 🤗

coming to the story

loved it to the core

rahul and zoya ki frndshp

kch kch hota hai yaad aayi 😳

zoya came back after 7 long years

asad and zoya have a past

maybe a sweet plus bitter one

princess ZaZa 😃

great start nim

go for it

all the best dear

love u

Hey Ashii,

Thank u sooo much dear. A big hug for u too.

Im glad u liked the story.

Love lotss..

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Nim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
abhi ke liye ressing
unres!

Gawwd nims! U write so goood 😃
ANd u call urself a beginner? Ur nthng close to a beginner bt more than that
ur a flawless writer nims
specially at describing nature's beauty
the beginning that morning aww i adored it a lot
the plot seems interesting
rahul and zoya together fr 7 years bt zoya doesn,t share
bi is motherly and hr api friendly
thrs more to reveal abt asya
y zaza kept asad away while asad already taking care of zoya's fav thngs ! Though the relations are little confusng ! Koun kiska kya lagta he? How rashid and khans are related to farukhis! Can't wait to read more!
Ur going grt
update pls

Suee,

U need to change ur siggies. Honestly kitna time har baar mera us ko dekhne mein hi nikal jata hai ;) though im really diappointed with bb9. It edited the whole karan part :(

Coming to the story, i really am glad that u liked it. Thank u soo much for ur kind words. Zara sa wait and you'll see how all of them are related and what past they share.

Love..

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Haan nims it got edited bt m so so so happy salmaan hugged ksg
nt once bt thrice
hahaha meri siggy hena kamal ki 😆
itna distract mat hona ki update dena bhul jaaye

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Nim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Yes Yes I do Aapii...
Mujhe toh bahut aacha laga yeh first part yaa prologue...joh bhi tha...it is very good and intruguing...
I mean Totally diff way of writing from Both U and Choco..
Great Job Nims ( I hope i can call You tha...ya Whatever U want Me to Call U i am ok with everything..)
Many Questions to be answered...and Many things & reasons to be known...
Yeh Zoya & Rahul Ka angle sirf Frnds tak hee hai toh best hai...
Khair Zoya as a Doc...and what is Asad here...
Nims aap agar ek Character sketch yaa Character Introduction wala part dein toh aur bhi clear hoga...
Do Continue soon...
Will be waiting for you PM...
I will Buddy You immediately now...
Take Care.
And Yess...Aapka Swaagat hai...idhar as a WRITER now...hahahahah

Hey Mayur,

Thanx a tonne for welcoming me here :) and reading the story, for which i have Sis to thank.

Im happy that you found the 1st part interesting. Main character sketch de deti per u know u're going to have more fun seeing the relationship these characters share instead of me telling it now. It'll not be a long wait, i can assure you.

I hope you like the upcoming chaps too.

Andd u can call me Nims for sure :)

Will let you know when i update next, hopefully soon.

A big hug for making me smile with ur comment here.

Take care..

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Nim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: cutie15
Wow this is amazing..!
Thank you saima dii for suggesting us to read this..
it is awesome and so interesting. .
loved how asad caressed zoya..
what's wrong between them..??
Update soon and if possible plz pm me..! :)
You are really talented. .:)

Hi Dear,

Thank you for reading the first chapter and giving this story and me a chance. Thank you Sis, for recommending it to your lovely readers.

Im happy you found it interesting. AsYa's past will come into light very soon. Just a little wait.

I'll let you know when I update next time.

Take care.

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Nim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Thank you Abi :)

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Nim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sasir
Awesome..
Loved it..
So many questions... N confusions..
Hope rahul is just zoyas best buddy... N nothing more than that...
Wat is the reason they got separated..
Both love each other immensely..
Loved asad care...but y zoya thinking asad don't care...
Sort if I am asking too much can't stop my anxiety..
Is there any mu...
Hope there wasn't any third person BTW asya..
I am diehard asya fan can't bear to see them together...
Can u please give character sketch...
How come no one in the family come to know their differences..
oops so many questions ...
Sorry...
Hope to see u soon

Hi Dear,

So many questions? Hahaha..

U will have to wait a little and then all your questions will be answered, I can assure you. AsYa have a past here and the reason for their separation will be out soon too.

Im a die hard AsYa fan too and cant put them through long tortures, so dnt worry.

Thank you so much dear for taking out time to read n reply here.

Love.

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: asyafreva
Beautiful banner!

And I really loved the first part!

Could you notify me as well whenever you update?

Looking forward to seeing the mysteries unveil themselves!

And thanks Saima di for notifying me as well!

Wonderful concept!

Hello,

Im glad you found the chapter worth reading.

Thank you Sis for recommending this story.. a bigg hug.

I'll definitely let u know when i update next. Can u buddy me plz, it'll get easy to pm, u kno?

I agree on the banner part. Aroo has done a great job.

Love.