New AsYa FF - The Girl He Never Noticed - Ch 15(Final) Updated-Pg.121 - Page 86

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

update soon..dear..
sorry for late comment
As I mentioned earlier..was busy with cousins n celebrations..
Loved the part very much
Asad supported Zoya and loved their conversations..
AsYa..❤️
I could say Asad's fairy tale would have a happy ending for sure..





No problem Arpita. Bo totally understand.
I hope you had fun with your cousins.
Glad u liked the update.
Will be updating the last chapter in couple of hours.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

Hi Simran

any chances for update tonight



Yes, I'll be updating the last chapter in couple of hours. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: simran2090



Yes, I'll be updating the last chapter in couple of hours. :)

Okay...
I will he waiting.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

I loved it but i want a update super soon I cant wait for the next update please update soon



Thanks dear. Glad u liked it.
I'll update in couple of hours.
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Posted: 10 years ago


I will in couple of hours :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Manyata5

Zoya confessed!

Beautiful yaar...
He druged her for good or the best...
Amazing yaar..
Cont soon



Thanks
I am glad u liked it.
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Posted: 10 years ago


I will dear in couple of hours.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

👏👏 <font color="#0000ff">HAVE NO WORDS TO EXPRESS...</font>

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Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sruthykarthika

Hi simran. I am sruthy. I'm new to this forum. I just read ur story, you know what i felt first is that i am sooo sad. Because i didn't notice this one early.

Come to story, what i say, i really really really loved this story.i am impessed. The wAy you write MA. Zoya, i adorned her. She made so many sacrifices for sahir. She make sure that sahir became an all rounder. She deserves happines too.
Asad was her first and only love. She lived unmarried these years to look after sahir ,a part of Asad. I am sure she might felt that asad was not soo far from her, becz she has sahir with her.
Zoe's mother was the blackmailer, i knew it when i read about the letters.but i misunderstood that she might be doing this for the sake pf zoe and sahir.
i like the father son duo bonding. Sahir was soo happy. Afterall he got to know about her dad who is his rollmodel. Zoya allowed sahir to go with asas so sweet of her. Now she was in a fear of losing sahir.
Asad was not soo bad Acc to my first impression. He accept sahir. That was great. He was proud of sahir and he thinka zoe is the reason behind his son's upbringing.he wants to change now. And he was fallen for zoe. he tried to woe zpe but he didn't know that she loves him and being a single bcz of him.
As expected zoes mum died. I was heart broken when she said "she don't wamt to die alone like her ammi. she has no family except sahir and she might lose him" iwas litterally crying. She deserves to be happy too like everyone.
I am glad that asad was there for her when she needed support. She made her sleep and in that state zoe confessed
Waw. I know now he will know her love for him. And he will get his answer for"who was he, you love and lost zoya". Who made her heart broken. Looking forward for more updates. And plz pm me if u can. And thank u for giving such a wanderful story.




Thanks for this beautiful comment
Glad you enjoyed reading this story
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Posted: 10 years ago
I came across this story yesterday..
And the only thing I can say is WOW! Its absolutely wow!!
You portrayed zoya's love, pain, care so beautifully..
Her love for asad magnified with the news of sahir being conceived by alia.. Even though he never really noticed her..
But then again he had noticed her.. Just not the way she would have wanted then.. Since he did remember her more than alia ( a girl who attracted him)
And asad.. Ha-ha.. I loved his frustration of not getting the wanted response from zoya.. Which he was accustomed to getting from girls.. 😆
But he did show his concern for her (which reflected his love) when she hurt herself, when she was ashamed of her mom's deeds, when she felt sahir is going away and when her mom passed away.

This is absolutely lovely story.. Please do not end it yet..
For all of her hurt and sorrows.. She deserves some more happy updates.. Please.. 😳
Edited by Divya.S.R - 10 years ago

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