Asya TS 'Unsaid love' Last Part page 13 * completed* - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Thank u😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: anopama

Omg I love this

So asya loved each in college but never said
Some of his friends knew but she didn't and no one knows of her feelings
So she was a behenji and she left abruptly
So now 5 yrs later they r face to face
And the feelings r still there
Asad recognized her from the beginning but her friends couldn't
Her eyes always hers
So he plans to keep up her in India she is not leaving him again
Not this time
So a date Is made she said he can't please her
Baby she will be goo in his hands
As it seems he is smooth with his words
Continue soon


Thanks anopama😛
M so glad that u liked it😳
I just love your review ..thanks a lot🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start
Zoya met her friends after 5 yrs
Like asya chat
Waiting for see their date
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm


Thanks bhai😊
Updating only😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Hii aaroo 🤗

I hope you are not angry with me that i am late.
I don't know how i forgot to read.
Actually i opened your drable vala pm but that was nothing i mean clicking on the links my posts opened.
So sorry for being late.


Hey maggie🤗
No I m not😛 ...it's fine... it's fine..actually that was my mistake
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Coming to the update.

Update was just awesome.
I so loved it yar.
It was similar to YJHD.
But i guess better than that 😉
Plz continue soon teri demad puri hone vali hai 😛


Thanks u ... m so glad😛
YJHD kia his??😳
Aww huggie🤗
Meri demand puri ho gaye😉 updating
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ksen

that was a lovely start

excited for the next part
thanks for the pm


Thanks😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Thank you soo much for the RES* Aroo...😳

It was Nice and very well written part...👏
Glad that we are getting your attention on AsYa* also...😃
Continue soonish...😊


Welcome bhai😛
M glad...thank u
Hehe taunting mee bhai...?😉
Will do today😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Salam my dear lovely and awesome and amazing readers⭐️😃 thank you for your lovely response and yeah one important thing before I update that is I told you guyz before na that this TS is dedicated to my gang (kadoo ..shona ..yoyo ..apple ...mumma ..yashu ..maggie ..srash ...gowtu ...aman ...liyu ...amu api ..aishu and adi..) so yeah other than this today is an important day thay is my apple's birthday so this part of the TS especially goes out to my apple aka jas91🤗

LAST PART

She was going through her cupboard not knowing what to wear when zainab walked in her room 'so someone is going somewhere?' She asked eyeing the room which was a mess now ... zoya giggled 'promise to clean it ami' she said 'yes...you have to for sure...but what's this...where are you going? ' she asked already knowing the answer 'ami..wo..I am ..asad' she didn't knew how to tell her ami that she was going out for a date although her ami is aware about her love but still this was such an awkward situation

'So finally he asked you out?' Zainab asked directly making her blush 'yes but as I told you about him, he kept on playing with his words and can't say it directly...it's been five years and he is still the same' zoya said 'what was his reaction after meeting you?' Asked zainab while zoya took her hand and sat on the bed 'ohh ami...he was quite...he didn't even uttered a word at first but later was better, may be was out of shock and then..' 'then? ' zainab asked 'nothing he messaged me and asked me to go out with him..' 'bus?' 'Yes..bus for now ...now ami please please help me na about what shall I wear?' Zoya asked

Zainab smiled at her daughter and walked to the cupboard taking out a while colour chudidar suit for her 'you should wear this...my daughter will look like a princess' zainab said Kissing her forehead and left giving her time to get ready

Soon she was standing in front of mirror dressed in the suit zainab selected for her, she then applied a little make up and smiled finding herself perfect and just then her mobile rang

Asad
You ready?

