Asya OS: That One Day

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys.
How are you all?
So i am back with a new OS. Hope you guys will like it.
And i m sorry for not updating my FFs but what to do i m busy.
Enjoy reading 😛

Asya OS : That one day

Zoya to her friend "kal phir se Delhi. I am so happy. Vo bhi same train se, vo ladka dikhega"
Sanaya, Zoya's friend asked "you like him?"
Zoya replied " no. But the way he protected me from that boys last week. I loved it."
Sanaya said "oh. Thats good"

Zoya and Sanaya lives near Delhi. They go to Delhi for there CAT coaching on weekends. Zoya is a veey bubbly girl, full crazy. She had 2 ex boy friends, but she dont care inspite she live her life to fullest. Last to last week when she stepped into General coach of Train she saw a boy who was looking. They both sat infront of eachother, the seats were so conjusted that there knees were touching but noone made any effort to separate that contact infact zoya was very comfortable. They didnt talked and then reached Delhi.
Next week again they met by chance. This time there was so rush, one uncle was kind of touching his back with zoya's. Zoya thought its by mistake but she was getting irritated. She was constantly telling sanaya to push that uncle. That boy than kept his arm between her and uncle's back. Uncle got angry by this action. That day, that boy indirectly took some information of zoya.

Zoya and sanaaya came to station next morning, zoya dressed in her new top. She saw that boy on station. Train came and girls stepped in general coach with boy after them.
Some boys were staring zoya and zoya was not feeling comfortable. She didnt had any handkerchief so asked from that boy and tied it on her face.
Boy was constantly staring at that girl but with decency.
Than the boy asked sanaya "Mac D chaloge. Abhi one hour hai tumhari coaching ko"
Sanaya replied "ask from zoya. But i dont think she will "
Boy replied "umm. But i ll ask."
Than the boy talked to zoya and exchanged there names. "Hi i am Asad." Zoya replied "hi i am zoya"
Asad asked "mac d chaloge?"
Zoya didn't replied, as they met now only, they dont know eachother. So she was confused. Than she asked her friend and they made plan of going to Mac D.
They were sitting there when Sanaya who is punjabi said she Want to go to Gurudwara BaglaSahib and than asad said lets go to church also. They made plan.
When they were sitting in mac D zoya and asad were talking. "Love is waste of time. Rat rat bhar batein karna. Baby khana khaya? Mera baby so gaya" asad said he cant do all this.
Zoya too said "i too agree"
Asad was staring at zoya and was pasiing indirect compliments like "pagal ladkia hi cute hoti hai" to which zoya blushed.
Sanaya said "zoya indirectly tujhe cute bol raha hai"
Asad was drinking coffee and zoya and sanaya ice tea.
Asad offered his coffee to zoya, zoya denied saying she dont drink coffee except of exams days. But asad kept his hand in front of her indicating to drink it.
Zoya understood this so she was about to remove her straw from her ice tea when asad said "mujhe koi disease nahi hai"
Zoya drank from his straw only. And than asad drank his coffee. He didnt asked from sanaya. Second time when he asked from zoyq he asked from sanaaya too.

They than proceeded to metro. So many people were there, people were getting touched by others unintentionally. Asad kept his hand between zoya and boys. Zoya noticed all this and she felt happy that he is so caring.
He literally like a bodyguard protected her from crowd.
They were having fun, teasing eachother, making fun of eachother.
They were now walking on empty road to go to Gurudwara.
Asad said "pata hai yeh sab ek sapna lag raha hai."
Zoya than said "seriously yar. I cant believe ki hum aaj mile and aise lag rha hai jaise salo se ek dusre ko jante ho"
Sanaya said "vaise ekbat btau asad. Zoya na specially is train se aayi taki tum dikho, as such like bhi nahi karti. But she was like, ki hum isi train se jayenge and all"
Asad just kept quite as if hiding something.

They reached Gurudwara. Asad wore dark blue cloth on his head, zoya was also finding a cloth, asad came and started finding cloth and gave her dark blue cloth(matching matching😉
Than they went inside and offered prayers. Zoya as usual prayed for her family and came out in a second asad too came out.
They were waiting for sanaya.
Asad said "aaj maine first time kuch apne liye manga"
Zoya didnt say anything. Sanaya came and they went to church.
Outside Gurudwara sanaya was choosing ring for herself. Zoya too started looking for a ring. Asad was taking something which girls dont know as they were busy in there stuff.
Zoya chose one ring for herself but asad said its not good. Zoya liked it so she bought it.

