AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75 - Page 31

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Annie_

OMG...Just came across this story. And darling, you made my day <3

Double standards is my favorite McNaught novel after Paradise and Whitney. I was simply crazy about it and finished it in a day since I couldn't keep it down and I kept reading it again n again for a week. Nick and Lauren are my loves <3

I'm loving the way you're portraying it on AsYa. I can understand Asad's feelings. The earing scene...Omigosh. Nick <3

Are you gonna take the story completely that way? Coz I'm really excited :D

Continue super duper soon Pia. Just can't wait for the next update :))



Yay so happy to know that you've read this amazing story too.
Paradise is my another favorite 😳
And yes Nick and Lauren 😳 they were so good in this story.
I am enjoying reading and writing this story in AsYa version too 😳
That earring scene is really adorabke but my favorite is the last chapter. 😳
I have not made any changes in this story so it would go exactly how the original was.
i will update soon. And thank you for reading and commenting. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Yay so happy to know that you've read this amazing story too.
Paradise is my another favorite 😳
And yes Nick and Lauren 😳 they were so good in this story.
I am enjoying reading and writing this story in AsYa version too 😳
That earring scene is really adorabke but my favorite is the last chapter. 😳
I have not made any changes in this story so it would go exactly how the original was.
i will update soon. And thank you for reading and commenting. 😊


Same pinch! Last chap is my favorite too 😳 Nick's dialogues were spot on! Okay, before I spill some spoilers in my excitement I better shut up! 😆

I always grow hyper when I discuss my fav novels 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Annie_



Same pinch! Last chap is my favorite too😳Nick's dialogues were spot on! Okay, before I spill some spoilers in my excitement I better shut up! 😆

I always grow hyper when I discuss my fav novels 😆



Did I tell you how much I love Nick in this story 😳
Even with all the faults in his character I still loved him so much.
You won't believe how many times I've read the last chapter...I can't get enough of it. Only one complain though, I wish there was more. I wanted to read more about them. 😊

Matt from Paradise is my another favorite hero. I love him so much. It's a funny incident but that story I read in AsYa's version first "written in the skies", but it wasn't completed on the forum and since the writer has mentioned the book's name, I bought the book to know the rest of the story. I fell in love with the Author and read almost all her books. But "double standard" is one of my most favorite just after Paradise.

I am really enjoying discussing this topic with you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Did I tell you how much I love Nick in this story 😳
Even with all the faults in his character I still loved him so much.
You won't believe how many times I've read the last chapter...I can't get enough of it. Only one complain though, I wish there was more. I wanted to read more about them. 😊

Matt from Paradise is my another favorite hero. I love him so much. It's a funny incident but that story I read in AsYa's version first "written in the skies", but it wasn't completed on the forum and since the writer has mentioned the book's name, I bought the book to know the rest of the story. I fell in love with the Author and read almost all her books. But "double standard" is one of my most favorite just after Paradise.

I am really enjoying discussing this topic with you 😊



Exactly my feelings. I loved Nick the most despite all his flaws. And there was his one dialogue that literally took my heart away, even though there were many I loved. I won't spill it though, let's see if you use that here ;)

Even I felt the ending was a bit abrupt and some more of them could be shown. But well, maybe we're just crazy Nick-Lauren lovers😆

Matt This guy made me shed tears literally. The time he and Meredith spent before seperation was so cute and the reunion after seperation was...GAHH I don't even have words. Loved how matt tried to woo her after knowing the truth about her miscarriage. And when he said that he'll give her paradise on a golden platter if she moves in with him, I died
That's my second fav :)


Even I'm enjoying yar


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update this story keeps getting interesting day by day and I love it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Awesome update...as always

Abbas is trying to get information from Zoya and she is loyal to her job..
Asad gifted her his grandma's earings..
Zoya saw the proffessional side of Asad...
Tanu's official entry and Mary assured her there was many such Tanu Baig in his life and realised her feelings..
Feeling sad for Zoya..it is really really painful for her..to see her love daily and act as if she doesnt care..
She wanted to get out of the mess and trying to sell off her piano...and also looking for new job..
Really interesting to read
Thanks for pm..



Thanks Arpita for this lovely comment.
Zoya has gotten herself in a mess.
That Siddiqui will lend her in trouble.
Asad won't be happy to know that she is related to Siddiqui's
He is falling in love with her but doesn't want to commit.
Poor Zoya 😕
Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanu013


Again..an amazing update..

</div>asad completely fell for Zoya..but he had no idea of that..he went directly to her home..<div>
again Zoya stood strong and gave her opinion...asad started avoiding Zoya...jealous Zoya...very interesting
asad gave his grand mothers earrings to Zoya in place of hers..he valued her feelings..had a feeling asad only had Zoya's mother earrings.. Zoya want to quit the job and leave the two companies...interesting twist
do continue soon..



Yeah jealous Zoya is fun but Jealous Asad will be very much fun 😃
She'll eventually get her mother's earrings back. But Asad gifting his grandmother's earring to her was very touching. She wants to quit the job but let's see if she'll be able to do it or not
Will update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



That earring scene is really adorable. Asad gifting his grandmother's earring to her was a big step from his side...you'll understand this more in the next or the chapter after that one. He is falling in love with her but doesn't want to be involved on emotional level. He is afraid of relationships. Me too, I can't stand Tanu Baig and the way she calls him Jammy. Just want to give her a punch. She remind me of Tanveer 😡 😆


Ohh I'm really looking forward to se asad's version of the story from here on...
I got that he is scared of relationships...

Haha jammy always irritated me in the show too...
Please give her a punch in ur story atleast...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update...
I'm worried for Zoya now...she blurted out that Italy thing...
I hate the Siddiquis...
Zoya's so in love with Asad ...
I'm looking forward to reading on how Asad falls for her too

Can't wait to read on
Thank you for the PM
Love these updates you give everyday 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Amazing story
Loved every bit of it
Just read all the chapters
Please send me a pm when you will update



Thank you for reading 😊
I am so glad you are enjoying this story.
I will send the pm for future updates 😊

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