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{Note: All is goody goody here, all are happy and well settled in their lives... Gaffur and Rashid are good professional friends; Rashid has only one married commitment}
Asad Ahmed Khan: The heir of Khan industries, a sweet gentleman at heart {Note that Asad isn't emotionally challenged}
Humaira: Zoya's younger sister {No step sis relation she is her real sis}
Najma, Ayaan: Asad's siblings {Note that there is no Sheeren and these three are Rashid's and Dilshad's kids}
Akash: Asad's Bestiee
It had suddenly started raining heavily on the streets of Mumbai that night! "This city is so unpredictable!", she hit the steering of her car hard as her car refused to move ahead in heavy rains! Zoya was in Mumbai for her best friend's reception which she had to attend as she couldn't go to the wedding, she was on the way back to her hotel room when it all of a sudden started raining and to her more misfortune her car stopped working in a complete lonely area. The streets seemed blacker than the charcoal as there was nothing visible at the time she turned the headlights off! So she decided it's better to leave the car on as the darkness, heavy rain with thunders was quite scary!
Zoya was sunshine, a charmer.. everywhere she went she created a light atmosphere with her sheer presence, guys flattered around her like honeybees across their hive but she only longed for one man's attention she loved secretly, she had even agreed to be his employee even when she was the eldest daughter of the city's billionaire one of the most rich men in India Mr. Gaffur Siddiqui who loved his both daughters till core to just be near him and to get some of his attention, she had even registered herself with a fake name of Zoya farooqi, also created all fake certificates to get closer to him but all her efforts went in vain as nothing could impress that loner! She giggled as she recalled the state she left her friend Nikhat the previous week when she was dreaming of her prince charming! But he doesn't even look at her once. His female employees make sure to look the best with each day passing to just have his one glance, but Mr. Akhdu Ahmed Khan never bothered to pay a penny to their growing efforts!
"Oh NO Zoya forget that Akhdu!', she slapped on her head at left side hard thrice to let Asad's thought fall away from the right side of her ears!
"Thank you SONY to make this iphone waterproof!" She stepped out getting drenched with the water that the clouds poured that night, "Allah miya what's wrong with you? Saare clouds ka paani aaj hi khatam karna hai kya? [Why you wanna finish all the water in clouds today itself?]", she said angrily when she heard a small thunder again, "Okay Okay Sorry!", she said as she assumed that her allah miya was scolding her for shouting at him
At a faraway point she saw a house that looked almost haunted in the light the thunderstorms emitted with the shadow of coconut tree falling on it! She gulped as a typical hindi film heroine would do in such situation as moved closer... her heart was thudding hard as she approached... she recalled all horror scenes from such kind of movies she had watched as she moved closer... she herself sang few horror songs like 'Gumnaam hai koi' to give herself a background score.. but that didn't lessen down her tension!
She finally entered the gates of the house, "no watchman" she noted down as she recalled a movie she had watched*gulp*, "Next the shadow of a ghost", she mistook with the shadow of a nearby tree*another gulp*, "Next the door will automatically open", she recalled the third scene from the movie and to her extreme shock the door opened slowly creating a typical sound of a door swollen due to rains*another gulp*.. Zoya was all set to run when suddenly someone switched on the lights from inside and as a result the outer area got slight light
"Miss Farooqi?", it was Asad
"Allah miya what's wrong with you Miss Zoya Gaffur Siddiqui you are imagining that Akhdu even in a GHOST", she whispered under a breath in an inaudible voice..
Asad couldn't probably hear it, "Errr What?", he pinched his eyebrows and folded his hands near his chest taking a posture of her boss
"Err it's real!", she came face to face with reality keeping her filmy brain aside for a while
"What are you doing here?"
"I actually I had come to attend my friend's reception in Juhu today and lost my way in mid way due to rains and power cut... also my phone's GPS is not working...Data connection problem...and my car...", Zoya started but Asad did cut her in middle, "But you did say your Grandpa had an heart attack due to which your Granny went into coma!.. Thus it was necessary for you to be in Mumbai near them", Asad countered her
"Please Mr Khan can I come inside?... Its too cold", she said clutching her body close due to cold
"Hmm ok yes... I mean Please... you are drenched", he said
The scene became more visible when Zoya from slightly to completely well lit room.. The house was no less than any palace..Zoya's eyes popped out seeing it's interior.. but someone else was at a greater shock
"A...ASAD...", someone screamed scaring Zoya
"Err no ammi!", Asad hushed her
"Mr. Khan may I get a towel to dry myself!", Zoya said as she was feeling more cold in the AC
"Err you need something to cover yourself too Miss Farooqi... yo...you a...re..are almost transparent!", he said bringing his palms near his jaw that resulted in Zoya suddenly covering her chest with her bag clutching it more tightly near her chest! Asad noticed the embarrassment and immediately moved away asking Najma to do the needful, signing her something that Zoya didn't get!
