New AsYa FF: The Broken Moon(asya lovers peep in:))

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asya7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A
Its looking like a very beautiful story... will love to read more of it ...
Continue soon 😊

Thanks a lot for your appreciation dear. It really means a lot😊

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asya7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: jaanu013
Interesting start...beautifully written.both asad and Zoya were seeing same dreams from years..Waiting for more ...continue soon

Thank you very much for this lovely response😊

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asya7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman
Wow wonderful start..
Continue soon

Thanks a lot 😊

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Abi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Hi Titir dear🤗

another new story🤣

honestly ur new story doesn't bother me

but d fact that u will not updt them anytime soon does

I know u r studying & ur schedule is very tight

than u came here 2 write stories which as much as I love

I want & reqst u ki plz continue wid 1 work 1st

like u said WLOR is only where u got good response so 1st finish that than post new stuff

cuz so many new stories makes us curious 2 read more but as u don't have time u can't do all.

& I also don't want ur study 2 get affected so I again strongly suggest don't post so many new concepts waise bhi by d time u will post part 2 I toh would have forgot d previous chapter so who dubara toh panda hi padega 2 memorize what's d story is about. So pehle post karne ka fayda kya nahi.😊

I think I suggested b4 also again telling if u really want 2 write any concept u like than write & save it already & once its complete post it here. Some writers like Saima di do that or u can write TS, FS or Os's unke continuing ki zaroorat nahi

chalo coming 2 story

it was very interesting & gripping😃

Ur writing & describing a scene is excellent👏👏

both have d same dream where Zoe had seen his eyes so does Asad see his face?

& both wish 2 know who d other person is

yeh toh kahungi nahi ki updt soon😆

cuz I want u 2 finish WLOR 1st as u need time 4 study also

will wait 4 Wednesday 😉😆

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Nice start dear
Both had a same dream which made them restless. Zoya made his eye painting & asad had a Z mark on his hand. Waiting for story to unfold. Update soon plz. Do pm me. Thanks

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

awesome start
felt goosebumps while reading zoya's dream

so both asad n zoya visualize each other in their dreams...great!

continue soon and i hope this'll be a happy ending

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sasir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Awesome...
Very interesting...
But confusing...
Isn't it related to serial...
Is it to tally new concept... Or continuation of Ajmer track... May be asya lost memory...
So many ques...
Hope I will get ans... May be in future