AsYa FF - Lost you (CH1 29/10)

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Banner is superb 👏
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But please don't let Zoya die

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Interesting..start
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Hey hoping AsYa will be together at last..

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Chapter 1

Asad's POV
I entered the hall , it was aysha's engagement . Oh ! I forgot to introduce her to you guys? She is my best friend , i have no idea what is making her to marry so fast , kya jaldhi hai use? :p I had no interest in these cermonies as i never believed in love and all. But , for aysha i came here. I walked in to the hall with Ayaan , he was wearing a brown sherwani , and i was wearing a creamy color sherwani. I Hated these sherwanis too , but as it is a indian cermony i better not wear jeans. Suddenly , My eyes went to a person. Oh my , Is the only thing that came in my mouth. I Saw a girl , a girl? Angel maan. She looked gorgeous , oh wait! Asad what the hell are you doing? How can you admire someone? I Said to myself. I was lost in her , sadly ayaan broke in my dream and broke it. Kya hua romeo? He asked. Romeo? I Asked , in a conufsing way. I made an anger face and he apologised . he kept calling me romeo. He walked towards the girl i was admiring , why is he walking towards her? He knows her? I Thought. Zoya , I heard Ayaan call the girl. Her name is zoya? I thought , A cute name indeed , I Said to myself. Hey Ayaan , I Heared Her saying , she looked so cute with her deep dimpled smile. I was completely lost in her. COMPLETELY. I Didnt even realize 2 mins already passed out , i was standing like a fool infront of her admiring her , Suddenly i heared ayaan introducing me to her. My heart beats increased. She looked at me , and smiled to her ears. Zoya this is asad urf Romeo! I heared ayaan announcing to zoya. Ahem Ahem , i coughed. Im Asad , I Said to her. She replied back telling her name and she also moved her hands towards mine for a hand shake. But just then , aysha came and hugged her. I Smiled looking at aysha , bechari kya se kya bangayi , i said to myself. I hugged aysha and wished her , Kya jaldhi thi? I Asked her. I love him yaar , Aysha replied. love? Not again! I replied. Not my fault that you dont believe in love , how many times i told you to propose a girl but no. Now i cant stay like you single ? Aysha Said. Araay , i was kidding , i replied her. You dont believe in love? I heared zoya's voice , she asked me? oh yes. I turned towards her and replied that i dont. Why ? She asked me. Its all fake , people would just use you and one day forget you , nothing else. I Replied. Everyone aint same. Zoya said. So who is the lucky one? I Asked her , i wish that she is single , i said to myself. Im Single. I heared her say , a small smile appeared on my face but i decided not to show it. She kept blabbering something something , she is too cute , i stood and admired her. Ahem ahem , i heared someone coughing fakely. It was ayaan , no wonder. Falling for her? he asked me. NO WAY! I replied , You better dont . Ayaan said , there are many guys behind her.
I hated the fact many guys were behind her. Why? I agree she is gorgeous but still. Anyway , i cant fall for her. Wait , i aint falling for her. no way. Engagement went well , the groom was not that bad. I Would miss aysha alot. The main thing was the food , omg how much i loved food , YUM! I rushed towards the buffet table to take the food and realized everything was over. EVERYTHING OVER? I screamed in shock. Just then i noticed zoya coming towards me , She had an extra plate with her , Why is she coming so close? i thought. I had saved this for you cause i noticed you werent here . I heared her say , aww so sweet. Umm, Thank you so much. I replied to her , i had no ida what to say. We both went together towards a table and sat together. So , i dont think you have a gf? Asked zoya , Yah i dont have , and you ? I Asked hesitatingly. I Dont too , I heared her say . We kept silent for few mins until the food was over. I Saw her going towards the washroom , Just then from somewhere ayaan poped in saying romeo , falling haan? Before i could say anything , he ran away.
The party was perfect too , At last i met aysha and zoya both are always together , i asked aysha if she had dinner and she said yes. And my room? I Asked. You would be sharing your room with zoya , its fine right? We both were shocked.
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I hope you guys liked it , this is just the starting so many things left to be revealed. 😆 For pms buddy me. Do comment
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Edited by PizzaHolic. - 9 years ago

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Basanti 🦄

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Yay!! Me first

Okay so.its the past

The first meeting...lovely

Oh so poor Asad isn't a believer of love

And the way u wrote feelings from Asad's point of view abt our angel...urf Miss.Zoya was actually cute

He is mentally chiding himself again again not to love...and then thinking why is he even considering love as an option... He he awesome

Oh so zoya saved a plate...that's sweet

N I love ayaan...they way he is again and again reminding him is so cute funny and sweet

So cute

Oh aysha is the best friend.

Hmm but how is zoya related to ayaan and aysha??

He he beautiful chapter

Cute indeed

Lovely

Awesome

Amazing

Loved it

Oh sharing room?? I really hope they bond together soon

Hope to see friendship soon

Excited for chapters ahead

Plzzz update soon

Edited by riddhi1206 - 9 years ago

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