SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12 - Page 68

Plot ka bolu to it cudn't hv been better
beautiful simple short sombre story
a cute ride of love and trust
i adored the ending superp and simply good

Asad zoya as true friends wow!
And i love asad's words in the car
he promised and he kept his promise
as u always say
destiny! Zoya ka lock hona and asad ka bachana se lekar imran ka sagai todna aur asad ka determined statement to marry her
u nailed it in writing! Ab ye mat bolna jada tarif ki mene!Dekha jaye to esa grand kuch ni tha normal launguage used as a writer wud do! Bt i always say the only thng in the writing whch stands out is u srashtu
cz wo tune likha and it was magical

The scenes jst flowed in my imagination
and itna kuch zara si update me summarize karna wo b itna beautifully
i really admire that
meri aankho me paani ajata he padh ke ur one of those writers and m proud to be knw u really
m being honest no chane ke jhaad pe chadaing
i love u and tu discourage mat hona pls
keep writing
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Ur MAI HOON NA is what I was dying to read since agesss!!

Aww thanku for coming here buddy 🤗

Omg such a huge collection of just asya
I am loving it already
Can't wait to read all of them

Sue, yaar u tu r great
Asya land mei la ker kherda ker diya tu ne
Thank u so much

Originally posted by: NnonaA

Omg such a huge collection of just asya
I am loving it already
Can't wait to read all of them

Sue, yaar u tu r great
Asya land mei la ker kherda ker diya tu ne
Thank u so much

oye jalebi ye land bohat bootiful he
yaha res karke mat bhaagna jaldi padh saare os! They all are superb
thanks to u for coming here
welcome aboard 🤗

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

oye jalebi ye land bohat bootiful he
yaha res karke mat bhaagna jaldi padh saare os! They all are superb
thanks to u for coming here
welcome aboard 🤗

tu taunt ker rahi...yaa Actually u r taunting
Pata hai mujhay k mei ne teri story ka end abhi tak nahi read kiya but ab aur dair nai keroon gi kyon k ye jo tu ne tanz ka teer chalaya hai wo seedha meray dil mei laga hai 😆

Originally posted by: NnonaA

tu taunt ker rahi...yaa Actually u r taunting
Pata hai mujhay k mei ne teri story ka end abhi tak nahi read kiya but ab aur dair nai keroon gi kyon k ye jo tu ne tanz ka teer chalaya hai wo seedha meray dil mei laga hai 😆

arey re koi taunt ni tha be jalebi 🤣
meri story chod wo bakwas fir b mere dil ke pas!
Bt read these oses yar
mene li he personal gaurantee
jaldi padh and meri mehrun pari ko khush karde

GR8 J😊B L👏VE THEM DO C😉NTIUE...👍🏼