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Asad went to his room and sat on the couch, thinking how he had just watched Zoya... he admitted to himself that Zoya looked sexy to the core making his heart lurch... only he knew how he had held himself from holding her near his chest to supply her with his warmth .. he adored her traditional Indian beauty when he looked at Zoya in White Saree with a back less blouse... he so wanted to play with her bare back with his fingers.. YES she was his most tasty delicacy, though he never showed it, he was wooed by her charms and positive aura, he giggled thousand times in his heart at his office when he sensed her pout at the time when he purposely ignored her... he was a man with a great control but god knows what happened to him all of a sudden when Zoya came drenched in front of him that too in front of his ammi! He wondered how he will face his ammijaan now!
"Asad!", someone knocked at the door, Asad recognised that's it his ammi
"Yes ammi!", he opened the door
"The dinner is ready!", she said and turned back
"You can question!", Asad said glaring at the floor
Dilshad burst out laughing at his condition and took him inside!
She sat on the bed and Asad on the floor near her feet with his head on her lap!
"I know you like her!", she said putting fingers across his hair and caressing his head...Asad looked at her with utter respect and affection... ofcourse he can never hide things from his Mom
"I knew you liked her from the day you saw her in my friend's function*first Bomb*... I also know that your heart danced with joy when I showed you her photo as the girl I choose for you!*second Bomb*", Dilshad giggled, Asad's jaw dropped as he heard his mother, sensing he won't reply she peeled his ears, "I also know all your drama along with Ayaan!*Third Bomb*" , Dilshaad peeled his ears more making him red, "Atleast confess now!"
A deep reddish pink hue spread on Asad's cheeks as he found that his mother knew everything!
"Ohh Asad even Girls don't blush so much!", Dilshad slapped her forehead slowly and continued, "Just look at my would be bahu she is so bold enough that she don't even mind going behind bars for her love!", she declared her bahu superior
"Ammi are you my ammi or her's look.. look she entered my office by fraud via her friend Nikhat who works in my office...", Asad started
"and you allowed her to do so...", Dilshad completed him that made a beautiful smile lit on his now red face... he nodded
"I enjoy her every time she tries hard to impress me!"
"and get angry every time when male employees flirt with her", It was Ayaan entering via the window!
"Err you are wetting my clean couch with the water from your raincoat!", Asad angrily pulled him down
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"So tasty Dilshad aunty!... the food at the reception was just soo eww!!", she said due to her multitasking of her eating and speaking her epiglottis got confused and some of the food entered her nasal track and she began to cough
"Miss farooqi... the food is not running away slowly!", Asad said who was secretly adoring her
"Najma will you please pass that chicken lolly pop?", Zoya asked as she eyed it from starting
Najma passed the dish while all ate silently watching Zoya who looked like she will be eating the meal equal to 100 elephants!
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"Zoya now sleep quietly!", Najma said to Zoya
"I think I had a bit more today!", Zoya said holding her tummy
"Just LITTLE", Najma giggled raising her eyebrows!
"Its so cute family outing you guys have", Zoya said
Najma had now guessed that Asad came to their Mumbai house only so that if possible he could be with Zoya... and seems that the destiny worked in their favor!
"Actually it was Bhaijaan's decision!"
"But your house looks scary from outside and so beautiful from inside!"
"Oh it's again Bhaijan's idea he loves grey... black.. shade and theme... Now good night I am really sleepy!"
Both slept with their back facing each other
"Mr Bhoothnath Ahmed Khan! You scared me to hell today!", she cursed him lovingly and went asleep
"How dare you?", Zoya screamed shocking Asad to core
*To be continued*
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Hey Jaanupies 🤗
How was the chapter😳
I hope I didn't bore you
And Sorry for being two days late ha actually the update was in the laptop who was with my bhai who was having training in Pune for two days so Sowwiee as I can see people staring at this thread with red faces 😳
calm down darlings! 😛
Next update chahiye?😉
Let this thread hit page no 55 next update mil jayegi
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Sans! Abhi update chaiyee
Originally posted by: fatima30
Love it!
But the teaser...? What does Asad do?...
Update soon
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