Enchanted - AzMa SS - ch1 - 11/09 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Aahana.

hey you missed out my comment in page 2😭

Originally posted by: Aahana.

res unres hmm azzad is a vampire

ok so he needs the ring to go out in the sunlight

so kb is upset

Is kb positive or negative ??😕

okie they are having telepathic traits😆

And azzad knows daima

mahi's daima

due to some incident in the past

he once saved mahi when she was lost in woods

and he sees colors other then black nd white

he realizes that she is his lifemate

hmm memories racing back to another mortal ??

who ??

so daima knows azzad's truth

and mahi doesn't hmm

he even bit her neck..

confusions arise

if he has bit her neck then mahi should be knowing na😕

or was it just a dream😕

continue fast

Originally posted by: Aahana.

awesome opening

try writing os also😉

looks lik mahira came to know he is a monstor🤢

and she was carrying his child

azzad's child hmm

continue fast

and do pm me😊

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

Res...

Doing this so that I come and comment without fail.😆😆

Unres

Prologue

And the flashback begins. Hmm..*tissues are ready*

"I never meant to hurt you.I didn't think it would come down to this...But, didn't you say you trusted me..that you loved me..Please, I love you too much to see you get hurt..cuz of me"

Awww...he heard his child's heartbeat. So he is a real vampire eh? and not the hybrid type...😆

Yikes...hmm..senti part.

Understanding?? I didn't understand..what happened? What did he realize?

Chap 1

Ohh..so Azaad has a special UV protection wala ring!!SPF 50 and higher? 😆😆😆

I should get myself one too..Will double up as ornament and spare me efforts of actually applying sunblock cream😆😆

Eeew...ok I am gonna think Amaad was drinking cranberry juice.🤢

OMG!! Fuzz..I actually saw the whole Azaad -daimaa in my head- crystal clear ..I could make out all his expressions..Oh well my imagination does tend to roam a bit. But the part was very well written. Why did daimaa ask him to bite her? To ensure her safety?Hmm..so she has been imprinted on him now eh?

Wait..I thought he drank her blood when she was 6...and now she is 21 right..then...

Didn't understand this statement "Reminding him that the last time he drank from her was several months ago."

And the bond gets stronger!!

Intriguing one..well written.

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