Asya TS: The war between COLLEGE MATES part 3 UPDATED PAGE 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyafeelz

OMG 😲😲

I can't believe I didn't read this b4

Actually I read in morning but had 2 leave cuz of some work but when I came back now I saw u added some more scenes & read again
also I noticed u r posting updts on 1st page only why so dear

& May I know ur name as in what should I call u KT?

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<em>coming 2 updt

It was super duper story👏👏

I read d end part

& it was hilarious

I couldn't stop laughing

I was having lemonade & was about 2 cough it out on keybord😆😆

Stayfree in Asad's hands🤣🤣

I buddied u plz accept & PM me 4 nxt part



My name is Kavya..im from Kerala..thanks alot for commenting it means alot to me.hehe...yup even I was laughing while typing it 😆 ...i have added u to my buddy list.will pm u dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its from chocolate movie right?same dialogues...
No problem as I love it...
Staring Prithviraj n Roma as leads..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Arpita--

its from chocolate movie right?same dialogues...

No problem as I love it...
Staring Prithviraj n Roma as leads..

yupz...thanks 4 commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Arpita--

me too from Kerala😉

wow..great..im from kottayam and u?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Arpita--

So Advanced Onam wishes...

same 2 u dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KT15661



My name is Kavya..im from Kerala..thanks alot for commenting it means alot to me.hehe...yup even I was laughing while typing it 😆 ...i have added u to my buddy list.will pm u dear

Hi Kavya nice 2 meet u.😊 U can call me Jas & I m from north India

I saw its a conversion of Chocolate movie well I haven't seen that so 4 me its damn interesting
Keep posting & PMing & Yeah as I said above post new parts in new chapter & not in same place cuz sometimes miss them😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyafeelz

Hi Kavya nice 2 meet u.😊 U can call me Jas & I m from north India

I saw its a conversion of Chocolate movie well I haven't seen that so 4 me its damn interesting
Keep posting & PMing & Yeah as I said above post new parts in new chapter & not in same place cuz sometimes miss them😳

HY,JAs ..thanks alot 4 ur comments ...wll update part 2 by tmrw and ha will update in a fresh page😃...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks alot for commenting and liking my story...
PART TWO A:

Asad: ya allah...ab mein kya karu kis se pucho?ammi bhi kahi dikh nahi rahe hein..allah yeh apne mujhe kis musibat mein daal diya..yaha tho 8 bathrooms hein but sirf ladkiyon keliye...
Yes ,Asad badly wanted to piss ,but no here in this college not even a toilet for boys..

Asad was at the backside of college ,he pulled he sipper down and was about do it when some girls appeared there..he ran from there..He was running here and there to piss.,but to piss him off there were girls everywhere,what will asad do now?

Asad was in a hurry wen tanveer approached him

Tanveer: Asad,kya kar rahe hon?itne pareshan kyu lag rahe hoon?

Asad:kuch bhi nahi

TAnnu billi: Asad aao nah hum coffee pene chalte hein

Asad:abhi nahi tanveer..im busy right now (yeh ladki mujhe jaane kyu nahi deti..1 more min and i will piss on her face😈)

tanveer was about to go when asad stopped her

Asad:woh tanveer ,woh actually,bathroom kaha hein?

Tanveer: ohh tho yahi baat thi.,waha se right,jaldi se jao ab...

Asad was about to enter the bathroom when khushi and ridz came there..and told him its ladies bathroom

Ridz:tum andar nahi jaa sakte hoon,yeh ladies toilet hein

Khushi:haan ,tum kahi aur jake sab karlo.yaha nahi

Asad:tum dono jaldi andar jao aur baki sabko kehdo ki bhaaijaan thoda jaldi mein hein tho jald se jald bahar ayen

Ridz and khushi:okok..just for once ok?

ASAD:OHHHKKK.ab jaldi jaa aur sabko nikalo bahar

ASad pissed 😆and came back to his class ,and was sitting on his chair when zoya and her gang surrounded him

Listen everyone,one special announcement,according to our college circular,every student have to wear petticoat ( shimmy or watever girls wear under their dress)..and we r here to make our new student asad ahmed khan aware of this rule

zoya was standing behind him and suddenly she pulled his shirt up and screamed

Zoya:ohh noo..ya allah..he hasnt worn it..our asad jaan havent wore it...so lets make him wear it

then out of no where tanveer appears
Tanveer:ruko zoya,this is ragging ,i will report it

Ridz:do watever u want,go to hell billi

Zoya: my dear tannu billi..this circular is not banned and not amended so according to our college rules he have to wear it..

