New ASYA story: The Eyewitness, Chapter 11, pg 71, 19/01/2016

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paru

@enthusiastic

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#281

Awesome update yaar choco
i loved it so so so much
Asad u r tooo gud i love you
very well written very interesting
Thanks for the pm

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#282

res
unres
njyd actn packd part...glad zoya tuk a risk strng women...
so asad was shotwel jo b hota h ache ke liye h hota h😉dis mite brng asya closer
so asad guided her to a secret place nd cnvncd her to do first aid...tat was intrestng
nw waiting fr next part eagerly...
its getng much more intrestng by each part aapi
amazingly written👍🏼
aapi sirf ittusa partwant next one to b super long😃
nw pls cntnue soon

Edited by Missadorable - 9 years ago

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

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Posted: 9 years ago

#283

Aapi Asad ko kuch nahi hona chahiyeee!!!!! Pleaseee ... My Zoya is so brave... Please woh kamima koun hai jo yeh karing! I doubt that Inspector Sheikh!

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
Ufff sofa se bed tk kitnaaa tym lagta hai haina tehs api 🤣

🤣

nd hugies fr res ashi🤗

Edited by Missadorable - 9 years ago

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#285

Awesome update
Loved it
The brave act from Zoya. Asad told her what to do & she followed it. It was tough for her but she did it beautifully. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
Res for Saima Aapi... Nim... Tehs Aapi...

Res for Affu Arshu Bestu Choto

Res for srash trishu adi sue sum binnu shama annie mayur asif and all Choco's readers 😳

Thanks Ashi for res

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jaanu013

@jaanu013

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#287

Awesome update..asad was attacked badly..but despite his instructions Zoya came out of safe room and bravely..faced the goons and rescued asad..

asad was hit..the bullet removal part was nice..but both were safe

waiting for the next update

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jas91

@jas91

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
Res for Saima Aapi... Nim... Tehs Aapi...

Res for Affu Arshu Bestu Choto

Res for srash trishu adi sue sum binnu shama annie mayur asif and all Choco's readers 😳

Hugs Bestu🤗

Choco Awesome part

My god they broke in Asad's home & did serious damage by beating him

Asya had 2 run away & Asad got shot

& Asad asked Zoe 2 take out d bullet which she did painfully

Choco a very well written updt wid so much detailing Brilliant dear👏👏

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#289

Thanku fr res pyar ki dukaan 🤗

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#290

Choco! Choco! Choco 🤗
i was smiling and screaming in joy when i saw ur pm flash! Oh god all excited i ran here to read
what an amazing thrilling update!
I love zoya! How daring she came out and that whole scene u wrote it superbly gving me the feel of a movie ! Honestly i adored asad's instructions and asad ko bullet lagi! Haww
bt zoya oh ths grl! Ur potraying her strong self so gracefully