ASYA SS:I Forget You Not#2, chp 24 up (05/03/2016),pg 114 (Complete) - Page 35

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Choco..
How have U been...?
I hope and pray..only the goodest and bestest for U..
Coming to the update...
It was magical...i mean the first para...till the time Rashid interrupts them...it was blissful , beautiful and magnifying...
It kind of ignites this desire in me...that i should also have someone...in life whom i can share and spend such wonderful moments...like how U wrote here in this part...
I loved this update...
Zoya tried to confess twice...are you planning a special confession...yaa a twist...plzz...don't let that be the later one...
Rest...it was such a content and satisfying part...a romantic start to my day...as i am reading it in the morning..first thing..
Thank You for it..
Take care...
And continue this soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

hehe haan esa pehli bar hua he satra athra salo me 🤣
m bindass!
Kal unres karungi ok



Kal ho gaya ab jaldi se Unres bhi karo 😛
Lol vo gana acha hai n from my jaan Salman Khan ki movie
Chalo now Unres jaldi jaldi
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

Awsm update

Superb one
Luvd it
To gud
Thnx for d pm
Cont asap
T.c



Thanks Ammy! Hope you're well 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Hey Choco it's great to see you back with an update..

No not an update but a beautiful and wonderfully written update...

It was written so beautifully...
Trust me I was smiling through out reading it.

Loved rashid's part here..

All of it was just so romantic...
Their first kiss..😳
Their car ride..the wink...the destination...everything ..😃😳

It just brought a smile...



Hey Tehseen, hope you're well yaar.


Aww thank you so much for the appreciation. I will accept it 😳. Am happy you enjoyed the chapter completely. If you enjoyed this then am sure the next one is gone be out of the world for you 😃 have planned more ASYA fornyou all 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: laks_vish

Loved the update...finally she broke the chains she webbed



Glad you loved it 😃. Thanks for reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kashhh kashhh kashhh k zoya bhi confess kartiii !!!!
Kyon nai karwata !!!!* pout*
Zoya seekho.., seekho kuch asad se...
How many tyms he told u dat how much he loves u <3333
Hhhaaayyyeee dat was so so so romantic one choco...
I love love love ittt.., so beautifully written...

Haha yeah rashid z so cool... Loved d part..
I just loved every bit of dis updt..
Par chotu updt laga :-\ kyon !!!!!


So updt next part sooonnniiissshhh
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Ab main kya kahun?

I always thought that whenever asya will confess I will have a lot and lot to say but...

This update made me speechless!

Can someone confess so easily?

Can a moment be emotional as well as magical?

How can two persons read each others thoughts?

And biggest of all...how can love survive through these many years?

Choco!! You have written the true story of love and can't thank you enough for that

And now that they've confessed I need to know how asad's gonna deal with zoya's ammi issue...which is soon going to crop up

Continue soon


Srashti, sweetheart thank you for the wonderful comment. Really, its comments like these that make a writer happy and content.


Now you're scaring me... I really hope whatever I've planned lives up to your expectations.
Thank you for liking it so much 🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Itna bada comment Maine kiya!!!??🤔



Lol haan aap Hi ne likha hai 😆

Acha hai, phir likhna for the next update, I like reading your comments 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Kiss bhul gayi!! It was like asya were declaring their love in front of whole city!!

So beautiful and mesmerizing!
❤️



Am glad ki this felt mesmerizing 😃... I feel am no good at writing intimate scenes 😒
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

Hi choco
how r u?
Ur update r awesome as always
i loved it soo much
finally asad zoya sath hai
kiss was awesome
asad family r soo cool
Waiting for next part
continue soon...



Hey there, am well. Hope all good at your end too 😊

Am glad you loved the chapter and thank you for all the appreciation, it really means a lot 😃

Will update as soon as I have my likes and the chapter is ready 😳

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