Asya TS: A Secret Crush [Completed] *TY Note + Upd @ page- 37 23/10 * - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey you !
You are such awesome writer dear
Why you didn't write before ?
Such awesome start it is !
Keep it up darling
You are gonna win so many hearts with this story !
Count my first !
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update de do yaar,
mai sunday ko chali jaungi..
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{Note: All is goody goody here, all are happy and well settled in their lives... Gaffur and Rashid are good professional friends; Rashid has only one married commitment}

❤️Characters❤️

Asad Ahmed Khan: The heir of Khan industries, a sweet gentleman at heart {Note that Asad isn't emotionally challenged}

Zoya Gafur Siddiqui: The bubbly, fantabulous girl... A total filmy at heart

Humaira: Zoya's younger sister {No step sis relation she is her real sis}

Gafur Siddiqui: Zoya's dad, One of the most rich personalities in India

Najma, Ayaan: Asad's siblings {Note that there is no Sheeren and these three are Rashid's and Dilshad's kids}

Nikhat: Zoya's bestiee working in Asad's office!

Akash: Asad's Bestiee

❤️Chapter 1❤️
Ekk Ladki Bheegi Bahgi Sii

His fingers lingered across her collar bone to spinal cord which passed a ticklish sensation all over her body, she was drowning in it but yet was conscious. Just then he moved closer from behind that she could sense his breaths fanning her loose left hairs. He resumed his tickling activity and continued playing her fingers along her back as a result she melted and gave away herself in his mighty arms
"Your Red backless dress is seducing me", he said now his fingers lingering over her neck making her almost breathless
"Please stop!", she whispered as she couldn't breath
"Okay so get UP now!", she heard a terrific change in his romantic voice
"Asad What happened?", she said pinching her eyebrows
"Asad who is this?", now his rough manly voice turned extremely girlish and cute
"Baby...you took my stopping command so seriously!...I want to sink more deeper", she said turning and taking his head forward with the intention of pressing her lips on his, just then she saw Asad throwing a jug full of water on her to stop the moment making Zoya waking up instantly
"What's this?", she lashed angrily getting up from sleep
"ZOYA!! Whats wrong??",Nikhat shouted shaking her wildly
"NIKHAT!!...You!!!",Zoya yelled squeezing her nose as she was in out-most shock

**One Week Later**

It had suddenly started raining heavily on the streets of Mumbai that night! "This city is so unpredictable!", she hit the steering of her car hard as her car refused to move ahead in heavy rains! Zoya was in Mumbai for her best friend's reception which she had to attend as she couldn't go to the wedding, she was on the way back to her hotel room when it all of a sudden started raining and to her more misfortune her car stopped working in a complete lonely area. The streets seemed blacker than the charcoal as there was nothing visible at the time she turned the headlights off! So she decided it's better to leave the car on as the darkness, heavy rain with thunders was quite scary!

"Oh I wish I had a mug of hot coffee and a pizza now!", the innocent Zoya popped out as she had loved rains and the horror movies always

Zoya was sunshine, a charmer.. everywhere she went she created a light atmosphere with her sheer presence, guys flattered around her like honeybees across their hive but she only longed for one man's attention she loved secretly, she had even agreed to be his employee even when she was the eldest daughter of the city's billionaire one of the most rich men in India Mr. Gaffur Siddiqui who loved his both daughters till core to just be near him and to get some of his attention, she had even registered herself with a fake name of Zoya farooqi, also created all fake certificates to get closer to him but all her efforts went in vain as nothing could impress that loner! She giggled as she recalled the state she left her friend Nikhat the previous week when she was dreaming of her prince charming! But he doesn't even look at her once. His female employees make sure to look the best with each day passing to just have his one glance, but Mr. Akhdu Ahmed Khan never bothered to pay a penny to their growing efforts!

A loud voice that was created by the collision of clouds brought Zoya to the present with a jerk

"Oh NO Zoya forget that Akhdu!', she slapped on her head at left side hard thrice to let Asad's thought fall away from the right side of her ears!

Zoya realised that she cannot spend whole night in the car! She decided to step out to find her shelter for the night. She cursed herself for not waiting at her friend's home for the night when there were clear signs of the heavy rain since afternoon itself. She looked at her phone and she found out that atleast her battery wasn't dear! She turned on the torch and stepped out.

