New ASYA TS : Online Love updated part 2A October 2015

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asyakabhidreamy

@asyakabhidreamy

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1021

Originally posted by: azsumay

Ha I am angry with you
You didn't reply my pm usdin
Bewajah mera BP high karwaya tha tumane
I thought you angry with my pm and that's why not updating story😕

loved update that's why I am here
Yeh kya ho raha hai Bhai
Zoya love with asad is it true
Fir aman ka kya hoga
I loved your writing in this story
Conversation was too good
In read I feel Asya loving each other
Zoya feel for asad
Hugs back to you
Stay blessed happy and safe
Lots of love and dua also
I love you so much🤗

Aww thank you sum !!!
Love you ! 😃

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asyakabhidreamy

@asyakabhidreamy

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1022

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome update
Loved it
Asad & Zoya chat session was nice. Aman felt like physco. Someone send her msg, I think it's Aman. Zoya took out all her anger on Asad. He wishes her for her match & told her to let him handle that. Like the picture exchange. Both liked other. Precap was interesting. Asad & Aman fight which I thought after precap. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Wow thanks asif bhai !
It worths to read your comment
I'm so happy u like it 😃

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asyakabhidreamy

@asyakabhidreamy

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1023

Originally posted by: rabiamunawar
Interesting update aman love zoya so much
and now who is this lover boy
hope zoya will win the match
thanks for pm
update soon

Happy to see ur comment baby

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asyakabhidreamy

@asyakabhidreamy

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1024

Originally posted by: aseelashah
Beautiful update dear
Ilove it soo much

Precapp is interesting

pls updae soon

thanks for pm

Thanks lit dear

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1025

very late updt..bt its ok as i get such a sweet updt...

the family scene was sho shweet..

asya chatting was so cute,funny yet lovely..

i hv a gut feeling ths aman is the loverboy..bt lets c..waiting 4 asad -aman fc off..

asya both fall for each othr & strted fantasice of thm with each othr..lol..

btw,zoya hv ths so called bf aman..is really asad hv anyone or asad said tht awayi??

waiting 4 nxt updt.cnt soon.thnks 4 pm.

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asyakabhidreamy

@asyakabhidreamy

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1026

Originally posted by: jas91
res

will read & unres 2morrow

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<em>Hi Gita how r u?

& where have u been?

We missed u re & upar se koi news bhi nahi thi

btake toh jaati

Aww I'm sorry yar
But everything happens so suddenly
Next time I won't disappear like this
Tujhe batake hi jaungi 😆

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1027

very nice update

loved it

looking forward for the next part

thanks for the pm

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1028

res😃

So sorry for the late comment, I was a bit busy . So coming to the chapter first, I wanted to start with the end...

WHAT THE F...

I litteraly jumped from my chair when I read this part, and I had to read it 3 times to confirm. You have to update early, I mean really really early, young lady, because you can't expect from us to stay quiet after what you write.

Oh God, I can't imagine Asad and how his heart will be broken in the upcoming chapter.

Now, I will start by the beginning, it's much better. Their realtion grew up really nicely and their bickering was totally like husband and wife. Those two idiot how can't they see how they are shring more than just a friendship, but I can understand that until nothing was said clearly, you can imagine what you want.

It was also nice to see this new Asad, not like the serial, flirting, funny and cheerful. He even knows and like shayaris, can you believe it? We didn't need to imagine his face, rolling his eyes when Zoya will start with her shayaris.

Their bond are really strong, and you showed pretty well, how they called each other with sweet words, and how they missed each other.

My favorite moment was her dream about him, ouh la la 😳. Naughty girl, she imagine pinky winky thing, that's really so sweet, which means that her body was connected to him and not only her soul.

In the chapter, you describe perfectly the intensity of their relation, and I felt that they wanted to share more but mingled with jokes. This is always the hardest part of friendship, when you don't want to lose this for love. * sigh*

This chapter was again beautiful and really funny, it has everything : romance, friendship, teasing and ...heart attack 😆

I can't wait to see what it's going to happen, Zoya will cross many problems, her boyfriend looks really possessive about her and I don't if Asad will change his behavior. At the end, he never lies having a girlfriend, but I don't think she mentionned about Aman? 😕

Thanks for the pm and again sorry for the late comment .

Take care of you 🤗

Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago