#2-AsYa-FF-Ek Pal Jo Dil Mein Utar Jata hai-ch22-pg#30-28/12/15 - Page 19

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Ek minute! Ye meri jalebi hi hena? Itni long update 😲

Originally posted by: NnonaA

Haan ho tu be bola wo bhi aur nahi bhi
Agay pardho gay tum sab tu pata chalay ga na k dumb kon hai...
Aur zoya ko thorda idiot dikhaya hai but phir bhi aisay hi thordi na chord de gi wo...
Iss liye kyon k ye wo heavy ronay dhonay wale scene, I am like not used to write them so short hai sab...
Wo ye jab complete ho gi phir continue keroon gi...
Mei ne pehlay bhi 10 chapters k bad story form change kiya tha ab realization wala part start ho ga Waisay bhi story ka third and last half start ho gya hai so ending ki taraf hi le ker ga rahi hoon.

Han time will tell par abhi toh mujhe sare dumb lag rahe but specially Zoe kyunki who trust nahi kar rahi AAK pe😕

Originally posted by: jas91

Suri yeh ladki badi chalu nikli😆

1 hi updt ko 6 bar chipkaya hai s ladki ne🤣

tabhi inna long hai main bhi dhokha kha gayi thi😆

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<em>coming 2 updt Nona

can I strandle this Zeenat😡

Kameeni kahin ki Zoya ki shaadi hai ke apni ke itni uchal rahi hai😡

na Zoya ka mayus chehra use nazar aata na Anwar ki phikar

yeh sahi main Zoe ki sagi nahi ho sakti lol🤣

Asad Zoya scene was very touching & heart breaking😭poor babies

udhar Kamina Ayaan shaadi ki han sunk khush ho raha😡

Rashid ki advice bhi unsuni kar di

oh Han Asad Dillu scene was mast😊

over all acha tha but track bura ja raha Zoyaan🤢

exactly 🤣
aj padhi update tb malum pada hahaha
jb res karne aai thi tb to i had to scroll down so much to laga update badi hogi 😆

Originally posted by: jas91

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<div>Suri yeh ladki badi chalu nikli😆

1 hi updt ko 6 bar chipkaya hai s ladki ne🤣

tabhi inna long hai main bhi dhokha kha gayi thi😆

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<em>coming 2 updt Nona

can I strandle this Zeenat😡

Kameeni kahin ki Zoya ki shaadi hai ke apni ke itni uchal rahi hai😡

na Zoya ka mayus chehra use nazar aata na Anwar ki phikar

yeh sahi main Zoe ki sagi nahi ho sakti lol🤣

Asad Zoya scene was very touching & heart breaking😭poor babies

udhar Kamina Ayaan shaadi ki han sunk khush ho raha😡

Rashid ki advice bhi unsuni kar di

oh Han Asad Dillu scene was mast😊

over all acha tha but track bura ja raha Zoyaan🤢

yaar dokha nahi diya mei ne, mei tu update ker k chalay gai thi wapis aa ker daikh k mei khud pereshaan thi k itni long kaisay jo gai
Haan sach mei be story ko beyond repair kharab ker diya hai na
No worries abhi track mei uturn baqi hai meray dost

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

exactly 🤣
aj padhi update tb malum pada hahaha
jb res karne aai thi tb to i had to scroll down so much to laga update badi hogi 😆

Originally posted by: NnonaA

yaar dokha nahi diya mei ne, mei tu update ker k chalay gai thi wapis aa ker daikh k mei khud pereshaan thi k itni long kaisay jo gai
Haan sach mei be story ko beyond repair kharab ker diya hai na
No worries abhi track mei uturn baqi hai meray dost

Awesome Update Nonu

I guessed it zoya is going to make asad regret his decision
Jealousy the mighty weapon

Originally posted by: jas91

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OMG tune check tak nahi kiya😆Bechare hum redaers khaali pili khush ho rahe the🤣

Han jaldi U turn maar Nona warna reader bhaag gaye toh Sue ki tarah dekhti phiregi🤣

hahahaha yeah 🤣 bohat kharab din the wo mere 🤣

Originally posted by: jas91

I know right meko bhi pehle wahi laga tha😆

jab dekha yeh toh wapas chaloo ho gya phir scroll karke dekha toh gina ki 6 times copy kiya isne🤣Maha chalu ladki

haha haan sahi me 🤣