Read it first thing in the morning!! And oh my oh my..Dont get offended , but Iiked this chap better than the previous one. And this chap is currently inching its way to the top of my list!!
The scene of Azaad and Mahira was an absolute delight to read.Poor Mahira..what an embarrassing situation to be caught in.
"Azad looked away, her ears and cheek burned crimson" Erm, was this a proofreading error?Instead of Azaad, it shud be Mahira right? Or maybe I got it all wrong...
Swimming? Were there female instructors back then?
Lol..Mahira ..control..control..dont climb in front of him..for he will faint!!
Whaat..and an eyelock already!! Hayee...that was so intense!! Was he leaning in for a kiss? *innocent expression*
Stray locks..*pushes Mahira aside and rushes to play with them*
Feel for Mahira..the poor girl!! The following scene was very well written. Bang on with emotions!! When she looks at her palms..uff...pain was all the more real.
So was he watching her from his wndow above?
But I thought u said he wasn't a virgin.So if the other women died in his arms, when did he lose his virginity?Or did they go after fully enjoying themselves?
Didn't expect him to go clear his stand so quickly. I liked how Mhaira tried to be formal with him leaving him exasperated. Kya timing hai!! On screen Mahira gets to know Azaad's secret..and your Mahira too finds the truth but is yet to comprehend the meaning!!
And the slimeball makes his entry!! The exchange of words between Azaad & Amaad..Shreya..that was excellent!! This may not be the most liked scene..but I just loved it...
And..this is easily my fav chap!! Shorter review than the usual..but I clearly don't have nothing much to add. It was just perfect.
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