New AsYa FF - The Girl He Never Noticed - Ch 15(Final) Updated-Pg.121 - Page 44

Thanx for previous comment explanation...
It cleared my doubt...

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

Awww you can't stop there.

I love the update

I was not at all expecting a wild party at his house

So it's finally her mother who is f oing all...

Asya fights...

I want more

Pls continue soon..

Thanks for reading and commenting dear.
Will update soon.

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

Dude

Why the intermission?

Now Im massaging my temples

Why would Zoya's Ammi send those letters to Asad?

How did she know?

"But I intend to learn, soon. And someone you keep referring to as 'your son', but who, in fact is 'mine'."

That hurt

Ouch

Prepare for war

I've put Intermission just for fun. I guess I've put it since half the story is done.
Why her mom sent the letters to Asad ...will be mentioned later in the story.
How did she know Asad is the father? Hmmm...well, she didn't know about Asad being the father, when Alia got pregnant but once Sahir grew up to look so much like Asad...she figured it out.
Afterall, she had seen Alia roaming around with Asad in Goa.
I hope this has answered your question, will update soon.

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

The update was just amazing simran

So zoya finally comes to know...its her ammi...its really unexpected for her...her reaction...her state was so nicely portrayed... I just love her character...

Asad...what I say...I don't like his behaviour but I know its story's requirement...now he is ready to accept sahir...

The argument part was just superb...

But its really gonna tough for zoya...

Mind blowing job dear...👏

Continue soon...

Thanks for pm😊

Thank you for such a lovely feedback.
I know the battle ground has been set for AsYa.
Let's see what happens.
Glad you found entire chapter interesting.
Will update soon.

Originally posted by: kaju27

please one request no tanveer plsss...already asad has so many girls

You are absolutely correct...there's no need for another women to come between AsYa. Poor Zoya doesn't deserve any more heartaches. So don't worry no Tanveer or any other women will be making an entry in this story 😊

Originally posted by: geetanjalikh

Awesome update!!!
All the emotions are beautifully written :).
Zoya is a woman with morals and Asad knows that. I think that makes Asad so frustrated. Well, It won't be easy to defeat Zoya or should I say win her.
For some reason I really want Asad to know that he is the sole reason of Zoya's miserable love life 😭 but not from Zoya.
Thanks for pm update soon😊

Thanks dear for such a lovely feedback.
And you are so correct about AsYa. Zoya is a woman with morals and that kind of bothers Asad a lot. I think somewhere he wishes he was like her. It frustrates him that his charm doesn't work on her. One day he'll know the reality...he'll know Zoya had loved him all her life... 😊 and he has to find out this truth from Zoya only because no one else know the truth. She had never let anyone know about her feelings. Thanks again for reading, will update soon.

Originally posted by: ksen

that was an amazing update

it was zoya's ammi who wrote the letters

too bad asad was having a party and enjoying with a girl

zoya's emotions were beautifully written

asya's conversation was very intense

waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

Thank you so much dear for reading and commenting.
Glad u liked this chapter.
Will update soon.

Originally posted by: countingstarz

I don't think Asad has quite figured out the effect Zoya is
having on him, he keeps coming back to her and yet he doesn't know why😆

It's quite sad that if Asad didn't receive those letters,
Zoya would've kept loving him forever and he would've never remembered she even
existed . I honestly think he's being such an ass to her , he better step up his
game . I mean I do understand to a certain extent why he gets so annoyed
because Zoya is continuously pushing him away but I guess he needs to understand
why she's like that.However as lousy as he is as a potential love interest I
think he's pretty great with Sahir , but
I do agree with Zoya when she talked about him throwing parties and sleeping around
, and not being able to feed Venus , jalapeno dip , really ? 😆And he's pretty
much carrying on just like Alia did so he really has no right to judge her cause
it's not like he knew Zoya was coming so
that girl would have been feeling him up even if Zoya wasn't there🤔
.Even if I wasn't Zoya , and saw Asad and the clingy woman licking his ear , I
would want to smack them too , like go get a room and spare us the visuals please 😳😆.
Though it's really funny how he dropped her like a hot potato when that guy
groped Zoya , his nonchalant act fell apart so fast 😛.

Oh and I had an
inkling it was the mum sending the letters ! I figured it had to be someone you
already mentioned , and since everyone else is sadly dead , it only left her
and Mr Sethi 😆.

If Asad takes away Sahir from Zoya , I will hop into the
fictional world and kick his ass😡 . I suppose it's inevitable though, who wouldn't
want their dad to be a famous astronaut .

Loved the update, looking forward to the next ! x Intermission feels like a movie😆

Hey,

Yup! He fed Venus Jalpeno dip 😆

It's funny how he keeps coming back to Zoya's house...he has no work at space center nowadays 😆

Don't be too harsh on Asad. Bi know he's an ass right now but no one's trying to think from his POV.
I will be exposing about him throwing a party in the next chapter...but he is not that bad as it seems right now. First of all, the guy has lived this life for so long and just learned that he has a 16 year old son. He can't change so soon...it will take time. I did mention eatlier that he is going to change his lifestyle once he acknowledges Sahir as his son. He'll become a responsible father. I agree he didn know Zoya was coming and still he was being close to wither woman...that is because he doesn want to show his friends that he has changed. He is trying to keep the same playboy image in front of them.

As you mentioned Sahir going and living with Asad is inevitable.

I've wrote 'intermission' just for fun. Plus, almost half the story is gone. You are right I was imagining like a movie only since AsYa going to battle it out. 😆

Thank you for analyzing so thoroughly and commenting. It really helps me as a writer. Will update soon.

Originally posted by: kobeb

Ohh I lovedd it!!

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: jogicad

superb!!!

exciting...:)

Thank you 😊
Glad u liked it.