AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: Sanjhari
I am waiting for the update but I am scared too

Afraid it is the part of the story we are all dreading

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#412

R😊

Unres

Nice update

Started off on a happy note but then the intensity the seriousness is starting

So Asad expected Zoya is plastered on the front page of newspaper in Asad arms

Love how she played it down like it is not her

But Asad comes and ruin it

Aww so lovey dovey love can really change a man

So who is the ugly guy you r dancing with 😆

So he called twice and he had only been away for 24 hrs

How many time will he call when he is gone longer

We will find out soon as he is off to Italy as Rossi is in hiding as people has been snooping

Abbas obviously

So he told the media abt her who she is and he plans to marry her

Aww so a small wedding just him and a dargah

Then the honeymoon then we will take care of friends and family with a party

Wonder how big was the check he left for he wedding dress but he should get her engagement ring in Italy

Tht is if he don't get the horrible news abt her being Abbas mistress and is their being his spy.

Abbas what a bas***d and poor Zoya don't want to take no drastic steps as it will put her in more picke with Asad

So the bas***d want 4 bids not 1 oh boy Zoya love what u do with the bids

But who is the man is he investigating her for is he Abbas spy

He took the papers out of the trash back

Which was it duplicate then she fixed the price or the originals with the real price tht part was confused

If it is the duplicate it wifi work in her favour

So he took pics too when she went to meet Abbas

Ok so the bad part will be next

Plz just let them suffer one chapter even if it is 2 in the book make it one

No long separation they r already separated enough with all these trips

Waiting

Ps . Oh I forgot Asad is putting Samar as president of AAK Corp so what will he be doing

And he took him too Italy to reunite him and Anaya 😊

Edited by anopama - 9 years ago

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Sanjhari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#413

I commented above and thought that last comment was also mine but now I checked and realized that she already updated

Andy did and yes I am first once again😆

Edited by Sanjhari - 9 years ago

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 9 years ago

#414

Awesome update..

Asad announced their wedding...😳😃

Zoya being threatened by Abbas ...😡

I am so excited to read more..

Thank you for the pm...

Please do continue soon..

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#415

Hey Pia..
Wonderfully written and a Very good part..
The Trap is being laid...and Zoya is the bait here...when Asad will come...the whole scenario will be diff as Abbas & Asad's men ( piyush i guess ) will tell him that Zoya is responsible for spying...in his office.
You know as this story is based on a novel...i have researched a little...their would be a certain scene in this which i don't really want to happen here...in this story...rest you can do whatever you want.
Later...
Asad's behaviour and calmness was so good to read...that is what he deserves...but this is going to be short lived...
Ahh...so many things..
Continue real soon.

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#416

Make one more post and you will be a Senior Member Pia...and you will be able to comment more...

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Awesome update..
Asad announced their wedding...😳😃
Zoya being threatened by Abbas ...😡
I am so excited to read more..
Thank you for the pm...
Please do continue soon..

Thanks Arpita 😊
I am so glad u liked this chapter.

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hey Pia..
Wonderfully written and a Very good part..
The Trap is being laid...and Zoya is the bait here...when Asad will come...the whole scenario will be diff as Abbas & Asad's men ( piyush i guess ) will tell him that Zoya is responsible for spying...in his office.
You know as this story is based on a novel...i have researched a little...their would be a certain scene in this which i don't really want to happen here...in this story...rest you can do whatever you want.
Later...
Asad's behaviour and calmness was so good to read...that is what he deserves...but this is going to be short lived...
Ahh...so many things..
Continue real soon.

Hi Mayur

Thanks for this lovely comment.
Which scene are you talking about? You can tell me via pm. I'll eliminate from the story. I think I kind of know which scene you are talking about. Is it when Zoya will come to meet Asad in his office. Let me know via pm.

Glad u liked this story much...it's one of my favorite 😊