OS: The hypothetical conversation at the front door b/w M&A - Page 2

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

Jeez girl, look what you have done..got my stomach in knots😳😳 What pulled me in was his smiles and eyes...the way he stares at her...and the stubble. I mean just looking at him, the icecream in my freezer starts melting 😆😆 A teeny meeny too ripped for my taste..but who's complaining 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

such a nice post

Originally posted by: ajay227

Such a top notch imagination Crayon...2 good 2 handle...Thank you!!!Its just fab...Blushing all d way...

So beautifully written! You're a great writer :)

Oh wow Baisa ! kya likhi toone !
amazing and mesmerizing ! Main kab sey bol rahi thi naa, write something, anything !! lo ab bahar nikli !
Lines are so alive with the characters' own little idiosyncrasies , I actually had the whole scene enacted in my head.
the conversation is so cute and awkward...and sharmana, aankhe churana...the tell-tale signs of falling headlong for a girl !!
yay ! u made my morning bright baisa !

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

Jeez girl, look what you have done..got my stomach in knots😳😳 What pulled me in was his smiles and eyes...the way he stares at her...and the stubble. I mean just looking at him, the icecream in my freezer starts melting 😆😆 A teeny meeny too ripped for my taste..but who's complaining 😆😆😆

oyee Badmas and badtameez ladkiyan !
how dare u guys talk about Azad's too impossible to resist charms without me 😉😳😆

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Oh wow Baisa ! kya likhi toone !
amazing and mesmerizing ! Main kab sey bol rahi thi naa, write something, anything !! lo ab bahar nikli !
Lines are so alive with the characters' own little idiosyncrasies , I actually had the whole scene enacted in my head.
the conversation is so cute and awkward...and sharmana, aankhe churana...the tell-tale signs of falling headlong for a girl !!
yay ! u made my morning bright baisa !

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

oyee Badmas and badtameez ladkiyan !
how dare u guys talk about Azad's too impossible to resist charms without me 😉😳😆

This is all sorts of cute. Thanks so much for this. Had a smile throughout the reading.

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

This is all sorts of cute. Thanks so much for this. Had a smile throughout the reading.

I would like to fwd this to CVs and ask them to include this in their narrative, even as a flashback.

She looks over her shoulder at him, smiles sheepishly

So waiting for this to happen. And then his reaction at her sheepish smile too.