Zoya
Yup

Asad
I will be there in five minutes

Zoya
Waiting

Picking her clutch from bed she ran downstairs informing zainab that he will be here any moment and saying bye to her she went outside as he messaged her 'hie' he greeted 'hey' she greeted 'come' he said opening the door for her 'thanks' 'pleasure is all mine' he said walking towards his side, seated in and drove away

'No doubt but someone is looking gorgeous ' he complemented making her crimson red 'thanks' he smiled ear to ear seeing her blush and drove towards there destination



He stopped the car and coming out walked towards her opening the door for her 'thanks' 'looks like with a lot of things what else you have learned is the word thanks' he joked making her look down embarrass 'acha khair leave it lets go inside' he said holding her hand taking her inside ...

he brought her at his apartment where he Is living alone since his parents shifted New York, she frowned as it was all dark 'asad why it is too dark?' She asked confused 'you will know' he shrugged and walking towards the socket turned on the lights...

She gasped finding the hall beautifully decorated and a big screen was set at the front with a couch 'what's this?' She asked 'it's movie time' he said and made her sit on the couch bringing pop corns from kitchen and other refreshment 'wow this all is so perfect. ..' she smiled widely 'I know' he winked 'so what are we going to watch?' She asked taking her bowl of pop corns 'mujhse dosti karoge' he replied bringing a big smiled on her face 'wow asad..its my favorite movie' she said 'I know I know now let me play it'

As the movie started he turned off the lights and sat beside her ...through out the movie she kept glued to It..sometimes laughing over a scene or sometimes crying on some emotional scene, sometime enacting her favorite dialogue and sometime telling him about her favorite places in London which were shown in the movie 'do you liked it?' She asked as it ended unknown to the fact that through out the movie he kept starring at her and didn't watched a single scene

'It was awesome' he whispered , she looked at him and blushed under his intense gaze 'umm what next?' she asked diverting his attention 'dinner' he announced and walked in the kitchen laying the kitchen counter with all the dishes he prepared and set two chairs on the opposite sites of counter 'have a seat' he said as he pulled the chair for her and made her sit 'wow these all are my favorite dishes' she said jumping on her chair 'I know' he smiled 'did you made them yourself ?' She asked unsure

'Of course I prepared this delicious food...you don't know but I had turned itno a perfect cook since ami and abu shifted to New York' he declared proudly and she clapped dramatically making him chuckle

They had dinner and through out the dinner she kept praising the food and later he brought two cups of ice cream from refrigerator 'chocolate vanilla I love it ' she exclaimed snatching cup from his hand and he shook his head on her antics



'Can I have a dance please?' he asked forwarding his hand to her as they finished the coffee, she turned to look at him standing by the railing in balcony 'sure' she replied placing her hand In his and he took her inside and turned on the music ... they danced romantically lost in each other when he called her out

'Zoya' 'hmm' she hmmed in response lost in the beautiful song 'you didn't answered me?' 'About what?' She asked looking at him 'about my yesterday's proposal?' He asked and she blushed thinking about there conversation and how he asked her to be his girlfriend 'it's a yes' she replied hiding her face in his chest 'that means I won the challenge' he exclaimed...she frowned and looked back at him 'what do you mean?' She asked 'you challenged me na that I won't be able to change your answer in a yes' he winked

'Did you did all this for the challenge?' She asked making him aware of the blunder he made by saying what he shouldn't had, he tried to say something but she cut him off 'it's ohk...my mistake I took it all in a wrong way..I should leave' she said in one breath as her eyes moistened, releasing her hand from his hold she turned to go only to be stopped by him

He held her hand and pulled her back 'I thought that you had changed a lot in past five years but I didn't knew that this silliness of yours is still here' he said pointing at hef forehead above her eye 'ohkay I am sorry too for bringing challenge topic here but seriously do you really think that i did all this because of that challenge?' He asked calmly but she didn't uttered a word 'zoya...I am not some crazy who will do all this for just a lame challenge...neither you are some Prime Minister that I will get all your information on internet in just one night' he said as a matter of fact

Holding her hand he took her in his room and as soon as he switched on the lights she gasped 'Asad this..' she whispered scanning the room again and again 'zoya I was never interested in a feeling called love until I met you in college...that time it was just some unknown feeling but as you joined our group you started to make a place in my heart...they all called you behenji for wearing glasses and for wearing shalwar suits and not some western uncomfortable dresses ..but I found you perfect...I felt that you are the right one for me...zoya I had captured all our moments together in those three years with me and had hide them In this room of mine...

