ASYA SS:I Forget You Not#2, chp 24 up (05/03/2016),pg 114 (Complete)

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#421

mine

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amazing update

full of asya 😳

loved it choco

zoya's words by letter and than asya hug

asad is so cute here

sorry bohat bolta hai 😆

zoya trusted him

loved their feelings

their kisses and hugs and what not

i was in dream land but stupid cell phone beeped 😉

thanks for pm

update soonish plz

Edited by ashiii333 - 9 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#422

Very nice update

Love asya progressing romance and love

It is an immense intense love

So his ammi is thinking marriage

So asya can't get enough of each other

They can't seem to not spend time with each other so their ammi cam meet

Love the words by Zoya very well written and said

It took asad a far way to his house when it is empty

He was so over taken by love he didn't realize

The passion is too much and it has been suppressed too long

They might explode soon

He wants her she heard him or she ignore him

Continue soon

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#423

love it...

their clossness was awesome..

plz cont soon...

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Sathya

@IamCrazySeven

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#424

it was an awesome blossom chapter

AsYa was too hot ☺️

I loved whole AsYa moments 😳

what is it next...

zoya will ready take a next step to their relationship

and waiting for dillu and zoya meeting also

Looking forward to upcoming chapters 😃

Edited by -Sathya7n- - 9 years ago

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#425

Heyllo Choco..
How have U been...?.
Hahaha...kinda got carried away with the formality...Spare me for that.
Well The update was very Loving , Beautifully written...Soothing ( Sorry copied from your comment on Aapi's story.)..and yes Dreamy..
Dream in a sense...that the words which Zoya wrote in that letter which was a Confession Overdue..from last 3 or more yrs...and going through that pain and living in that agony...then only someone can write such moving words...
Great job..their.
You know in a way This coffee shop romance and Confession near the car..made me remember LOVE HAPPENS...i don't know why...but yes..their in L.H Asad first confessed his love in chapt 8 yaa 9 i guess after a dinner near his car only..to Zoya...though this scene and current scene have no relation..but just remembered that..
And I also want to tell this frankly...it actually felt funny to me that..What Asad was trying to avoid..and what Zoya trusted On Asad..with...Still they did..what they have to do...hahaaha..it is not at all bad...but it was funny...they wanted to avoid it..but got carried away...
Very Good Chapt..
Loved and enjoyed reading it..
Continue soonish...

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#426

Mind blowing! You know this story is really close to my heart...whenever I read it, I feel true love still exists!

Asya...their progress is quite beautiful... How adorable they are when even after being so much in love for so long, they behave so shy

Last part...trust and passion! Awesomely described

Continue soon

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#427

Awesome update
Simply loved it
Both spent time together & share what they felt. Zoya poetry showed her feelings was wonderful. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#428

So everything is sorted between asya

Looking for parents official meeting

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Annie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#429

Hey Choco-chip! Glad to get an update from you! kabhi kabhi tou milta hai waise bhi 😆

I'm in love with this. Like Totally <3 This is so damn BEAUTIFUL yaar! I'm loving how their relationship is processing. Their scenes are just so lovely! Choco chip...you are a very expressive writer :) Thumbs up to you👍🏼 Its heartwarming to see her trust in Asad <3

In short, the update was full on romantic. And I loved the length of the update as well ;) Great going...Now update soon :)

Hope you're well :) Lots of love 🤗

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#430

hey choco🤗
firstly i bow down seriously
how can u write this good
i mean i'm awestruck
and that i love u he said honestly left me teary eyed
i know mai badi senti hu par ye bohat bohat bohat accha tha👏
story bilkul bindaas sahi direction me ja rahi he
and that poetry omg...hawa kar rahi hu me aankho 😆ko...unknowingly i cried like really?
that really connected to me somehow
and it...was best...
i have nothing to say anything more bas yahi
i love you for writing this ❤️