COME ON GET HIGHER- ASYA SHOTS- 2nd Final Shot posted 1/08/2015

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
So emotional and painful
Loved it to bits
Pls pm me your works
Would love to read them

Glad you liked it. 😊

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
Even the second part is amazing
Keep the good work sweetie

Aww thanks 😊

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom
Amazing second shot.
Loved it.
It was awesome how they met n fell in love.

Glad you enjoyed it 😊

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome work

Thank you 😊

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile
First of all thanks for continuing... Its really mean a lot..

N what an update... Lovved it...

This part was really cute yaar... Specially asad...awee

The way he asked zoya out ...awee...soon unique and cute...

N our Zoe...oh our shy girl...

Now you will seriously kill me for this...I want you to continue it...once more...

I know you must be feeling like hitting me now...but that's OK...m being greedy now ..but no forcing... Only if you want to...

Anyway lovey one yaar...

Aww glad you enjoyed it. 😆 Ahahaha continue. I think the only way to continue this would be to show shots of their lives leading up to the proposal which could influence what happens after the proposal but I don't have anything planned for that. Whenever I do I will post it here 😊 As it is I already left some of my work hanging in EMA so I have to finish that soon. I really enjoyed writing on ASYA though since they were the first couple I ever had a desire to write on. It was refreshing. 😃 Thanks again for taking the time to read it. 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Mesmerising , Sweet as a Strawberry , pleasure and soothing as a Chocolate , Wonderful work.
Do write some more and PM me also.

Thank you Mayur. If I write more I will 😊

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

First, I am so happy that you extand the story to their meeting, this chapter was terrific as well.

We understand why this two felt attracted to each other, they are gem in heart. I really love how you portray them in the second one. It came naturally between them.

It was only one chapter but full with details about their life, each of them became responsible so early, and life was no tender with both of them, but it didn't remove their humanity, and in this, the chapter was beautiful. A perfect mirror of each other in some way.

I really love it and once again, I appreciate a lot your way to write, you shouldn't stop here. You should write more and more.

Hope to see soon a new story of you here in the forum.

Take care dear 🤗

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

So beautiful dear

Please pm me for ur other works...thanks to rada who told her readers to try ur work...it was a pleasure to read this!

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: radadolcevida
First, I am so happy that you extand the story to their meeting, this chapter was terrific as well.

We understand why this two felt attracted to each other, they are gem in heart. I really love how you portray them in the second one. It came naturally between them.

It was only one chapter but full with details about their life, each of them became responsible so early, and life was no tender with both of them, but it didn't remove their humanity, and in this, the chapter was beautiful. A perfect mirror of each other in some way.
I really love it and once again, I appreciate a lot your way to write, you shouldn't stop here. You should write more and more.
Hope to see soon a new story of you here in the forum.
Take care dear 🤗

You are so so sweet. 😊 Thank you again Rada. I heard you promoted this story in your ff. 😳 That was really selfless and I don't think I ever encountered a gesture like that on IF before. You are a gem of a person. 🤗

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
So beautiful dear
Please pm me for ur other works...thanks to rada who told her readers to try ur work...it was a pleasure to read this!

Thank you peep 😊 Rada is an awesome person. Too too sweet 😊