SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#671

Plot ka bolu to it cudn't hv been better
beautiful simple short sombre story
a cute ride of love and trust
i adored the ending superp and simply good

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#672

Asad zoya as true friends wow!
And i love asad's words in the car
he promised and he kept his promise
as u always say
destiny! Zoya ka lock hona and asad ka bachana se lekar imran ka sagai todna aur asad ka determined statement to marry her
u nailed it in writing! Ab ye mat bolna jada tarif ki mene!Dekha jaye to esa grand kuch ni tha normal launguage used as a writer wud do! Bt i always say the only thng in the writing whch stands out is u srashtu
cz wo tune likha and it was magical

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#673

The scenes jst flowed in my imagination
and itna kuch zara si update me summarize karna wo b itna beautifully
i really admire that
meri aankho me paani ajata he padh ke ur one of those writers and m proud to be knw u really
m being honest no chane ke jhaad pe chadaing
i love u and tu discourage mat hona pls
keep writing
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frustrated12233

@frustrated12233

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Posted: 9 years ago

#674

Ur MAI HOON NA is what I was dying to read since agesss!!

Iv asked a writer too bt guess she was busy...

Nonetheless u wrote it evn shared it with us... Thnx a ton dear it was aweeesome...

Suearmaniac i owe you for pming me ths post...no truely i appreciate your efforts.. Thaaank you so much

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#675

Aww thanku for coming here buddy 🤗

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#676

Omg such a huge collection of just asya
I am loving it already
Can't wait to read all of them

Sue, yaar u tu r great
Asya land mei la ker kherda ker diya tu ne
Thank u so much

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: NnonaA
Omg such a huge collection of just asya
I am loving it already
Can't wait to read all of them

Sue, yaar u tu r great
Asya land mei la ker kherda ker diya tu ne
Thank u so much

oye jalebi ye land bohat bootiful he
yaha res karke mat bhaagna jaldi padh saare os! They all are superb
thanks to u for coming here
welcome aboard 🤗

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
oye jalebi ye land bohat bootiful he
yaha res karke mat bhaagna jaldi padh saare os! They all are superb
thanks to u for coming here
welcome aboard 🤗

tu taunt ker rahi...yaa Actually u r taunting
Pata hai mujhay k mei ne teri story ka end abhi tak nahi read kiya but ab aur dair nai keroon gi kyon k ye jo tu ne tanz ka teer chalaya hai wo seedha meray dil mei laga hai 😆

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: NnonaA
tu taunt ker rahi...yaa Actually u r taunting
Pata hai mujhay k mei ne teri story ka end abhi tak nahi read kiya but ab aur dair nai keroon gi kyon k ye jo tu ne tanz ka teer chalaya hai wo seedha meray dil mei laga hai 😆

arey re koi taunt ni tha be jalebi 🤣
meri story chod wo bakwas fir b mere dil ke pas!
Bt read these oses yar
mene li he personal gaurantee
jaldi padh and meri mehrun pari ko khush karde