SaHil OS: Icy Hot - Page 2

Originally posted by: NanduVijay

It's very very hot. Thank you for the os.

Really amazing.

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil

?!!!?! 😲😲

...

Let me take a little breather...

Unres.

Still taking a breather though..😆

Hope you were able to recover 😉😆 Omg trust me your comment is one of the first ones I look forward to reading! Cuz I know you get why I wrote what I wrote, you get me?!! 😆 Lol I am so glad u enjoyed, I mean liked reading what I wrote 😆 Cuz I had fun (not the icy kind okay!!!) writing it 😉😆 Your comments always make me so happy! (You see how I didnt use the word "excited") 😆

But jokes apart, thank u so much for this lovely comment! 🤗The fact that you take time out to appreciate my work and give such a lengthy and fun comment means so much! I was really busy these past two days, but these comments made me constantly smile! I love your comments just as much as you love mine 😆😳

Eshaaa!!! WTAF?! Lol its just crazy, when we read a piece like that, we start to swear 😆 No really! When you don't have enough words to describe how it was, you swear! 😆

And I totally get what u mean 😉 I wonder if Nawab Sahab swears, you know when he doesnt have words to describe how it was 🤣🤣

But really, it got hot in here REAL FAST! And to mention that, I am sitting in AC, I felt myself heated up and actually sweating! No kidding, its true! And I'll soon be needing a cold shower too 😳😆

I hope you didnt need the ice bucket 😉😆 Trust me we were causing some major heat issues with our paani paani stories being uploaded the same time 😆

Can I just say how perfect the title looked?! The titles of my stories are the ones which take me so long what to choose. The one I am writing, its almost over, but the title man - I changed it so many times, and still not satisfied...I mean from the title 😆😆 The atmosphere is so dirty, everything sounds so dirty, I swear 😆

Idk how this title came to me but you know when you touch ice (not in a naughty way 😉😆), I mean when you hold ice... Okay you get what I mean! But after a while your hands burn a little, so it feels icy hot 😉😆 But I loved your title 😉 It was appropriately dirty 😉😆

I absolutely LOVED the seductress Dhabevaali here! OMG! She is SO HOT! 😆 I love how all of us portray her as such. Is it really her though and HER techniques and fantasies...😉😆 She just can't get her hands off her hot Nawab 😆

We all love the seductress fiery Dhabevaali 😉😆 And so does JJ as we can see 😆 As for the techniques and fantasies, we all know its not all just her 😉😆 There are others dirty minds behind it (ie: us writers 😆) But yes, we all seem to have a bold and innocently beautiful image of her! And its perfect for Sanam! Who would keep their hands of a man like that?!! 😉

The Ice Bucket! Lol Aahil could be so adorable and sexy at the same time! That poolside session? Extremely hot! To be honest, it gave me an idea how the things gonna turn up from then on..😛

Their bedroom session! Damn! I don't have proper words to explain...what was going on there 😆Sexy would be an understatement. Who knew the "heat' could be "cooled down" like this..😉😆

You know I like when ARI gets adorably sexy 😉😆 It all starts from the poolside 😆 And their bedroom is the ground for so many of our- I mean their fantasies 😉😆

God it was so vivid, the explanation and the images of it...it was like I am seeing right in front of my screen, not reading it 😆 Really man! I had to stop a little at so many occasions, to get out of the reverie and actually take a long breath! That was super amazing! And just like SHE said 'It felt so good!" 😉😆 Legit! The feels were too much! 😆

Glad u felt the "feels" 😆 I have to admit when I reread it, it was quite vivid 😆 I am glad I was able to write it like that 😆 Such things need to be vivid lmao 😉

But still, my favorite part of this would be how SHE pleasured him! ☺️That was the sexiest thing I have ever read! Eshaa! You and your little fantasies...😆 Who am I kidding?! I am sure all of us would have thought like this at some point of time..😉

