Mine; Always & Forever. An AsYa ff. Chapter 13 updated on pg 86.

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Huggies Nimmi🤗

so glad 2 see u back 😃

so this was d reason

Man definitely Zoya wouldn't have wanted 2 stay close 2 Asad hearing that

Asya's scene were beautifully written I loved them

& I loved d start as well wid little baby & Asad😊

Zack is here also he always plays a amazing frnds role😆

Wonderful Nimmi

looking 4ward 2 nxt part already😛

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#202

Wow...I can imagine that must have hurt bad...poor Zoya
But now I also feel bad for Asad...she didn't hear him out

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#203

Beautiful update dear

Loved reading it

The dance sequence was beautiful

But the end was heart breaking😭

Hope they sort out the misunderstandings soon

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Res for My Sis, Choco, IBP, Sunshine, Sue, Annie, Sweety, Bhais and Everyone who replied the last time :)

tq fr res aapi🤗

res

unres

hey aapi🤗hw r u...

woow kya opening tha aapi asad in sweaty avatar doing pushups😳hayee

scenes of asad wit zain are sooo cutee❤️

aww zoya assumed asad to b pulling her dupata 😳

loved all asya scenes aapi n finally reason is outi m sure asad said tat for a reason may b to avoid dere frens interferring...

hope zoya relise dis soon

now asad wont disturb her matlab wont talk to her😲🤢

beautifull part aapi😃continue soon

Edited by Missadorable - 9 years ago

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Awesome Part.😊

Asad(KSG) and Zack Conversation on Phone was so Nice.😊

The way you explained Zoya in Mehendi and Sangeet Function was so beautifully explained.😊

The Feelings of Asad(KSG) on seeing Zoya was so beautifully explained.😊

Asad(KSG) tied Zoya's Shirt was so Cute.😊

Haider Part was so interesting.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Dance and the song was Awesome,I likes it.😊

Finally,Asad(KSG) knew the answer from Zoya,it was so Nice.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Past was so Nicely explained.😊

The Pain Zoya felt was so sad.😭

But,I think there is a Reason behind this.😊

Asad(KSG) didn't want to come closer to Zoya,it was so sad.😭

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Awesome update

Thanks for pm dear...

Loved it very much..

Now understood the reason behind her silence

Hope everything clears out soon

Continue soon

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Yayy
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE nims 🤗
all 4 chapters and i've always loved ur beginnings ❤️
and ths tym too i myself am sitting at the terrace with the cool breezes, reading on asad feels so gud :)
the asad dilshad convo and then zack and asad talking was executed brilliantly ! It felt so real them talking!
I loved how u described zoya in mehendi as well as in sangeet!
And the part asad tying zaza's shirt was well written
then what u wrote abt asad witnessing haider proposing zoya oh u got me going lyk no that can't be happening haa :v
bt very swiftly u made asad see the truth in sangeet!
AND NOW the most beautiful part!
Asya dancing! Gawwd! Tell me if i can be more happier 😃
first u dedicate the update to me
and then u add up my fav song!! U won't believe ths is my fav and mujhe shuru ke lyrics aj tk samajh ni aye the and i was too lazy to search the lyrics 😆 Bt nw that u posted i got the right lyrics lol
so i sang along with asad and the thumbs up on the song choice
suits asya
the last para with asya dancing oh how beautiful
[don't knw its beauty of ur update whch got me shivering or the cool winds on my terrace hahaha maybe both! Surely both 😆] *Ok rubbing my palms and getting bck to type* 😳
it was beautifully written and did he really winked? 😆
The moment of truth! Ah so thats what what happened! Why o why did he have to lie to his own frnds! Now thats whr the suspence and my interest is!The past scene asad gulping and zoya's heartbreak again written well!
Bt y can't she hear him once and y the hell asad shut it up! Kal tk he was determined and nw zoya sunna ni chahti to sunana b ni chahte ye bhaisahab!
Uff i really hope the next time u update i wud have some tym to read ths
i really want to
i love the update
and asad what a gentleman laga zoya kisi aur ki hogai to palat ke dekha tk ni ❤️
UPDATE SOON
mai aai to bilkul padhungi ni to for ur readers update soonish
thanku so much for ur wishes 🤗
m gonna miss u
love u ❤️

Heya Sue,

Im glad tumhe update acha laga. Mujhe pata tha tum terrace pe hogi is liye Asad ko bhi wahin bhej dia, 😆

Thank u sooo much for liking the chap n leaving behind such kind words.

I wasn't too sure abt this part but chalo tumhe sahi laga, am happy.

The song is one of my favs too.

Ab wat Asad did is another thing. Bechara is so shareef, aik dum zoya ki baat maan gaya n left her.

Wishing you luck once again, am gonna b missing u too 😭

Lovee lotss

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Wonderful and Well Written part...👏⭐️
So it is this Misunderstanding that Zoya have heard..and so the aloofness and 7 yrs of separation...😔

Asad and Zack's part was good...and I am glad Zack is here also...😊

No Rahul in this part..😕

Interesting chapt...

Will be waiting for the next part eagerly as Asad has taken a big descision 😆 let see what will happen next..👍🏼

Continue soonish...😃

Hey Mayur,

Thank you so much.

Finally u all get to know why Zoe wants to keep her distance from Asad. A little wait n u'll see what he does next.

Zack is here too. Sis has made me love him so much dat now it feels incomplete without him. So I asked Sis to take Zack 😛

No Rahul here, u missing him?

Will try n continue soon.

Tc.

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: asyafreva
Asad was wrong but I'm sure he has a proper reason...
My heart broke for Zpya knowing how hard it can be when you are practically rejected in public...

Sigh...

Asad instead of fighting for her is just simply walking away?

Just because she said so?

Hope nothing serious happens to Asad as he has walked away...

Hey Dear,

See Zoe does have a reason to stay away from Asad. It definitely hurts to hear such things.

Ab y he said all that, only he knows.

Asad is just fulfilling her wish, lets hope he stays safe.

Thank u for commenting.