"Thank you SONY to make this iphone waterproof!" She stepped out getting drenched with the water that the clouds poured that night, "Allah miya what's wrong with you? Saare clouds ka paani aaj hi khatam karna hai kya? [Why you wanna finish all the water in clouds today itself?]", she said angrily when she heard a small thunder again, "Okay Okay Sorry!", she said as she assumed that her allah miya was scolding her for shouting at him

At a faraway point she saw a house that looked almost haunted in the light the thunderstorms emitted with the shadow of coconut tree falling on it! She gulped as a typical hindi film heroine would do in such situation as moved closer... her heart was thudding hard as she approached... she recalled all horror scenes from such kind of movies she had watched as she moved closer... she herself sang few horror songs like 'Gumnaam hai koi' to give herself a background score.. but that didn't lessen down her tension!

She finally entered the gates of the house, "no watchman" she noted down as she recalled a movie she had watched*gulp*, "Next the shadow of a ghost", she mistook with the shadow of a nearby tree*another gulp*, "Next the door will automatically open", she recalled the third scene from the movie and to her extreme shock the door opened slowly creating a typical sound of a door swollen due to rains*another gulp*.. Zoya was all set to run when suddenly someone switched on the lights from inside and as a result the outer area got slight light

"Miss Farooqi?", it was Asad

"Allah miya what's wrong with you Miss Zoya Gaffur Siddiqui you are imagining that Akhdu even in a GHOST", she whispered under a breath in an inaudible voice..

Asad couldn't probably hear it, "Errr What?", he pinched his eyebrows and folded his hands near his chest taking a posture of her boss

"Err it's real!", she came face to face with reality keeping her filmy brain aside for a while

"What are you doing here?"

"I actually I had come to attend my friend's reception in Juhu today and lost my way in mid way due to rains and power cut... also my phone's GPS is not working...Data connection problem...and my car...", Zoya started but Asad did cut her in middle, "But you did say your Grandpa had an heart attack due to which your Granny went into coma!.. Thus it was necessary for you to be in Mumbai near them", Asad countered her

"Please Mr Khan can I come inside?... Its too cold", she said clutching her body close due to cold

"Hmm ok yes... I mean Please... you are drenched", he said

The scene became more visible when Zoya from slightly to completely well lit room.. The house was no less than any palace..Zoya's eyes popped out seeing it's interior.. but someone else was at a greater shock

"A...ASAD...", someone screamed scaring Zoya

"Err no ammi!", Asad hushed her

"Mr. Khan may I get a towel to dry myself!", Zoya said as she was feeling more cold in the AC

"Err you need something to cover yourself too Miss Farooqi... yo...you a...re..are almost transparent!", he said bringing his palms near his jaw that resulted in Zoya suddenly covering her chest with her bag clutching it more tightly near her chest! Asad noticed the embarrassment and immediately moved away asking Najma to do the needful, signing her something that Zoya didn't get!

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Asad went to his room and sat on the couch, thinking how he had just watched Zoya... he admitted to himself that Zoya looked sexy to the core making his heart lurch... only he knew how he had held himself from holding her near his chest to supply her with his warmth .. he adored her traditional Indian beauty when he looked at Zoya in White Saree with a back less blouse... he so wanted to play with her bare back with his fingers.. YES she was his most tasty delicacy, though he never showed it, he was wooed by her charms and positive aura, he giggled thousand times in his heart at his office when he sensed her pout at the time when he purposely ignored her... he was a man with a great control but god knows what happened to him all of a sudden when Zoya came drenched in front of him that too in front of his ammi! He wondered how he will face his ammijaan now!

"Asad!", someone knocked at the door, Asad recognised that's it his ammi

"Yes ammi!", he opened the door

"The dinner is ready!", she said and turned back

"You can question!", Asad said glaring at the floor

Dilshad burst out laughing at his condition and took him inside!

She sat on the bed and Asad on the floor near her feet with his head on her lap!

"I know you like her!", she said putting fingers across his hair and caressing his head...Asad looked at her with utter respect and affection... ofcourse he can never hide things from his Mom

"I knew you liked her from the day you saw her in my friend's function*first Bomb*... I also know that your heart danced with joy when I showed you her photo as the girl I choose for you!*second Bomb*", Dilshad giggled, Asad's jaw dropped as he heard his mother, sensing he won't reply she peeled his ears, "I also know all your drama along with Ayaan!*Third Bomb*" , Dilshaad peeled his ears more making him red, "Atleast confess now!"

