OS: When I thought she was gone forever...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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"... There she was, hard as stone, unable to move, her breath non existent... As she laid there lifeless, I felt lifeless myself.. Why was this happening to me? Why couldn't she be with me a while longer? Do I need to realize how much I love her, only when she's gone? Why wasn't I given a moment so that I could tell her I loved her while she was still breathing? I would have loved to see the smile on her beautiful face, that melts my heart. Yes... She melts my heart.. She melts every part of me that I can't tell you how dead I feel without her...
Mahira... I need you... I need you here with me.. You can't leave me like this.. Not when I have realized you mean the world to me.. How can you do this to me..? The only girl that moved a monster like me, the only one who could make me smile from my heart, the only one who I fell so much in love with, only to see her lifeless on the ground... Oh Lord, give me a moment, forgive me of all that I've done, unworthy in your sight. She's all I want now and she's all I need... My Mahira.. My Mahira... "

As the weight upon his heart was so overwhelming, Azaad teared and a little droplet fell on Mahira's hand. Right at that moment, something happened. There was movement in her hands. It felt like a miracle... But what came after was unbelievable. She was moving... the stony appearance that was wrapped around her body was slowly disappearing.. Azaad was confused... "What's happening, what is happening to My Mahira" he thought.. Just then, she took a deep breath... And there she was, back to life... Her face as beautiful as snow and her eyes as sparkly as the stars...Azaad grabbed her, and kissed her head. He felt renewed, like someone just took that searing pain from his heart and filled it with an unknowing joy and life. Yes... He felt alive again, the one he loves, was back in his arms, ALIVE.. He looked up and thanked the Lord for his great mercies upon him and that He gave him back that moment he wished for... The moment with her and the moment with his precious that he would cherish for a lifetime...

With that, he carried her up in his arms and in his arms, she would be forever...



PS: I don't even know if this should be called an OS because it wasn't exactly an episode recap or something.. This is my first OS ever in this forum and I think I suck at it.. 😆 But hey! There's always a first time for everything right.. Hope you enjoy it.. Even if you don't , lemme know too! 😆

PPS: This was totally my POV of Azaad's moment when he realized Mahira was gone.. 😳


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Sherni_Jerry thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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u wrote it so well
dosnt seem lyk frst tym. write mre
thnx
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

u wrote it so well
dosnt seem lyk frst tym. write mre
thnx


Awww thank you for such kind comments! 🤗 I'll write more when time permits for sure.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: amare_ashy



Awww thank you for such kind comments! 🤗I'll write more when time permits for sure..😳


u r welcome 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww ashy...it is so beautiful!!

Such a lovely Pov( of Azaad)

Osum .. Write more dear!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woohooo! First OS! Awesome work Ash darling! Oh Azaad when he's just so lost...The thoughts of losing her, how it killed him!

Thanks for this babe! Mwah mwahh!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written os. Lovely reading it. Do continue writing more. Could see azaads pain and rajbir acting it.

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