They went to Church. Zoya closed her eyes and was praying when she felt air blew on her she opened her eyes to see asad looking at her.
Zoya asked "you blew air?"
Asad replied "nahi ji. Hawa ka jhoka tha"
Zoya said ok and again closed her eyes.
After offering prayers they were about to go. Asad extended his hand and asked zoya "friends?"
Zoya too shook hands. Than he asked from sanaya she too agreed.
When they were leaving zoya said. "Bye Jesus I love you"
Asad said "i love you too"
Zoya looked at him shocked. Asad replied "Jesus ki taraf se tha yeh"
Zoya smiled and went
Asad asked for some pictures but zoya denied as they met today only.
They than hired Auto to go to Agressen ki Baoli.
Zoya was tired she unknowingly kept her head on Asad's back. Zoya was so comfortable with him from starting that she didn't mind. Otherwise she dont touch boys.

Than they they reached Agressen ki baoli. Zoya and sanaya opened there tiffin.
Aaad ate from zoya's tiffin and a little bit from sanaya's too.
Zoya's inner strap was visible.
Asad said "zoya top thik karlo"
Zoya did as he said. He gained more respect in her eyes.
If it was any other boy he would have never said that.

Zoya was looking at and was saying this boy is cute. Asad was getting jealous, zoya was making him more jealous.
Zoya's ring was losse. Sanaya said "asad pehena do zoya ko"
Asad took the ring . zoya opened her 1st finfer not engagement finger.
Sanaya teased "isme nahi pehenate."
Asad wore that in 1st finger.
They had the best time of there life.

They were to go on 2 o'clock train. But asad got it missed purposely as it will drop them very early. And they ll not get enough time to spend.
When they were coming by metro asad again took care of zoya.
Zoya said "itni care karna zaruri nahi hai"
Asad replied "har bat ko galat way mein lena zaruri hai"
Zoya said "Maine bhi yahi kaha ki as a friend care kar rahe ho. Maine kab kaha as a brother kar rahe ho. " asad glared at her on the word brother. And zoya giggled.

Finally they got a train and got seat in that train. Sanaya sat on another seat
Zoya and asad were seating really close to eachother.
Asad said "pata hai koi kisi ladki ko dekhta hai toh mujhe koi farak nahi padta but jab koi tumhe dekhta hai na toh bht gussa ata hai. I dont know kya hai tujh mein par first time mujhe koi ladki bht pasand ayi"
Zoya replied "pata hai mujhe ladko ke sath ghumne mein bht dar lagta hai isliye kabhi nahi jati par tumhare sath mujhe bilkul dar nahi laga. And i was so comfortable with you"
Asad gave something to zoya in her hand.
It was key chain with letter Z.
Zoya asked "yeh kab lia tumne?"
Asad replied "jab tum ring le rahi thi"
They both talked whole way. It was Love at first sight.

When they were about to go zoya held asad's hand and said bye. Asad's heart skipped a beat when she held his hand.

When they reached home zoya messaged him giving him her number.
They talked full day and fell in love with eachother.

Asad said "pata hai maine kya manga tha Gurudware mein?"
Zoya asked "what?"
Asad said "ki yeh ladki ya toh mujhse bht dur chali jaye ya aaj ke din mein hi meri sab kuch ban jaye. Hand see. I fell in love with you"
Zoya replied "me too" and blushed.

"That one day" changed there lives. That one single day brought true love in Asad and Zoya's life. Usually we run after things whuch are not meant for us and make ourselves sad, that why its not in our destiny but that God is a big player he has already decided his moves.
We ll get whatever is in our destiny sooner or later, so never doubt his doings. Thanku God.

Hope you guys like it.
Thanku.
Love Vish❤️

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_Annie_ thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
vaishu..hws u? 🤗

Me first

Such a sweet OS it was vaishuu Love at first sight <3

AsYa were so adorable here :)

Write more vaishu...will be waiting 🤗
Edited by _Annie_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Annie_

Res

vaishu..hws u? 🤗

Hi annie.
How are you? 🤗
I am fine. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👍🏼
mera comment zaroori he kya 😉😳

Edited by binuuu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Lovely OS.😊
The way Asad(KSG) caring for Zoya was so Cute.😊
The whole OS was so Beautifully explained.😊
Please write like this on ASYA(KABHI) and Pm to me.😊
Please continue your other FF on ASYA(KABHI),I am waiting here..😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey suberb and cute os vaishu!
Loved it..
Loved Asya that one day wid each other!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: binuuu

👍🏼
mera comment zaroori he kya 😉😳

Marzi hai teri 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lvly shot vish..
Awesomely written.. Loved it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww vaishu 😃
tu na sachi itni cute bandi he nd m so happy reading ths
🤗 MWUAAH
mast that one day nd ab pta chala ki din bhar phone pe baate and lv shv hone ke baad net ke liye tym ni milta he
anyway description mazedar tha and so caring he is wow! It was an honest and pure os
ab ek baat bta
wats with the trains? Teri pehli story jo mene padhi thi usme bhi train thi 😆
chuk chuk train wale asad mujhe bade pasand he
and tu bhi ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os
great job

loved it

thanks for pm

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