A deep reddish pink hue spread on Asad's cheeks as he found that his mother knew everything!

"Ohh Asad even Girls don't blush so much!", Dilshad slapped her forehead slowly and continued, "Just look at my would be bahu she is so bold enough that she don't even mind going behind bars for her love!", she declared her bahu superior

"Ammi are you my ammi or her's look.. look she entered my office by fraud via her friend Nikhat who works in my office...", Asad started

"and you allowed her to do so...", Dilshad completed him that made a beautiful smile lit on his now red face... he nodded

"I enjoy her every time she tries hard to impress me!"

"and get angry every time when male employees flirt with her", It was Ayaan entering via the window!

"Err you are wetting my clean couch with the water from your raincoat!", Asad angrily pulled him down

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At the dining table all were giggling over Zoya's innocence as she just attacked on food and licked her fingers constantly like a kid, the outfits of Najma seemed too lose and too short for her but she looked too cute in it. Zoya seemed to be a small hungry kid who got all her favourite dishes at the same time, she ignored the starters and directly attacked the tasty main course in front of her!. "Your sexy dish won't be visible till she wears her saree again tomorrow", his friend Akash teased him as he too was a part in this game, Asad saw him with tough looks

"So tasty Dilshad aunty!... the food at the reception was just soo eww!!", she said due to her multitasking of her eating and speaking her epiglottis got confused and some of the food entered her nasal track and she began to cough

"Miss farooqi... the food is not running away slowly!", Asad said who was secretly adoring her

"Najma will you please pass that chicken lolly pop?", Zoya asked as she eyed it from starting

Najma passed the dish while all ate silently watching Zoya who looked like she will be eating the meal equal to 100 elephants!

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"Zoya now sleep quietly!", Najma said to Zoya

"I think I had a bit more today!", Zoya said holding her tummy

"Just LITTLE", Najma giggled raising her eyebrows!

"Its so cute family outing you guys have", Zoya said

Najma had now guessed that Asad came to their Mumbai house only so that if possible he could be with Zoya... and seems that the destiny worked in their favor!

"Actually it was Bhaijaan's decision!"

"But your house looks scary from outside and so beautiful from inside!"

"Oh it's again Bhaijan's idea he loves grey... black.. shade and theme... Now good night I am really sleepy!"

Both slept with their back facing each other

"Mr Bhoothnath Ahmed Khan! You scared me to hell today!", she cursed him lovingly and went asleep

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*Teaser*

"How dare you?", Zoya screamed shocking Asad to core

*To be continued*

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Hey Jaanupies 🤗
How was the chapter😳
I hope I didn't bore you
And Sorry for being two days late ha actually the update was in the laptop who was with my bhai who was having training in Pune for two days so Sowwiee as I can see people staring at this thread with red faces 😳
calm down darlings! 😛
Next update chahiye?😉
Let this thread hit page no 55 next update mil jayegi


Edited by .Sanskruti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Updated **Phewww**
PMs will be sent later😳

Credit for a certain scene .Hemangi dii
Edited by .Sanskruti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Sans! Abhi update chaiyee


kiya meine update😳
bas abb sabko buddy karlo Pming ke liye
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yay! Res
me first

unres
sans 🤗
sry yar bohat late unres karing
bt chap mene kal hi read kar liya tha
i really loved the flow of ths chappy yar wow! Mast read rahi
zoya stop thinking abt akdu hahaha and loving the grey house concept! Hehe gulp gulp oh wow! Unique way of writing
awesome yar
ghost me bhi asad 🤣
and if only she knew ki uske bhootnath ahmed khan is also having secret crush!
Continue! Mwuaah
Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
res
unres sorry for late unressing
m loving this ..
u really dropped the bomb as it was all planning by mr.akdu amd zoya bechari she is thinking Asad is not immpressed by her haha lets see what store next..
Edited by Kanwal4salman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Love it!
But the teaser...? What does Asad do?...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I totally loved it
The precap is getting me all excited and stuff
What could've possibly happened that Zoya is so upset
I wonder
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima30

Love it!
But the teaser...? What does Asad do?...
Update soon



err sorry my fault!
I forgot to copy paste the teaser sowiee😳
The chapter takes place few weeks later😛... Asad is too smitten by Zoe and knows that Zoe changed her identity
he too is playing with her!

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