Mine; Always & Forever. An AsYa ff. Chapter 13 updated on pg 86.

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

abhi ke liye ressing
unres!

Gawwd nims! U write so goood 😃
ANd u call urself a beginner? Ur nthng close to a beginner bt more than that
ur a flawless writer nims
specially at describing nature's beauty
the beginning that morning aww i adored it a lot
the plot seems interesting
rahul and zoya together fr 7 years bt zoya doesn,t share
bi is motherly and hr api friendly
thrs more to reveal abt asya
y zaza kept asad away while asad already taking care of zoya's fav thngs ! Though the relations are little confusng ! Koun kiska kya lagta he? How rashid and khans are related to farukhis! Can't wait to read more!
Ur going grt
update pls

Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
Beautiful Banner

❤️

You are an extremely talented writer Nim, just wait and watch what magic you create, I know my Bavha Party will agree 110%

🤗

Yes Yes I do Aapii...
Mujhe toh bahut aacha laga yeh first part yaa prologue...joh bhi tha...it is very good and intruguing...
I mean Totally diff way of writing from Both U and Choco..
Great Job Nims ( I hope i can call You tha...ya Whatever U want Me to Call U i am ok with everything..)
Many Questions to be answered...and Many things & reasons to be known...
Yeh Zoya & Rahul Ka angle sirf Frnds tak hee hai toh best hai...
Khair Zoya as a Doc...and what is Asad here...
Nims aap agar ek Character sketch yaa Character Introduction wala part dein toh aur bhi clear hoga...
Do Continue soon...
Will be waiting for you PM...
I will Buddy You immediately now...
Take Care.
And Yess...Aapka Swaagat hai...idhar as a WRITER now...hahahahah

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Wow this is amazing..!
Thank you saima dii for suggesting us to read this..
it is awesome and so interesting. .
loved how asad caressed zoya..
what's wrong between them..??
Update soon and if possible plz pm me..! :)
You are really talented. .:)

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
Nim

I cannot express how happy I am that you are starting this story.

Thank you so much

Love you lots

Sisss,

I cant tell you how much your support and love means to me. Thank You.. for everything

Love you tonnes..

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
Beautiful Banner

❤️

You are an extremely talented writer Nim, just wait and watch what magic you create, I know my Bacha Party will agree 110%

🤗

I hope I live up to your expectations Sis. I wouldn't be posting this if it weren't for you.

I hope cbp likes it n so do the others.

Loveee

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
I got excited with reserving spots ha ha 😳

I didn't realise I had reserved so many

Thank you fir the first res 🤗

You did get excited.. hehehe

You never have to thank me sis. It'll always be resd for u.

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thank you :)

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Really very interesting start
Have already got a feeling that this is going to be one amazing story to read
Lovely banner
Loved the first chapter
Please continue soon 😊

Thank you so much. Im glad you liked the 1st part and hope I don't let you down with the next updates.

Will post soon.