This room turned my secret sharer when you left without saying anything...you know I was going to propose you in the farewell of our seniors that year and just one weak before that day you left...I tried searching for you like maniac but didn't found you anywhere but still I didn't lost hope and waited for you...zoya in past five years I had become what was you..your likes dislikes are mine now...every night I had dreamed about you...you were you are and you will always be my first and last love..' he carressed one of her picture in which she was holding a cute puppy and smiling over something

'Zoya I want you to be with me forever..I now want to bring my life out from this room, with you and not with your memories as I want to create more new and beautiful memories...will you allow me?' He asked turning towards her and found her weeping silently, 'please don't cry I can't see tears in your eyes...' he whispered and as he did she ran In his arms surprising him 'I love you asas ...I love you a lot...I love you from the day I saw you...from the day you found the real zoya behind that scared zoya and those glasses ..you were the first guy who called me beautiful...I love you and only you' she confessed

'I love you too' He too hugged her back and confessed kissing her forehead ..breaking the hug he sat on his knees and took out a ring from his pocket... a simple yet expensive ring 'Miss.Zoya Faroqui urf My dear Over Confident Doctor can you allow me to get injured in your love and get admit in that beautiful heart of yours...Will you be treat this crazy for all your life?' He asked making her giggle

'what if I say no?' She asked 'then I will make sure that you cange your answer in yes' he replied back making her laugh 'yes...I can admit you as my personal patient but can you tolerate this crazy doctor for all your life?' She asked 'this one life is not even enough ...I want to stay with a crazy doctor like you for all the lives I will be blessed with' he said with pure love and stood up

Slipping the ring in her finger he pulled her in a hug not even letting the air to pass from between them... 'I love you' both said together and chuckled



He stopped the car in front of her house 'so we are meeting tomorrow right?' Asked asad 'umm why?' She asked acting unaware of reason 'uffu!! Humaira and ayaan are leaving for there honeymoon the day after tomorrow...don't you want to reveal the news to everyone?' He asked 'humaira knows about my feelings for you but I am excited to see other's reaction' she said excited 'everyone else too knows...they were aware and my liking towards you' he said and both of them laughed out a loud 'that means all knows so there is no need to meet right?' She asked

'Not done...we are meeting tomorrow and that's final and if you denied then I will come inside right now and will ask aunty about it' he said pretending to be angry 'this anger doesn't suits you...ohkay we will meet but it's you who is going to inform others about tomorrow's plan...' 'done' 'ohkay I will go now...' 'aren't you forgetting something? ' he asked 'what?' 'A goodbye kiss' he reminded winking making her blush 'close your eyes' she said while he smiled widely before closing his eyes and brought his face near her

She came close and kissing his cheek hurriedly came out of the car 'that's not done' he pouted 'aww save the other one for later' she said winking while he shook his head 'sunu(listen)' he called out as she turned to go 'hmm' 'ami and abu are coming the day after tomorrow as I had asked them so can you please discuss with aunty and inform me that when shall I bring them?' He asked 'any day they want too...' she said and run Inside the house unable to hide the happiness she felt that moment...he too felt blessed and as she closed the door he drove away

Unlocking the door of his apartment as he went in his mobile buzzed

Zoya
'Thank you so much for everything Asad..you gave me the biggest happiness of my life...I will be waiting for uncle aunty at my place'

Asad
I love you

Zoya
I love you two three four and so on... :-D

It was indeed the best day of there life

The End

THAT'S it!!! Thank u all of you for reading it and liking it...hugs🤗

P.s to my SS love is in the air readers' s :- guyz I m sorry for the delay in update but now I am writing next part of the SS only n promise to update it by tomorrow or day after it

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Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
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