Asad:ohk fine,i will wear it but before that i have to check if u all have worn it or not ,ridz kya tumne pehna hein?

Ridz; kya,jao,and she runs from there.,
Asad starts running behind the girls and stops behind zoya ,he quickly picks the petticoat from the tabl shocking zoya

Asad:zoe,im damn sure..aaj tum yeh zaroor pehna hoga ..aur kuch bhi nahi pehna hoga lekin yeh petticoat zaroor hoga..thik hein..mein bhi pehenti hun..soo dear girls...all look at me im going to wear this now


zoya gave him one long petticoat .Asad accepted it from her and pulled his zipper down,by hearing the sound of his zipper ,zoya nad gang turned..

Asad:dear girls,,im ready

everyone started laughing by seeing asad in petticoat only with his socks and shoe on...

Zoya takes her phone out and atarts clicking his pictures..while asad was posing for her...

Meanwhile Tanveer reported it to principle...

Zoya and Asad was called at the princi cabin and both of their parents were also present.\

Asad and ZOya both were suspended for 15 days ..Zoya for ragging a student and Asad for entering girls toilet and for mproper dressing in college

Princi:both of u go n take rest in your respective houses.and according to the rules we have to report ragging to the police so asad hand over me a complaint against zoya

Asad:no mam,police and jail is not for girls like zoya who is from a nice family background ,i dont have any complaint..yeh sirf ek masak tha mere liye..i havent taken it seriously ,so, sorry maam..

Bot came out of the cabin and zoya was walking faster and was i front of asad

Asad:hey u stupid girl,,tumhe kya laga ,mein tumse pyaar karte hun isliye complainty nahi kiya? so let me make it clear ,agar kise aur ne yeh suna ki asad ahmed khan wa ragged by a girl like u then it not so good for my image ,so i didnt give any complaint

Zoya:ohh..tho tum agree karte hun ki my ragging was succesful

Zoya ki papa:zoya,,..stop stop..now we can go home

Asad:dear friend .yeh kab paidha hua tha

zoya and papa turned to look at him,papa smiled at him and zoya glared at him...

AFTER 15 DAYS;

zoya was the first one to reach college..Ridz and khushi ran and hugged her,,zoya saw that college chair woman election was going to take place and tanveer was the candidate

Zoya:yeh tanveer phir se humein kaam dil wane keliye tayyar hoke agayi huna..

Khushi:last year humnein uski kaise band bajayi thi

Ridz :lekin is saal ieisa kuch nahi hoga,she is very conscious

Asad arrived in his bike.

Zoya toldridz to buy a nomination form

Ridz: zoya tum ..really

Zoya:arey ,budhu ,who the hell will vote for me,now just wait n watch wat im gonna do

Zoya went towards asad..

Asad:hello,good morning..MERE DUSHMAN,AAJ MUJHSE PEHLE AGAY ..WAH

zOYA:WOH THO HEIN.
Tanveer to her friends: ab ek bohut hi scene hongi,asad aur zoya ki ladai bohut jld ,,hahaha,,everyone laughed wit her

But shocking everyone and asad ,zoya sat behind asad and asked himto take her anywhere..Asad brought zoya to the backside of college,an isolated area

PRECAP: Asad and Zoya ki COMBINE STUDY 😉




Edited by KT15661 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART TWO a UPDATED ...PART 2 b SOOON
Edited by KT15661 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice
So asad joined the college
Only guy
Haha a correction centre
Love how he said hello my sisters
So he enjoyed ogling some girls
He was ragged by Zoya
Which he agreed willingly to do
Omg the part with asad and the bathroom is so funny
It is totally wrong the school punished him for that it is their fault they didn't provide a bathroom for the one boy they have in their college
So asya is suspended
Aww haha love asad line I am not in love with u make I didn't file a complaint
So now they r back omg Zoya is gonna put asad to run for chairman so all the girls will vote for him
Nice stradegy
Wow she jump on his bike and told him to take her anywhere he took her an isolated area😉
Continue soon

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