Lmao wasnt that my favorite part too in your piece 🤣☺️😉 And I can see that you already did! Your one also depicted quite a fantasy regarding her pleasuring him as well 😉 Poor ARI 😆

I love how HE wants to be in control, but unfortunately its not possible for him when she turns on like that. I love how SHE wants to be in control, and well, she always succeeds in it! 😉😆

Thats why she is Dhabevaali 😉

I can go on and on about it, but I guess, reaidng it again would be a much better idea..😉😆

Go on, I read your a few times as well 😉😆😆

What a HOT story that was man! I am still fanning myself! You write so so beautifully! Thank you so much for this naughty dose! Was so needed! 😉

Your welcome! And thank u for this lovely and funny comment! I loved reading it! We gave quite a heavy dose with both of our OSs 😉😆

Love you girl! ❤️

Love you too ❤️ And sorry for such a late reply! I read your comment the same day you posted it and I was grinning like a fool lol Thanks for all the love and appreciation 🤗

Originally posted by: -MirchiExpress-

Superb Esha 🤗

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

Amazing Esha! That was cold shower worthy! 😳 I loved it, and loved the fact that they sold IM and brought their dream home. Just like we wanted them to! The dream house they built together. How beautiful it was. But this OS was super naughty and I just loved it. I want so much more of this and many many more OS from you! Please keep writing these, they keep our beloved couple going for us! Thanks for this!

Also, thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Its amaizing esha!
Let me tell u ths os lft me BOTHERD at last!
Blushing hard!Sooo HAWT!uff!its damn good!

P.s-thanks for the index.will b waiting for ur nxt sahil work & pl complete pending sahil stories as soon as u cn.pm me.lv the updts.

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Oh My God! 😲☺️👏

Man, I need a fan in here.. Maybe an ice bucket will do. Damn it.. What was this! 😲Eshaa... You've outdone yourself. The wait for this story was definitely worth it. THIS is so precious and hot.

Ugh.. I'm in a mess. This is so beautiful and passionate.

"Gone were the days when he would get drunk and have ice ordered in a little bucket. All thanks to his Sanam!"

I loved how you took a simple idea and made it magical. Made Aahil appreciate the change in him because of Sanam. The line with the small ice bucket really touched me. Kind of made me go to a heavy flashback of Aahil's transformation.

Esha, I became breathless several times. Like I needed to wait for a few minutes before I could continue reading. Only you have the power of doing this to me. ❤️

"Sanam looked up to see two intense passion-filled eyes stare at her. The same eyes that had the power to simply captivate her. She always told her Nawab Sahab that he had some kind of magic in his eyes. And he always replied that it was only his love for her that reflected in them."

I'm fangirling so hard by these words. So true!

"Aahil slowly undid the dori, and grabbed an icecube in his hand. He held it in his palm, allowing a few cold drops to fall on Sanam's back. She jumped slightly at the shocking sensation. "How does it feel Jaan," he asked after he suckled on a cold spot on her back making her breath hard. "Good" she said barely able to gather her thoughts."

God, this is beyond words. I cannot express how well written the whole thing is. I can clearly picture it before my eyes. ☺️

The scenes from the hallway, pool and bedroom - every single thing is so... HOT!

"Aahil sighed as Sanam ran her fingers all over his back. He took a minute to rest his forehead on her shoulder. Sanam had the ability to arouse him with the simplest of touches. No one else had ever made him feel the way she did. She owned his heart, body and soul! She was his Jaan. His Begum Jaan!"

Reading how they shared a intimate moment together was so beautiful. So touching how they found comfort in their lives. One of my favorite parts were the last scene.. How she had the power over him - with a simple touch. Haayeee...

I don't even know how to express myself properly.. I hope you understand what I'm trying to say. 😆 End note - I freaking love this!!!

Thank you so very much for giving us such a hot piece of writing. I'm so going to read it again later tonight. For sure!!! 🤗